G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
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It was a cloudy day. Two rough-looking men cornered a white-haired man in an alley. The white-haired man, who was wearing a tuxedo, searched desperately for a way to escape.
"Heheh.... you rich people don't give a **** about us street urchins," said the fat man, holding a large knife in front of the white-haired man.
"P....Please......" panted the white-haired man. "I can give you all the money you want...... just leave..... me alone....." he pleaded, looking around for a weapon.
"We don't want your money, idiot," said a tall street urchin. "We want your life!"
The tall one charged towards the white-haired man, holding a huge Coconut Knife. "Double Stab!" he cried, as the dagger pierced through his body. The white-haired man let out a cry of pain as he fell to the ground where he lay motionless.
"He's dead," said the fat street urchin.
"That's weird. Why isn't there any blood coming out from his wound?" said the tall street urchin.
"Do you know why?"
The street urchins gasped as the white-haired man rose to his feet. There was no sign of blood anywhere on his body.
"How.... how did he......" stammered the fat street urchin.
"Time for me to return the favor........" muttered the white-haired man, as he lunged towards the street urchins, the dagger still stuck in his chest.......
To Be Continued
Please comment. I know it's short, but hey, this is just the prologue......
viewtopic.php?f=18&t=4773
It was a cloudy day. Two rough-looking men cornered a white-haired man in an alley. The white-haired man, who was wearing a tuxedo, searched desperately for a way to escape.
"Heheh.... you rich people don't give a **** about us street urchins," said the fat man, holding a large knife in front of the white-haired man.
"P....Please......" panted the white-haired man. "I can give you all the money you want...... just leave..... me alone....." he pleaded, looking around for a weapon.
"We don't want your money, idiot," said a tall street urchin. "We want your life!"
The tall one charged towards the white-haired man, holding a huge Coconut Knife. "Double Stab!" he cried, as the dagger pierced through his body. The white-haired man let out a cry of pain as he fell to the ground where he lay motionless.
"He's dead," said the fat street urchin.
"That's weird. Why isn't there any blood coming out from his wound?" said the tall street urchin.
"Do you know why?"
The street urchins gasped as the white-haired man rose to his feet. There was no sign of blood anywhere on his body.
"How.... how did he......" stammered the fat street urchin.
"Time for me to return the favor........" muttered the white-haired man, as he lunged towards the street urchins, the dagger still stuck in his chest.......
To Be Continued
Please comment. I know it's short, but hey, this is just the prologue......
Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
Nice!!!
Anyway am i gonna be in it?
Anyway am i gonna be in it?

- EmberSparks
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Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
Soon, my friend.....
Soon.....
This FF chronicles the history of G.R.A.V.E and its legendary hero, Kibagami Hikaru.
Soon.....
This FF chronicles the history of G.R.A.V.E and its legendary hero, Kibagami Hikaru.
Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
Ummm
Ok.
Could be more smooth.
Alot more
O_O
Ok.
Could be more smooth.
Alot more
O_O
Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
EmberSparks wrote:For those who don't know what I'm talking about or those who wanna join, here's the link:
viewtopic.php?f=18&t=4773
It was a cloudy day. Two rough-looking men cornered a white-haired man in an alley. The white-haired man, who was wearing a tuxedo, searched desperately for a way to escape.
"Heheh.... you rich people don't give a **** about us street urchins," said the fat man, holding a large knife in front of the white-haired man.
"P....Please......" panted the white-haired man. "I can give you all the money you want...... just leave..... me alone....." he pleaded, looking around for a weapon.
"We don't want your money, idiot," said a tall street urchin. "We want your life!"
The tall one charged towards the white-haired man, holding a huge Coconut Knife. "Double Stab!" he cried, as the dagger pierced through his body. The white-haired man let out a cry of pain as he fell to the ground where he lay motionless.
"He's dead," said the fat street urchin.
"That's weird. Why isn't there any blood coming out from his wound?" said the tall street urchin.
"Do you know why?"
The street urchins gasped as the white-haired man rose to his feet. There was no sign of blood anywhere on his body.
"How.... how did he......" stammered the fat street urchin.
"Time for me to return the favor........" muttered the white-haired man, as he lunged towards the street urchins, the dagger still stuck in his chest.......
To Be Continued
Please comment. I know it's short, but hey, this is just the prologue......
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Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
now som1 should make a comic out of these



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Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
Wow can i join????
If can tell me and i pm you with cha details~
If can tell me and i pm you with cha details~
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Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
pvtsharp wrote:Wow can i join????
If can tell me and i pm you with cha details~
Hmmmm........ I'll have to squeeze you into the plot because I've figured it out already......
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Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
add meh in add meh in XD
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Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
Dracoplasm wrote:add meh in add meh in XD
You'll be the evil spammer

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Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
can i be the bad guy ?? i mean the bad guy bad guy
my secret wpn is the evil spammer
my secret wpn is the evil spammer

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Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
I dont see how I'd fit in...
Well,if a coder/computer nerd was needed,Id be perfect.
Well,if a coder/computer nerd was needed,Id be perfect.
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Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
MsMeowzers wrote:I dont see how I'd fit in...
Well,if a coder/computer nerd was needed,Id be perfect.
maybe iff they made a part where the guys needed to find a vampire
so they ask the help of a coder/ computer nerd to locate him ??

Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
can i be the technician in the G.R.A.V.E hq cause im good with computers
can i please


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Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
I already asked.
Besides,do you know what coding is used for Chatbots?
I do.:3
Tell me and I'll back off.
No google.
Besides,do you know what coding is used for Chatbots?
I do.:3
Tell me and I'll back off.
No google.
- Dracoplasm
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Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
Pro Peoples Wish i was j00 guys lol
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Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
watching these guys make me realise that sometimes i did good things in my life
but when i watch the other kids like i can do this, i can make comix this that , i realise i suck at my life =D
cuz iunno i just sux ??
but when i watch the other kids like i can do this, i can make comix this that , i realise i suck at my life =D
cuz iunno i just sux ??

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Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
Don't squabble over who's gonna be in it.
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Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue
lol ok and yay im in G.R.A.V.E Ch 2 XD
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i still think that that is mapledraco 
