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Preist's Legacy

Post by 1LastBreath » Sat Dec 05, 2009 6:29 am

"Hi,my name is Adam i'm a regular kid just hanging out everyday at school and after school with my friends". One day on the way to school I saw a little kid and he was like not even 8,but he was just sitting there staring deeply at me and he whispered" what will you do when they come"? I felt frightened, I didn't know what was happened just a second ago I was walking by some kid, now I feel some dude is gonna get me and kidnap me. I forgot the kid and when I got to school I met up with my girlfriend Marissa. She said" Hey,did you see that ki...". I was confused she just stopped. I was waving my arms wildly in her face wondering what was wrong. Then,my cellphone rang and the husky voice said" if you want to know what's going on come to Ellinia". He hung up and I pulled Marissa along. I asked for two tickets to Ellinia and hopped on the train and Marissa snapped out of her daze and said"Adam we have to go to Ellinia to see what's going on". I replied"I know some guy called me on my cell". Just then we had arrived in Ellinia and we walked around asking people to check what their voices sound like. While I was talking to people Marissa was looking at a giant looking tree house thing and pulled me up the hill. When we walked up to the large,wooden door a man opened the door with a husky voice he said "Welcome to Ellinia, I'm Grendel The Very Old". I just looked up at him and stared up. I said to Marissa" I can't believe it's Grendel I've wanted to meet him but i didn't get the chance because we live in Henesys".

Grendel invited us in and I glared wide-eyed around the long corridors and the pictures of great mages and one that caught my eye was StarLightzz a great mage and under her name it said"Alexis". I asked Grendel a question"Grendel how do I become a mage"? He replied joyfully"well, you could join right now if you want we need your help with something". I followed him along with Marissa and he led us into a room where it looked like his office type thing. He said"evil monsters or minions of Mang have been wreaking havoc on innocent towns because he thinks he can do whatever he wants". I said"are you sure we'll have enough training for this"? He said "well, I have brought a special trainer". Then,as he said that a girl walked in her name was Alexis just like the picture. I was right it was Starlightzz the great mage. She said" Hi Grendel what's up"? He said"guide these two to the armory and get them like preists in a 200-hour period". She said"Okay,guys lets go suit up". She lead us to the armory and had us get the beginner stuff an two oak staffs and two red mage robes and we went into the arena. As we trained we got better and got cooler stuff and in the hours we've been training we got to preist level. We were full-fledged preists and now we got to pick new stuff. I picked a celestial staff,a heart t-shirt,jeans,and a pair of sneakers. Marissa got a celestial staff also, a pair of star overalls with some sneakers. We were ready to go out and face Mang. Alexis, Marissa, and I were going to Sleepywood to the heart of the mine to face Mang's minions.

When we got to Sleepywood we headed straight for the mine and let me tell you it was not easy. Zombie Mushmom's Cold Eyes , and Balrogs were coming at us non-stop. When we got to the heart of the mine we found Mang and he was putting his finishing touches on his boss monster. He said as he spotted us"Hahahaha you have fallen in my trap prepare to be terminated by Horntail the boss of all time"!!!!! I was scared knowing Horntail was a strong boss from the real Horntail. I figured out this one was a fake because it was wired on the inside when I zapped of it's arm. It didn't take us long to defeat it but then we noticed that Mang had gotten away and we were on our way back to Ellinia to report our status to Grendel. We got there and told Grendel but Grendel has already found his new whereabouts.



Find out what happens next on Preists Legacy Chapter Two coming out on December 18th 0r 19th!!!!!!!!

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Re: Preist's Legacy

Post by synn90210 » Sat Dec 05, 2009 6:30 am

wtfits? (means wtf is this s**t) seriously what? i could barely read it....sooooo many errors....

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Re: Preist's Legacy

Post by 1LastBreath » Sat Dec 05, 2009 6:38 am

Well sorry but i tried my best??!?!?!??!

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Post by LeoWu » Sat Dec 05, 2009 8:40 am

I admire your Determination though.
Good stuff comes from Trail and error.
You've Definatly Improved.
Don't go Flaming him Synn.
Much better than before.
Hope to see chapter 2 up soon. :)

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Re: Preist's Legacy

Post by EmberSparks » Sat Dec 05, 2009 9:32 am

Wow, something positive from LeoWu's mouth for a change.

Nice try, but use spelling check next time (you spelled Priest wrong).
Keep it up!

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Post by synn90210 » Sat Dec 05, 2009 2:59 pm

LeoWu wrote:I admire your Determination though.
Good stuff comes from Trail and error.
You've Definatly Improved.
Don't go Flaming him Synn.
Much better than before.
Hope to see chapter 2 up soon. :)


hah wow......"Don't go Flaming him Synn" you've flamed every other writer on here that isn't like writing jesus

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Post by 1LastBreath » Sat Dec 05, 2009 4:19 pm

Thanks Leo chapter two will be coming out when I go to my moms on December 18th

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Re: Preist's Legacy

Post by LeoWu » Sat Dec 05, 2009 6:17 pm

yea I Flame Noobs.
But you cant really call this guy
and "Noob"
anymore.. :P

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Post by 1LastBreath » Sat Dec 05, 2009 6:25 pm

Yay no more noobing for meh but I have one request does anyone want a part in the next chapter

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Post by LeoWu » Sat Dec 05, 2009 11:50 pm

Name. Leo Trifecta.
Job: Night lord.
Personality: Can be nice and can be mean.
Poor, but very Talented with potential.
nomal looking,
Tall but skinny.
Scar on his cheek.
Strong.
Left eye is blind.

and yea.
thats it :P

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Post by 1LastBreath » Sun Dec 06, 2009 3:55 am

Nao thx Leo anyone else??

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Post by pvtsharp » Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:24 am

synn90210 wrote:
LeoWu wrote:I admire your Determination though.
Good stuff comes from Trail and error.
You've Definatly Improved.
Don't go Flaming him Synn.
Much better than before.
Hope to see chapter 2 up soon. :)


hah wow......"Don't go Flaming him Synn" you've flamed every other writer on here that isn't like writing jesus


Oh the irony.

Name : Benra
Job : Axe fighter
Black hair and eyes.
Annoying yet kind.

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Re: Preist's Legacy

Post by EmberSparks » Sun Dec 06, 2009 10:52 am

I thought Leo was against recruiting for FFs.
Anyway, I'm not gonna sign up for any other FFs, one FF is enough for me....

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Re: Preist's Legacy

Post by jonlin » Tue Dec 08, 2009 1:13 am

well I would sign up but I'm too lazy. and I would've read it but I'm too tired. only commenting to say....

synn90210 wrote:
LeoWu wrote:I admire your Determination though.
Good stuff comes from Trail and error.
You've Definatly Improved.
Don't go Flaming him Synn.
Much better than before.
Hope to see chapter 2 up soon. :)


hah wow......"Don't go Flaming him Synn" you've flamed every other writer on here that isn't like writing jesus



He doesn't flame me so does that mean I'm jesus :D?

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Post by 1LastBreath » Tue Dec 08, 2009 10:56 pm

Maybe plus chapter two is up already no more entries except ch 3 enetreis

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Re: Preist's Legacy

Post by Gatorade » Wed Dec 09, 2009 1:54 am

Dude,did you even proofread your story?
I found so much grammar errors.
Especially when you typed,"When Marissa was staring at the tree house thing."
What is that? Come on tree house thing...
You also used the word "like" too much.Try to not use it that often. (wink)

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