Mapel Days fan-fiction

[zenopop]

about:a school to train all class, when the kids turn 16 they can leave mapel island and go through the world of mapel and get stronger {like pokemon cept cooler} all of them start out as first jobs but they grow into next class during there adventure. all characters look like there profile pictures.

characters, and traits;
Zeno-Me,16 magician. a book worm who uses knowledge and experience to solve things.

Cho-Chobbilight, 16 reckless theif who attacks first and never thinks tiwce about what he does.

jona-jona ,16 warrior, is trustworthy person who never would let his friend die, always does his best.

Gilly-[GM]Gilly age {unknown}. teacher at horntail high school, is very kind, trys to get the best preformance outta his students, even if it means doing random testing for good prizes.

Poke-Poe 16, warrior, thinks quickly when in peril, gets good grades and is the best warrior in the school

Jon-jon-16 theif, a funny guy who always trys to make ya laugh, can hit any target at any size and distance,
ill add more if its good.
ok time to start

In the cool morning, with the birds cherping nosily, the wind blowing slowley Zeno, chob, and jona walk to school on the mapel island. Zeno walks with a book in his face learning how to use curses, chob stands next to jona tatlking about how he was able to kill 3 stumps with one slash of his knife and how he could eassly take on 5, jona looked at him with amazmennt and thought about him killing 5 stumps with one wake of his sword. he continues to listen to chos story, soon Zeno gets annoyed with this and starts to pull his wand out of his pocket then with a jolt he points it at chob with a smerk on his face,chob jumps a little and looks nervisouly at the wand and starts to sweat while waiting for the effect,jona stands paralized at waht zeno was doing. when nothing but a spark conmes out zeno pulls it back with a sign, " im never gonna get this stupid cursing down. As he examends his wand and taps it on his hand cho starts to yell with much fury at why he tryed to cures him, Jona starts to come outta his schocked atate and joins cho at yelling ." Cant you tet it on a monster you know its impossible for characters to attack each other" , zeno looks at him with a grin. "it was the only way to shut you up and i do carry cures, i could given you one and youd be fine its not like i was gonna do it without thinking of the consicuences" he said as he read what he was doing wrong, but cho and jona continued to show there anger, " next time try a snail, though we cant fight each otherwith weaponds we can still use our fist to beat you up"',jona nodded . As cho huffed from his outburst there came a small sound of a pop, then a voice that laughed at cho," you know you cant do cursees yet zeno, you have to have more intellegence, and you should try a monster next time you know you cant fight others only monsters". then with a another small pop sound the figure of {GM}Gilly apears infront of the students. all together they say good morning to there techer, "Now that thethe anger has settled i would like to test cho and jona" the two seemed really happy by this for when gilly gives a task it ussually gets rewarded with 1 thousand mesos or a new item or weapond.Cho and jona looked at each other with excitment and angst" alright your task is to kill 10 pigs, you can find themat the school, if you can complete this task i will reward you with 1 thousand mesos each, do you guys accept this " both nodded at him, with determination on there face, Cho thought of a new knife he could get with that money, jona thought of getting more potions so he could train without stopping. " alright" said {GM} Gilly " ill meet you at the school " . With that he turned around and walked away from the three, with a jump and a puff of smoke he was gone."I will complete this task said cho, "lets run jona we gotta kill them sooner the better" Jona nodded adn started to run away as fast as he could , leaving zeno to walk the rest of the way, he put the book he was reading away and started to look for monsters to try practice some magic though with no luck he finnaly reached school and saw that cho and jona had killed all the pigsand were looking for anythiny the pigs dropped."nothing over here" called cho, who looked at jona, who was smiling because he found 13 mesos " i got mesos" as he said that he jumped up and down for he was able to kill pigs without dieing once, after they stopped looking they came tword zeno and told him at what happen."It was awesome Gilly summpond up them and we went to work at pwning them i was able to kill all ten with no potions and jona got through all without dieing". they grinned at each other and zeno grinned with them . Soon after gilly gave them there rewards they went to class and sat down, with poe and Jon who were there early for detention after they tried to fill the room with slimes. As the three sat poe started talking about how they were caught before tehy could even get them inside the building" we were trying to push them all in but they made to much noise and gilly came out of his class room yelling at us and forcing us to sit here and write about slimes, i seriously think my hand is gonna fall off, from all the writing and all the bordom of sitting here before school even starts" woth a sigh he showed them his new pole arm he gotten. "its the best there is it can do over 100 damage in a single hit" with envy we looked at it though jon sat cooliy because he had been able to try it out on some shrooms. After envying poe and talking about how they were at there last day of school they heard the bell of class starting and went to there desk "alright class "said gilly "since you are on your last day here id like to give you all some wisdom to help you on your adventure." he cleared his throut and closed his eyes,and began talking again" first il gratz you on complete this school it will help you on become warriors, magicians, thiefs, and bowman, and id like you all to remember that even though your leaving here you are still all friends nad i am our teacher, dont try to be better then each other only try to help each other grow and become the best". as he stopped talking he wne to his desk and pulled out a box. with curiosity we all looked at it, it was a worn old bown box that looked like it seen he** as he opend it and it making a creeking sound he pulled out what seemed to be tickets " here i have 4 tickets for you itll take you to the other world " we wondered what he was talking about we only knew of this world was he saying there was another world with different monsters and other skills. "with this ticket you will go to the world called Mapel, Its large world where you will get to become better at your job, but youll be split up so say your goodbyes". We all looked at each other the thought of not seeing each other was a horrible feeling we all had been so close we werent ready to leave. When Gilly looked at us he said quickely" dont worry youll see each other again i meant youll all be going to different towns, Poeand jona will be going to Perion, zeno youll go to elina, cho and jon youll go to kerning city. youll start there and soon youll travel all around the mapel world youll see each other but it might be years so you should say some goodbyes. " as he finished we heard the bell to leave go off, we knew wewere leaving tomarrow so we decided to have party at the school and sleep here, first we went home got our things and came back to school we stayed in the class room talked, played xbox 360 played pranks and had fun, we stayed up late into the night and when we woke up, we all said our goodbyes and got dressed. Soon Gilly came in with the boat tickets" ok now that your ready i summon you all a door to your destionation" we watched as he said a few things and heard a bang as 4 doors hit the floor, gilly put us to each of our respected places and with one last goodbye we all put our tickets into a slot on the door and opend it and with one last bye we walk through it wondering what our futures held for us.


Howd you guys like it ?

[jonameepsman546]

jona-jona ,16 warrior, is trustworthy person who never would let his friend die, always does his best.

1. very cul
2.awsome story
3.also a lot of little errors but nothin to be of anyefect to the story.

[poke1024]

cool, im in it
thanks man

great start

im starting to get well known on this site

[zenopop]

thanks and the errors are becasue for some reason when i write alot the moving bar thing keeps moving up so i cant see what im typing its annoying

[jonameepsman546]

aww man... but one BIG mistake.... u said 4 tickets... but there were FIVE of us...
NOOO CHOBBI YR GOING AWAY NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHO AM I GONNA TALK TO... oh ya u poke... srry .

[jonlin]

Then I reccomend writing in word or notebook, then copy and paste it over here. This should allow you to check for errors easier.
a few things:
1. start a new paragraph when someone new starts talking or the old one was getting too long/ more than one focus.
2. PLEASE USE SPELLCHECK

[jonameepsman546]

Then I reccomend writing in word or notebook, then copy and paste it over here. This should allow you to check for errors easier.
a few things:
1. start a new paragraph when someone new starts talking or the old one was getting too long/ more than one focus.
2. PLEASE USE SPELLCHECK

hi jonny!!!i thinkz i said thatz kindaz. but its still a very good story.

[synn90210]

what jonlin said basically. and i wanna be in the story too . can i b evil :3?

[zenopop]

jona: yah i forgot to change jon to a bowman ill fix it when i get to his chapter

jon: i will try that

synn: ok do you wanna be a guy the characters meet and you try to kill them or a dark lord who tries to destroy mapel island

[jonameepsman546]

synn: ok do you wanna be a guy the characters meet and you try to kill them or a dark lord who tries to destroy mapel island

oooo destroy maple island sound cul.

[poke1024]

dang it, i got in trouble for trying to put slimes in the classroom

[jonameepsman546]

dang it, i got in trouble for trying to put slimes in the classroom

TEEHEE haha LOL thats so not u.

[poke1024]

yea, in real life
i never get in trouble
i have a clean record at school

and im smart
no mean to brag

[jonameepsman546]

yea, in real life
i never get in trouble
i have a clean record at school

and im smart
no mean to brag

but u just did -gasp- !!! LOL!!!

[synn90210]

ooh i wanna b the one who trys to destroy maple island

[Zaylo]

Spell Check, it's the holy grail of fanfiction

[jonlin]

LOL how true zaylo, how true. although I usually don't use it.

[zenopop]

ok then maybe zaylo will be the one to try to desrtoy them or not

[jonameepsman546]

ok then maybe zaylo will be the one to try to desrtoy them or not

ok but ill desroy him frist.

[poke1024]

that wasnt bragging

i am smart