Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

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Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:44 am

*First chapter,pvt pushed me into it for chapter 5 of his ff*

"Father,where are we heading?" asked Yuumen,a young girl.She didn't look human though,she had wings and a tail.

"You'll see," said a old man beside Yuumen and her dragon,Zema.Yuumen moved her head beside Zuma's.

"Father,whats that?" asked Yuumen,looking at her father.Her father looked where she was pointing.He realized danger.

"Yuumen,turn Zema around,and go home," said Yuumen's father.He pulled out a weapon.Yuumen obeyed her father,and turned Zema around.

Yuumen walked around and played with Zema."Zema,when will father come back?" asked Yuumen.

"I don't know,little one," said Zema.Yuumen can tell she was thinking something.

"Zema,what are you thinking?" asked Yuumen,wondering about her father.

"Nothing you should worry about.Its time for bed,too.Come on," said Zema,pushing Yuumen a little.Yuumen walked to her bedroom.

"Good night,Yuumen," said Zema.

As Zema went into her room,she was thinking many thoughts.He pulled out a weapon,could he be...Dead? wondered Zema.

No!Don't be thinking that!Old man Olo would never fail in battle! thought Zema.She then set out to the place where Yuumen and her were told to turn around.


A few hours after Zema set out,she found the place.To her horror,there was Olo,face down on the ground,sword in hand.His dragon was nowhere to be found.

"Oh no,he sacrificed he life because dragon hunters were heading towards us!" said Zema.She tried to revive him,but it was no use.

"Zem..a?Is that..you?" said a voice.Zema looked down.

"Olo!" said Zema.She rushed over to Olo.

"Ca..n..You...take...ca..re..of..Yuu..men..for...me?" said Olo,in pain.

"I will take care of her," said Zema.

To be continued....
It was sudden,and I wasn't ready,so its short.
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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by playa4life01 » Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:47 am

so zema is a talking dragon ?? (F6)

hmm i liked it sort of

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:48 am

Didn't you read my example?
That was my character and dragon.

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by playa4life01 » Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:55 am

nope didnt read ur example or w.e.,
but i just liked this one , so i started reading
sry for liking it (F6)

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Jan 02, 2010 4:11 am

.........
What the heck?

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by playa4life01 » Sat Jan 02, 2010 4:14 am

ugh nvm,
i get it,
yuumen is the owner of the dragon 'zema'
and yuumen is just a chick ??
am i rite
am i rite ??

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:54 pm

Since this is Yuumen's past,she is young,but is older soon.
Zema is a dragon who can talk and do many other things.

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by Dracoplasm » Sun Jan 03, 2010 12:45 am

XD
Wow But its your very 1st fan fic rite?
still think its great for a starter =D

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by MsMeowzers » Sun Jan 03, 2010 12:59 am

2nd fanfiction.
Post too short (F3)

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by Dracoplasm » Thu Jan 07, 2010 2:47 pm

Well its still great for a 2nd fanfic writer o.o

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by Gatorade » Mon Jan 11, 2010 11:59 pm

lawl where am i (MS5)
anyway 10/10 (heart)

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by MsMeowzers » Tue Jan 12, 2010 12:00 am

MUST I TELL PEOPLE TO WAIT?!
First two chapters will focus on Yuumen.
Then entrys will start.Ember's replacement (Reiru instead of Reimu) will come first.

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by Gatorade » Tue Jan 12, 2010 12:01 am

What chap. am I on? (cool)

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by MsMeowzers » Tue Jan 12, 2010 12:02 am

Chapter 5,since your entry is currently the last.

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by EmberSparks » Tue Jan 19, 2010 3:24 am

MsMeowzers wrote:MUST I TELL PEOPLE TO WAIT?!
First two chapters will focus on Yuumen.
Then entrys will start.Ember's replacement (Reiru instead of Reimu) will come first.

Yeah! Love conquers all! *cough*
I liked it... but watch out for Leo.

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by MsMeowzers » Tue Jan 19, 2010 9:12 pm

EmberSparks wrote:
MsMeowzers wrote:MUST I TELL PEOPLE TO WAIT?!
First two chapters will focus on Yuumen.
Then entrys will start.Ember's replacement (Reiru instead of Reimu) will come first.

Yeah! Love conquers all! *cough*
I liked it... but watch out for Leo.

I'm going to ask someone to take care of him for me,muhaha...
Anyways,Reimu going anyways.

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by chobbilight » Thu Jan 21, 2010 9:12 pm

i bet my char is gonna be left out huh?

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by EmberSparks » Fri Jan 22, 2010 3:33 am

chobbilight wrote:i bet my char is gonna be left out huh?

/deleteffentry

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by MsMeowzers » Sun Jan 24, 2010 1:15 am

Everyone who BEGS to be in (Like playa if he enters) shall be rejected.
I won't tolerate Impatience.

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 1

Post by EmberSparks » Sun Jan 24, 2010 6:56 am

MsMeowzers wrote:Everyone who BEGS to be in (Like playa if he enters) shall be rejected.
I won't tolerate Impatience.

I love youuuuuuuuuuuuu

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