Triple Seven Chapter 3

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Triple Seven Chapter 3

Post by Zaylo » Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:10 pm

Henesys, Athenia Pierces House

A young boy had just left the house, with a bright blue bow, ready to make a legend of him self as the world’s strongest bowmen. A man with a large broadsword on his back walked passed him. The boy looked at the man; he had black armour with white trim, black eyes, and a red cape. His hair was wild, the colour, was the darkness of his eyes. Something was off about him. Too bad the young boy would never see anything or feel anything, again. The man entered Athenia’s house, fresh blood on the sword on his back. Athenia was working on some paperwork at her desk. “Sorry but Bowman registration is over for today come back tomorrow morning. Athenia said, not looking up from her paperwork.

“Oh I’m not here for some bowman training, who would want to be such a weakling as bowman?” the man said in a cold voice.

Athenia looked up from her work. There she saw the man at the door of the building. The man proceeded to look at a rack of extremely beautiful longbows. A gold one stood out from the rest. The man touched the golden bow. “Ahh yes this was your father’s bow, was it not? It’s too bad I killed him before he could use it.”

Athenia jumped from her seat took out her own blazing red bow. “What did you just say?”

The man jumped from the lower half of the building up to Athenia’s desk. His two hand guns, one white the other black were pointed at her. “Now you tell me something or else you’re going to end up like your father.”

Perion

Suddenly the darkness vanished. He was outside in front of Kio’s shack. Kio stood in front of him. “How was the Ressinance?” Kio asked

“It was a little strange to say the least” he said.

Hey Old Man Long Time No See!

“Hello Navaja.” Kio said “Cavas meet one of the 7 Nitro weapons, the katana Navaja.”

“A Nitro weapon? What’s that?” Cavas asked.

Il Explain Since It’s Me Were Talking About, You See There Are Seven Nitro Weapons, Which Can Only Be Used By Nitros. Each Weapon Has It’s Own Special Ability And Powers. Mine For Example Is Called Triple Seven. It Allows The User To Transform Me Into 21 Separate Blades; Each Blade Is Made By Your Imagination. So You Can Make A Blade That’s Giant But Fast Or A Blade That Boosts Speed Or Something Like That. To Unlock A New Blade You Must Get Things Called Dark Marbles. In My Hilt And Both Sides Of The Blade There Are Little Indents Were You Can Insert The Dark Marbles. There Are Seven On Each Part.

“Here!” Kio threw him a leather pouch. Cavas caught the bag and emptied the contents into his hand 3 black little orbs fell into his hand. “Those are the Dark Marbles Go ahead put them into Navaja,” Kio continued.

Cavas unsheathed Navaja and inserted three of them into the hilt. There was a burst of light and then the 3 indents were gone. Kio walked up to him and handed him a sheet of paper, a wanted poster. The picture showed the ugly face of a renegade bandit named Daizen. The bandit had been charged for many charges of robbery and murders. The reward was 25000000 mesos. The bandit and his apprentices have been seen at a camp in the middle of the Ellina Forest.

“Take care of it, will you?” Kio asked.


“Yes master,” Cavas said. He picked up Navaja and ran in the direction of Ellina.

Has There Been Trouble Lately?

“To say the least”

Could You Tell Me About It? I’ve Been Locked In A Chest For The Past 5 Years

“Well you see, it all started when a group of people turned against man kind. They wanted to force their ideals upon us and we fought back. Right now they haven’t been attacking but thanks to their influence monsters are much stronger and they actually use strategy. Because of the constant threat the King of Victoria had issued the creation of an army made up of gifted people, Nitros.”

I See

Some slimes bounced between the trees. The sunlight being split by the above branches.

Quite The Beautiful Place

Cavas looked up into the trees and saw smoke in the distance. “That’s probably were the bandit camp is.”
He picked up his speed and ran toward the smoke. He stopped on a large tree branch. He looked downward upon the group of tents and some men outside of them. Suddenly the earth shook “Whoa!” Cavas fell forward, straight into the bandit camp.

Nice Landing Moron

The bandits stared at him.

You Know I’m Starting To Lose Faith In You, As My Master

One of the bandits cried out something in a horrible combination of drunk and English.

More and more bandits came out of their tents, brandishing swords and axes. One larger bandit came out of what seemed to be the largest tent.

“Well look what the cat dragged in, a nosey little Nitro,” the larger bandit sneered. The bandits surrounded Cavas, all weapons drawn. One of the ones from behind Cavas raised his axe. Cavas drew his sword and sliced the man across the chest the pain caused the man to drop his ask to the ground. The large bandit looked at Cavas “Who are you?”

Who’s asking?

“What was that!?!” The bandits looked around
“That boy must be a ghost!”
“We should go!”
“What if he curses us?”

“You whiney cowards go kill the boy!” the big bandit shouted the bandits all attacked at the same time, their axes swinging at Cavas.

“This would be a good time to try this out.” Cavas said to himself. He drew his sword and shouted, PIERCE Version 1, LANZA!!! …. … … … Nothing happened.

Oh Wait Am I Supposed to Transform Now?

Suddenly the entire blade and hilt glowed a blinding white. Neither Cavas nor the bandits could see anything. When the dazzling light stopped in Navaja’s place was what looked like a spear but instead of a tip there was a giant broadsword blade. Cavas spun the blade above his head. The blade sliced through some of the bandits killing them instantly. The bandits left over were afraid; they had never seen a blade that could transform. The bandit’s stopped their attack. The large bandit was unfazed he slashed overhead with a giant great sword. Cavas span around and held his spear-blade horizontally the sword smashed into the shaft, sparks sent flying in every direction. The bandit swung overhead again and again, hitting the same spot over and over again. Cavas jumped backward just before the 7th blow hit his spear-blade. Cavas lunged forward stabbing with his weapon. The bandit hit the blade to the side and readied yet another over head slash. Cavas had just enough time to raise his spear-blade. The powerful over head slash was blocked by the spear-blade but the pushing power caused Cavas to skid backwards, hitting a tree. The bandit charged, ready to strike with a finishing blow, but it would never make it in time. An explosion in the middle of the camp caused the bandit to lose focus and look away. Cavas quickly grabbed the spear-blade and swung it vertically hitting the bandit’s ribs and sending him skidding towards the middle of the camp. A voice sounded in the air.

“I thought I smelt a rat down here” a girl with red hair stood on one of the branches. The girl jumped from her branch and landed gracefully on the ground beside Cavas. “What did you say?” the large bandit spat. “I said you stink, hear me now?” the girl said smirking.

“Who are you?” the large bandit said.

The girl laughed, “My name is Alice Colonel for the south west Nitro squad, and you are Raviko Daizen’s right hand man correct?”

The giant bandit laughed as well. “That’s right little girly. Daizen is on a very important mission right now so I’ll take care of you two my self. I should let you know I used to be a Brigadier General back when I was in the nitro squads so a puny 2nd Lieutenant and Colonel is no match for me. He ran at Alice and raised his sword. “DIE”! He roared, slashing at Alice with his sword. Metal clashed metal and Alice landed behind Raviko. There was a large amount of dust in the air, it was impossible to see if either of them had been hit. The dust settled down and the damage was clear. CLANK! A large piece of metal hit the floor; it was half of the blade of a sword. Raviko looked put to see his great sword had turned into a small dagger. “What! How did you do that?!” Raviko said. Alice turned around she had two knuckles; both were a dark red and had three blades coming out of the knuckles. “Each Nitro has a special ability. Mine is the ability to control and mold metal. I jus changed your sword into a puny dagger, what are you going to do now?” Raviko pulled out a spare axe and ran towards Cavas. “Bad move” Alice said smirking. Cavas’ hand became a blur. The next second Cavas sheathed, a now normal Navaja. The sheathed clicked as the blade was fully sheathed. The second the click sounded, each and every bandit had been killed, cut in two. Alice laughed “A bit over kill don’t you think Cavas?”

Very Impressive My Master

Alice’s ears perked up. “What was that?” she asked “Il explain later” Cavas said. “Meanwhile” he continued “I think we can figure out were Daizen is. I know an informant in Kerning.”

“Lets go then” Alice said walking in the direct of Kerning. Cavas followed. One of his eyes turned a dark blue for a split second. Alice never noticed.

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 3

Post by jonlin » Tue Feb 03, 2009 10:20 pm

all of a sudden i am reminded of mar.... hmmmm......
it was awesome! xD thanks for finally releasing it zaylo (cool)

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 3

Post by prokila00 » Tue Feb 17, 2009 3:07 pm

that last sentence added so much suspense that im already gonna die if i dont no what happens >:O

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 3

Post by synn90210 » Wed Feb 18, 2009 1:55 am

jonlin wrote:all of a sudden i am reminded of mar.... hmmmm......
it was awesome! xD thanks for finally releasing it zaylo (cool)


wow i read it like 3 times and i couldn't see it but now i do too. I can only hope that the rest of mine turn out this good (cool)

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 3

Post by jonlin » Wed Feb 18, 2009 4:13 am

synn90210 wrote:
jonlin wrote:all of a sudden i am reminded of mar.... hmmmm......
it was awesome! xD thanks for finally releasing it zaylo (cool)


wow i read it like 3 times and i couldn't see it but now i do too. I can only hope that the rest of mine turn out this good (cool)

lol, ok then and Zaylo has also had alot of practice writing fanfics.

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 3

Post by Zaylo » Wed Feb 18, 2009 5:47 am

what's like mar?0-0

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Post by SDValentine » Wed Feb 18, 2009 12:09 pm

Some points I felt like shutting the window down and making a bowl of cereal.
But, at other points I felt a sudden rush of excitement through my coursing veins!
(The 2nd one Governs the first thing I said. *Which is a good thing! (wink) )

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 3

Post by jonlin » Wed Feb 18, 2009 9:33 pm

Zaylo wrote: To Unlock A New Blade You Must Get Things Called Dark Marbles. In My Hilt And Both Sides Of The Blade There Are Little Indents Were You Can Insert The Dark Marbles.

Remember something called magic stones?

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 3

Post by Zaylo » Thu Feb 19, 2009 11:00 pm

oh ya 0-0
coincidence xD

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 3

Post by jonlin » Fri Feb 20, 2009 12:53 am

lolz you didn't even notice that?

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 3

Post by Zaylo » Tue May 19, 2009 8:02 pm

nope honestly i didnt even see that....

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Re: Triple Seven Chapter 3

Post by jonlin » Wed May 20, 2009 12:07 am

lol (F3) well, everyone misses somethings (cool)

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