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The Last Mortal

Post by LeoWu » Sat Nov 07, 2009 4:07 am

The Truth Set Me Free, I was defeated

I shook severely. Every nerve in my body tingled, but not a good tingle, not an orgasmic tingle, but a heavy, sandy tingle. It ran deep through my veins, my body stiffened like a drying cement walk way. I felt nauseous; like my insides no longer safely rested in me, but started making there way up my throat. I tried to take a deep breath, but my lips would not open, they felt sewn shut. The only other feeling I had besides the unbearable pain could only be described as a horrid fear. I did not even know what I feared. That did not seem to stop the incessant thoughts brought on by this fear though. The pain upon my head didn't stop. The Pain Shook my head and yet myself, As if i was Tensing my Mind.
I could Fell His breath upon me now. I could fell my Heart's Pulse. Vibrating Violently. yet I could feel its Vibration Running through my veins. Fast and Strong. As if it was blood it self. Pain shot through my body. No, Not yet. I must Breath. I Told myself.
This will not be the place of my Grave. I will Live.
Just one last.
Just One.
Last,
Breath.

* * *

"Ugh" I murmured. I jumped into alert as I Popped open my eyes. I jumped up. My eyes were soaked with pain.
and my Arms. Such an Feeling.
Something I've never felt before. My Legs Burned In pain.
Move! I Told my Legs. I crumpled down In Despair.
The Door Creaked open as An Lady came in. Her Light brown eyes
matched nicely with her Brown hair.
And her skin Looked Soft.

"You must not move!" She Said With such Vigor in her eyes.

I Raised an Fist and Growled.
She looked at me with out fear and walked towards me.
She didn't hesitate as she kneeled down beside me
Slowly She Placed her hands upon mine and lowered them. I felt an surge of Relief and Felt relaxed
in an way. I Placed my Head down on the straw pillow and i closed my eyes.
Then i thought. Where was I? I was in the Sleepywood Caves but now I'm here?
Was i still in the Cave? I must Find out
My headache was still Vibrating in my head. I needed to get some sleep.
And I Fell into sleep.


To be continued?
I guess?

Yea this is all i ma write today cause I'm Lazy.
So Jonlin you better start writing yours. :P
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Re: The Last Mortal

Post by jonlin » Sat Nov 07, 2009 5:30 pm

lol comment on my last chapter first :P ..... and orgasmic?

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Re: The Last Mortal

Post by synn90210 » Sat Nov 07, 2009 5:54 pm

cool story bro....... (MS3)

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Re: The Last Mortal

Post by LeoWu » Sun Nov 08, 2009 2:36 am

Rate :P
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Re: The Last Mortal

Post by 1LastBreath » Sun Nov 08, 2009 3:39 am

Yay my names in the story i rate 6/10 7/10

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Re: The Last Mortal

Post by LeoWu » Sun Nov 08, 2009 3:59 am

1LastBreath wrote:Yay my names in the story i rate 6/10 7/10

I didnt ask you to rate.
You dont know how to rate.

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Re: The Last Mortal

Post by chobbilight » Sun Nov 08, 2009 8:47 pm

....if hes the last mortal isn't it easy 2 let him just die from age?
but good story (heart)

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Re: The Last Mortal

Post by LeoWu » Wed Nov 11, 2009 4:42 am

Lol this chapter is the Intro its Very very Double Very boring :P

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