NoobStory(Pt.2)

[skygar9]

the continued part of NoobStory... remember last time? He had just arrived at Lith Harbor.

"Ah, Victoria Island. What a wonderful place!"

The noob jumped off the ship, and met with Olaf.

"Why hello, there! You must be new. If you're interested in jobs, then what would you like to be?"

"A warrior!! A warrior who kills snails and-" Olaf interupted him.

"Er-- A warrior, great! You must have 35 Str in order to advance as a warrior. And you must be level 10."

"Ok, time to go to-" Olaf interupted him again

"Perion! Meet with Dances With Balrog at Perion!"

"Ugh. This guy keeps interupting me!" The noob thought.

Just then, a lightbulb appeared above him.

"Someone in MapleStory would like to send you a message!" The noob accepted. "Hello. I am the Maple Administrator. Would you like to be teleported to Dances With Balrog right now?" The noob accepted.

"Wow, I'm here in the warriors shrine!" The noob said.

"So, you want to be a warrior?" Asked Dances With Balrog.

"Yes yes!! I currently have 24 Str. And I'm level 7. So make me warrior when I'm level 10, k???"

"Er, yes. Hm, you seem to lack power, but as soon as you are a true warrior, you will show your TRUE power."

"What the heck does that mean? Hm, well, I guess I gotta go train.

He trained on stumps near Perion.

"We meet again, stump!!!" He had killed the stump in a few hits- Unlike when he was on Maple Island.

At level 8, he had 29 Str. Then at level 9, he had 34 Str. One more level and he'd have enough Str to be a warrior!

"All this training is tiring me!" Just then, a person stood behind him.

"Um, here are some apples that I still have from Maple Island. Want them?" The person asked

"OMG TY!!" The noob replied. He greedily snatched the apples from the other person's hands and ate all of them to the core.

Finaly, after training for at least an hour, the noob finaly made it up to level 10. He had 39 Str.

"YAYAYAYAYAYY!!!" He spoke with Dances With Balrog and had advanced into a... Almost true warrior. He bought equips for level 10 warriors. He bought a Wooden Buckler Shield and a Beginner Warrior Sword.

"I am a true warrior!" he wasn't realy a true warrior. He was only level 10. His first skill point was put in Power Strike.

Then, he went to Ellinia to train. Then, he found a ship at Ellinia. He thought that the ship would take him to a better training place.

"This is gonna be soo cool! I get to kill newer monsters!"

As the ship started moving, the noob got more and more excited.


Part 3 is coming soon =O what are your opinions on this one?? ._.

[Zaylo]

its ok but if I wanted a flash back of my lower levels I'd go make a page

[synn90210]

meh....it was okay....i guess. things move way too fast though. Slow down and put more thought and effort into it and it would be more worth reading. Fill out the story more too. Add a tragedy or love interest maybe a rivalry or arch enemy. something to at least try to hold my attention.

[LeoWu]

Umm, The Story is ok.

[skygar9]

=O it IS going alot faster. I need to make things more interesting

[jonlin]

ummmmm yah, zaylo? just no.

pretty good story but don't write that olaf interrupts him in the same paragraph as him talking, put that in the next paragraph

[chobbilight]

we meet again stump
lolz.....and 2 be honest this is kinda slow...and in pt 1 it said he had 30 str and now he has 24 str