The maple forbidden powers chapter 2 The Spirit Of Jay?

[chobbilight]

Chobbi couldn't sleep he was thinking the whole night about Jay and then Brain called him and said "yo i got a plan to save Jay"
Chobbi said "whats your plan then?"
Brian said "well its very simple....."
Chobbi said "Cmon your anoying me hurry up and tell me"
Brian said "ok we will go to grandp and ask him how to save Jay"
Chobbi said "you want me to die"
Brain said "why its not like you stole cookies and the dragon godly sleve"
Chobbi said "well Jay stole a whole bundle of cookies and the dragon godly sleve"
Brain said "well this is just gonne be great"
Chobbi was confussed and said "huh......explain?'
Brian said "grandpa gonna go after Jay because he stole the cookies from him and then he sees the sleve and gonna take it whit him"
Chobbi said "but we need to ask whats gonna happen if you were the sleve"
Brian said "ok ill pick you up"



At grandpa's house in Henesys



Grandpa comes home and says "honey i'm home"
Grandma answerred whit "hey honey, if you want some cookies go to the baker"
Grandpa answerred mad whit "why would i go to the baker didn't you make soe cookie?"
Grandma said "well i did but Jay stole the cookies, but hes such nice boy and then i gave him that old sleve you had in the closet"
Grandpa wasn't mad but afraid "what you gave gim the purple dragon sleve?"
Grandma said "well i scrolled it for him and now its the dragon godly sleve"
grandpa said "omg you know what you have done that sleve captures your spirit and takes over the body and its a powerful sleve, when i was young i faught the sleve and defeated it because my bes friend was captured by it i heard voices in my head the whole time i didn't know who was talking but then i knew it was him and then i took his spirit at putted it in a pig, it was kinda fun"
Granma answerred "Chobbi is coming this way whit Brain"
Grandpa "ill tell him" chobbi's enters and grandpa says "do you hear Jay's voice in your head?"
Chobbi was terrified and said "yeah but how the hell did that happen?".....and how you know that i hear his voice in my head?"
Grandpa "because he stole my sleve and the sleve is evil but i know i can save his spirit because is spirit is in your head, hold on ill put him in somethin"
Grandpa went into the basement and was searching for somethin Chobbi was sow confused that he was sitting on the sofa and then after 3 hours came out of the basement whit a dead pet dragon body and said "ok stand still ill put him in here........uhmm hold on i need the book for this" he took a big book out of his desk and was standing behintd Chobbi and then smacked his head and said "thats because you ate my cookies"

He was reading out of his book and throwed holy water on the pet and then some holy water on Chobbi and then the pet came to live
It was.......Jay and Jay said "omfg i'm finnaly out of is head,Chobbi is crazy in his head"
Chobbi said "thats Jay no doubt about it"
Jay said "ok but when do i get my body back
Grandp answerred wisely and said "ill ask my son to train you and then you can defeat the demon inside your body hes name is Demolition hes very strong and if you kill him by the bad way some other guy will pop out his body and you'll have your body back but you need to kill that guy to because hes very strong and we cant let that guy took over maple"
Chobbi ,Brain and Jay asked at the same time "what's the correct wy to kill him then?"
Grandpa said " get 3 more ppl and ill get my son to train you guys but choose wisely because of you choose a noob then you'll die"



Stay Tuned For The Next Chapter The Maple Forbidden Powers chapter 3 The party!

[LeoWu]

Did you edit?

This time its a bit short and I guess its ok but I'm kinda getting confused. Make it more clearer.
Read my fan fic tell me if you like it :D

Dude you did not edit and you should improve your flow of words.

[chobbilight]

its done next chapter next week at wednesday or thursday

[deaddd]

wow tats long story... hope i can finish it

[chobbilight]

the next chapter haves more action in it this is like a intro

[jonlin]

lol you should really ask someone who knows english well to look over your stories from now on.

[chobbilight]

ill ask you........?

[jonlin]

sure. E-mail me at caelinpwns@hotmail.com and I'll look them over then send 'em back.

[synn90210]

lmao @ ur email address jonlin

[chobbilight]

oks....1 more main character then chapter4 comes