1 Falling Star

[synn90210]

hehe i'll join. I hate to admit it but i really agree with Leo.....this just isnt good

[Kal15or12]

Ok I understand that but what can I do to get better?

[synn90210]

spell/grammar check. solves a LOT of problems.....

[Kal15or12]

Ok then I will remember to do double check on my spelling then.

[EmberSparks]

Flaming pitchfork time!!!
(I realised no one is helping her. AT ALL. So stop posting all that bull and give some advice. I'm not going to, btw.)

[Zaylo]

Lets set one thing out here. Leo stop trying to get people to stop writing. There's a difference between criticism and all out insulting someone. All you do is troll the fan fiction section and being your "SUPERIOR" I believe I can be the only one to get you to stop. Leo you have the choice upon clicking the thread, you have no right to insult it so freely then be a grammar nazi.

[bboyz4]

Lets set one thing out here. Leo stop trying to get people to stop writing. There's a difference between criticism and all out insulting someone. All you do is troll the fan fiction section and being your "SUPERIOR" I believe I can be the only one to get you to stop. Leo you have the choice upon clicking the thread, you have no right to insult it so freely then be a grammar nazi.

PWNED
Anyways..
I love the smell of flame wars on topics and now being stopped from someone in authority..
Zaylo has a point Leo.
Stop it with your condescending attitude Leo...
It annoys and hurts people's feelings.
How would you feel if people were doing it too you?
Try putting yourself into someone's shoes.
See how it is like to be teased and annoyed from other people.
Don't daunt people Leo...
You deluge people with your insults and everyone hates that...
There are fledglings out there so just take it easy on them...
Though,that their FF's are negligible,their still new to it.
I know Leo that you will probably rankle others and rebuke them,but just show a prudence manner.
(Will probably edit in the future)

[lolificated]

.

. Period.

in a european website,it's called FULLSTOP NOT A F** PERIOD AND YOU DID 3 INA ROW SO GIVE THE GIRL A DAMN REST

[Kal15or12]

Omg I never thought people would actuly say stuf like that!!!! You all rock!!!

[lolificated]

Omg I never thought people would actuly say stuf like that!!!! You all rock!!!

its totally because you're not a girl

[jonlin]

the sad part is that everything that's wrong with this story is mentioned in at least one of the tutorials that are stickied.

[Kal15or12]

Omg I never thought people would actuly say stuf like that!!!! You all rock!!!

its totally because you're not a girl

lol kinda firgured that

[LeoWu]

Lmao never thought so many people would join
But still. No more flaming now, But Your FF are not the Best I've seen but Really, not the worst.

BTW (You should thank me for getting so much post and popularity on your FF your topics)



Your FF are a bit under average, but i do think you have space to improve. For now
Read some books, Observer each authors style and put together your own.

For now Just cool down. Get better, And then knock me out with your amazing writing some other day.

and probably wont happen...
Ever...
Not to be mean.
But I'm not nice...

BUT YOU CANT DIG YOUR WAY OUTTA THE CONTEST YOU AGREED TO!
Anyways post your first story. Im still waiting.

but hey, She really reminds me of me when I first joined lmao.
I pissed off Zaylo so bad he really just wanted to cut my head off.
And I didn't ever flame at that time.
All i did was what Kal did

"OMG HAHHA I DID MY FIRST FF WHEHEE YAYYYYYY TELL ME ABOUT HOW SHOULD I IMPROVE?
WHAT DO YOU THINK? OMG OMG OMG!! YAYYY WHEHHEH HAAA! "


Too bad i don't piss him off so bad anymore, but it was so hilarious and entertaining.
And yes Zaylo i dont like your FF.

[lolificated]

Lmao never thought so many people would join
But still. No more flaming now, But Your FF are not the Best I've seen but Really, not the worst.

BTW (You should thank me for getting so much post and popularity on your FF your topics



Your FF are a bit under average, but i do think you have space to improve. For now
Read some books, Observer each authors style and put together your own. :)

For now Just cool down. Get better, And then knock me out with your amazing writing some other day :)
and probably wont happen...
Ever...
Not to be mean.
But I'm not nice...

BUT YOU CANT DIG YOUR WAY OUTTA THE CONTEST YOU AGREED TO! :)
Anyways post your first story. Im still waiting. :)

what have you done with Leo

[LeoWu]

Lmao never thought so many people would join
But still. No more flaming now, But Your FF are not the Best I've seen but Really, not the worst.

BTW (You should thank me for getting so much post and popularity on your FF your topics



Your FF are a bit under average, but i do think you have space to improve. For now
Read some books, Observer each authors style and put together your own. :)

For now Just cool down. Get better, And then knock me out with your amazing writing some other day :)
and probably wont happen...
Ever...
Not to be mean.
But I'm not nice...

BUT YOU CANT DIG YOUR WAY OUTTA THE CONTEST YOU AGREED TO! :)
Anyways post your first story. Im still waiting. :)

what have you done with Leo

they didn't do anything. Its just that when i saw your face it made me feel so bad for everyone that I decided I wanted to be nice for once. Please please please, when your post At least make it so it makes sense not like someone edited it
and you took your crap and wiped it all over the post.
Give me the best you got Buttface.

Oh yea DON'T EVER CORRECT ME AND TELL ME I NEED A PIEROD AT THE END OF MY SENTENCE IF YOU NEVER PUT ONE.
RIGHT AND A Capital Your brain is like a pea-size.

[synn90210]

the sad part is that everything that's wrong with this story is mentioned in at least one of the tutorials that are stickied.

you know i was just thinking the same exact thing....

[LeoWu]

the sad part is that everything that's wrong with this story is mentioned in at least one of the tutorials that are stickied.

you know i was just thinking the same exact thing....

Yea, That's why the Hurtful truth is that this FF Is bad.
or in other words REALLY need to improve.

[lolificated]

Lmao never thought so many people would join
But still. No more flaming now, But Your FF are not the Best I've seen but Really, not the worst.

BTW (You should thank me for getting so much post and popularity on your FF your topics



Your FF are a bit under average, but i do think you have space to improve. For now
Read some books, Observer each authors style and put together your own. :)

For now Just cool down. Get better, And then knock me out with your amazing writing some other day :)
and probably wont happen...
Ever...
Not to be mean.
But I'm not nice...

BUT YOU CANT DIG YOUR WAY OUTTA THE CONTEST YOU AGREED TO! :)
Anyways post your first story. Im still waiting. :)

what have you done with Leo

they didn't do anything. Its just that when i saw your face it made me feel so bad for everyone that I decided I wanted to be nice for once. Please please please, when your post At least make it so it makes sense not like someone edited it
and you took your crap and wiped it all over the post.
Give me the best you got Buttface.

Oh yea DON'T EVER CORRECT ME AND TELL ME I NEED A PIEROD AT THE END OF MY SENTENCE IF YOU NEVER PUT ONE.
RIGHT AND A Capital Your brain is like a pea-size.

well duh you're jealous of my beauty its ok, you'll get trough it

[pvtsharp]

Well, the immature kid 'round here is leowu

psst, flamer

[lolificated]

Well, the immature kid 'round here is leowu

psst, flamer

he probs flames here to get over his father's abuse