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Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by poke1024 » Thu Jun 04, 2009 3:15 am

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Ok guys, here is Chapter 3.....





Poe walked out into the forest, but before he got far, Glant yelled his final instructions.

“Just follow the path Poe; it will lead you to the other Questers.”

Poe turned and gave a look of acknowledgement, and walked on. He looked for the path, but the forest showed no sign of revealing where it was. After what seemed like an eternity, Poe found the path.

“Why have I not noticed this path before,” he thought.

He started down the path, not knowing where it led. As he kept walking, he thought about what he had just heard the other night. It made sense to him, but he was still confused about his destiny.

Night came quickly. Poe had been distracted by his thoughts, so he did not realize that night had come. He walked off the path into a clearing not far away. He made a fire, and took out some food to eat. After he had wolfed down his food, he lay on the ground, looking at the stars. Poe soon fell asleep, and started dreaming…

It was morning; Poe had just woken up, and was heading down toward the road again. He got to the road and started following it. Then out of nowhere, a guy leaped out and tackled Poe, knocking him into the sand. Poe, thinking the guy was a minion, got up and drew his Screamer. Poe swung at the guy, expecting to make contact. What surprised Poe was that there was a sword in the guy’s hand, blocking Poe’s attack.

“What the heck?” thought Poe, “he didn’t have a sword a second ago.”

Poe swung again, but the guy back flipped and swung at Poe. Poe’s sword was knocked out of his hands and the guy came at him with the sword arm raised. “Time to die minion,” the guy said, as he brought down his sword…

Poe woke up with sweat pouring down his face. He checked to make sure he was not dead before he got up and headed down to the path.

“Another dream?” he thought.

Poe thought about what had happened, replaying the images in his head.

“The guy must be a minion,” Poe thought, just as a shadow leaped out and tackled Poe.

Poe was expecting this though, and knocked the person aside. Poe quickly drew his Screamer and swung at him. A sword appeared in the guy’s hand, but Poe was expecting that too. Poe kicked out with his foot, and knocked the sword out of the guy’s hand. The guy looked surprised, so Poe took the advantage to strike. The guy regained control of himself in time to back flip to dodge the Screamer. Poe knew what was going to happen, and he had jumped in the air with a side kick. The guy was knocked down before he was done back flipping. Poe pointed the Screamer down at the guy and was about to server his neck when he remembered a critical part of his dream.

Poe’s sword was knocked out of his hands and the guy came at him with the sword arm raised. “Time to die minion,” the guy said, as he brought down his sword…

“The guy thought I was a minion too,” thought Poe, “he must be one of the Questers too!

Poe stopped in mid blow and asked, “Are you a Quester?”

“Why do you want to know that!” the guy screamed.

“Cause I am a Quester too,” was Poe’s answer.

It stunned the guy for a sec, but he recovered quickly.

“How do I know you aren’t lying?”

“I dreamed about you attacking me on the path.”

The guy was shocked.

“You are the Dreamer then?” the guy asked in disbelief.

“Yea,” said Poe.

Poe allowed the guy to stand up and brush the dirt off his clothes.

“Alright, my name is Jona,” Jona said, “I am the Technopath.”

“COOOOOOL,” said Poe, “my name is Poe.”

There was a brief pause.

“We should start walking,” said Poe, “we can talk on the way.”

“Okay,” said Jona.

The both of them started walking down the path. They spoke to each other about their experiences. Poe found out that both of them were pretty much going after the same thing: revenge. Jona’s village had also been burned down and he was the only one left. He wanted revenge as much as Poe did.

“How did you know you were a Quester Jona,” Poe asked.

“I meant some old guy a week ago named Glant,” replied Jona.
“What, Glant?” Poe exclaimed, “I met him too.”

“Well Glant had found me and explained to me who I was, and then he gave me some armor and gloves and sent me to follow a path.”

“Why did he not give you a weapon?” Poe asked.

“Well Poe, I am the Technopath, I can create weapons and stuff out of nothing,” Jona said.

“Wow that is so cool.”

“Yea, I know,” Jona said boastfully.

They had walked a long way, and there was still no sign of a village of some sort.

“Darn, why is there no sign of a village,” Jona complained.

“Glant said that this path will bring the four Questers together, so I think we will have to walk everyday until the four of us come together,” said Poe wisely.

“I hope it will be soon, because I’m tired of this path.”

Poe and Jona walked a little farther before they decided it was time to set up camp. They ate some food, and went to sleep. Suddenly, a sound of walking alerted Poe and Jona, and they both got up and assumed fighting positions. Poe looked around and thought he saw eyes, but when he looked again, it disappeared.

“I must be seeing things,” said Poe.

“Well, I am glad it is nothing,” said Jona, “I want to sleep.”

They both lay back down and soon dozed off. In the shadows where Poe thought he saw eyes, a pair of red glowing eyes appeared. Little did they know, someone, or something was watching them…



To be continued…
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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by jonlin » Thu Jun 04, 2009 3:45 am

cool! Hmmm lol poe owned that guy.

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by stng75 » Thu Jun 04, 2009 4:40 am

goodish and you spelled some stuff wrong

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by poke1024 » Thu Jun 04, 2009 2:07 pm

well, speel check didnt say i spelled stuff wrong

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by chobbilight » Thu Jun 04, 2009 3:17 pm

.....jona dies by zaylo (eek)

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by Zaylo » Thu Jun 04, 2009 5:16 pm

chobbilight wrote:.....jona dies by zaylo (eek)

we can all hope

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by chobbilight » Thu Jun 04, 2009 9:05 pm

Zaylo wrote:
chobbilight wrote:.....jona dies by zaylo (eek)

we can all hope

your my mervenary yay

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by stng75 » Thu Jun 04, 2009 10:14 pm

How is zaylo your mercernary?

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by poke1024 » Thu Jun 04, 2009 11:02 pm

zaylo is a bad guy too (F2)

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by zenopop » Thu Jun 04, 2009 11:26 pm

i liked it great job dude

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by poke1024 » Thu Jun 04, 2009 11:28 pm

thanks, you can look at the quester links thread if you guys lose track of where the thread is

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by synn90210 » Fri Jun 05, 2009 3:17 am

hmm......its good but its not really that much of a maple fanfic.

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by poke1024 » Fri Jun 05, 2009 3:33 am

how is it not, it has some maplestuff in it

even zaylo likes it
which surprises me but its cool (F2)

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by synn90210 » Fri Jun 05, 2009 3:47 am

sure it has some maple stuff in it but it needs maple places, people, skills etc. pretty much 90% maple 10% other ideas

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by Zaylo » Fri Jun 05, 2009 12:41 pm

synn90210 wrote:sure it has some maple stuff in it but it needs maple places, people, skills etc. pretty much 90% maple 10% other ideas

exactly my point

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by poke1024 » Fri Jun 05, 2009 2:15 pm

oh, ok

well, this is only the beginning
ill follow your advise

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by synn90210 » Fri Jun 05, 2009 5:50 pm

ahh finally someone who is smart enough to take zaylo and i seriously. Again its a good story just try to incorporate more maple things into it

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by chobbilight » Fri Jun 05, 2009 8:18 pm

leave it how it is!!!!!

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by poke1024 » Sat Jun 06, 2009 12:20 am

why? i should listen to them

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Re: Questers: Sanct of Light Ch3

Post by synn90210 » Sat Jun 06, 2009 4:39 am

poke.....you have just made me love you (like a brother). chobbi you dont know what your talking about. also poke btw we arent telling you to change it completely just try to incorporate more maple things

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