Cyber Terror Chapter 1

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Cyber Terror Chapter 1

Post by Dracoplasm » Tue Jan 26, 2010 6:08 am

Draco was surrounded by blobs of Unidentified beings ,Draco knew
fighting them all is suicide and if he did not die, he would probably
die of using up his powers.


He somersalt kicked 3 blobs, grabbed one of them and threw it at the
another 3 behind him.More Blobs were replacing the dead ones,they knew
very well that he could not fight them all.Draco stepped onto the blobs
and ran on them as if he was running on a wall.He suddenly felt a heavy
object pushing him down onto the ground,it was one of the blobs.Draco
closed his eyes awaiting for his death for the force of the power is
too powerful to overcome. The blob threw a rusty yet sharp sword at
him laughing in a weird language , "h@h@h@h@h@h@h@h@!!!11111
"Clang!"a sound was made by something moving.Draco opened his eyes
and saw a Hermit with illbis,"Thanks whoever you are."said Draco.
Draco look doubting at the hermit and said,"How many do you think you
can handle hmm?"

The Hermit replied ,"Enough to get us out of this shit!"and he used
a skill that has a shadow right behind him and does whatever he does.
The hermit threw stars and more stars at the blobs,but the blobs seem
to be infinite.
A blob appeared infront of the hermit and he tried to throw a star at
the blob, but he was out of stars to throw,"Oh F---..."said the hermit
the blob suddenly turned into water and Draco was right behind and
said,"Lets go!I can't be covering your ass all the time!"
Draco pulled at the hermit and dashed and jumped,he did a somersalt in
mid air and stepped on the blob's head.


Kerning City,Day 2




The hermit asked Draco,"What the hell was those things back there?"
"Those are viruses,"said Draco while wiping his Knuckles "Those are
living computer viruses,they are a big threat to us as they could
easily over us humans."
"Yes and we need the anti virus for the viruses or we're doomed"
said a voice.
The hermit asked looking around,"Who the hell talked? Who are you?"
"I am C-4PwnsYouAll,I am weapon Draco is holding." said the mysterious voice.
The hermit said looking at Draco,"So you're Draco huh?Well my name is Gator."
The mysterious voice said again,"Well we should probably get back to base."
Draco replied,"Agreed,I'm calling up base.This will take a second"
Draco said to the radio,"Hello this is Draco ,I repeat this is Draco
I am coming back to base."
A lousy and fading transmission was heard,"Y... H...ve... to... h..l... u...
Come h----."
Draco said while he stood up and put on his coat,"Base will be needing
us,their in trouble so I guess ill be using the Base Scroll.".
When Draco used the scroll called "Base Scroll",a bright light surrounded
us and saw angels coming down, and suddenly we are in the Base."
"HOLY SHIT,"Said Draco punching at 2 blobs."Base is under attack!We'll have to defend it!"
"I'll Set up Sentry guns to help us for this."said C4-PwnsYouAll.
Draco punched and kicked at one of the blobs and said ,"This is only the entrance ,
we'll have to get to the next room,we will have better defence there!"
Gator said,"But won't that be risky?",
Draco threw the blob at 5 other blows knocking down a row of blobs and downed 8 of them
and said,"It's worth a risk!Its better than staying here and getting your ass whooped!"
He Uppercut a blob,somersalt kicked it and it crashed into another blob."I'll take
care of this!Get to the next room quick!"
Gator then replied,"But-----"
Draco interrupted and said ,"GO!Before there are too many of them!".
After Gator left the room Draco asked his Knuckles,"You ready C-4PwnsYouAll?"
It replied,"Heh You're gonna use it aint you?"
"You bet."said Draco while charging up his power.

Base- Main Room

Suddenly appeared a giant blob,that looks like he was the original Virus"
Gator stared at it,"Oh... My... God...."

To be continued

Sorry Gator but can i put you as a hermit? D;
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Re: Cyber Terror Chapter 1

Post by EmberSparks » Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:50 am

7/10.
H@H@H@H@H@?
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Re: Cyber Terror Chapter 1

Post by pvtsharp » Sat Jan 30, 2010 2:24 pm

when can i be in it? (skygar9-5)
*counting odds*

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Re: Cyber Terror Chapter 1

Post by synn90210 » Sat Jan 30, 2010 2:25 pm

its not terrible....just too many blobs of text....7/10

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Re: Cyber Terror Chapter 1

Post by Dracoplasm » Mon Feb 01, 2010 6:06 am

synn90210 wrote:its not terrible....just too many blobs of text....7/10


lol thats the main thing bout Fanfics you gotta start reading blobs of text
and omfgzorz!!
i got 2 7/10
thanks guys *sniff sniff* (skygar9-5)

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Re: Cyber Terror Chapter 1

Post by Zaylo » Mon Feb 01, 2010 3:45 pm

Dracoplasm wrote:Story Here.
Too much L33t speak, i hate that.
Grammar Errors
Spelling Errors
Low Description


This is honestly messed up.

2/10

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