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The Clan of The Surternity And the Clan of the Unknown part2

Post by LeoWu » Sun Jan 25, 2009 1:49 am

Leo Looked... There Stood A level 93 sniper with a hat covering his face. The Bandit said "Hey little Bro, Your still in that weak Surternity clan?" the Sniper didn't reply." Come to the Unknown Clan Bro, The power Is So Great Here and you get almost unlimited skills." the bandit said in an different tone. The Sniper Finally Spoke up "All You seek is Power, but What I seek is Peace for Victoria so i have no interest in joining the Unknown Clan." The Chief Bandit was a Bit Angry and he shouted "JASON! I will Give you ONE LAST chance to join, or your Grave will be on this cliff. You Might think I'm weaker than you cause I'm lower level than you but....." the Chief Bandit stopped as silence took over. Then he Shouted " I HAVE POWER FROM THE UNKNOWN CLAN! And All you got is the Maple sign." the Chief Bandit Laughed as the sniper stood there silently. " I will not join no matter what" the Chief Bandit stopped Laughing and with out a warning he charged at the sniper. He Brought the Dagger Above his head and Swung It down At the Sniper. The Sniper Was Fast,Swift and Quick,as the brought his cross bow as a shield to block the swing attack. The Chief Bandit jumped back, Leo Looked at the Bow, It didn't even land a scratch. The Chief Bandit said "Hey, That's a Nice crossbow you got there." the Sniper Looked up and Smiled as he said "You can't break it with your phony attacks, its made of maple inherited Steel gold. Its Also know as the MISG one of the Hardest Material in the universe." The Chief Bandit looked interested as he said "How did you get it?" The Sniper Replied "You Mean Who I got it from? Ishbal the Leader of the Surternity gave it to me,its a shield and a weapon you can't possibility break it your much too weak." The Chief Bandit Made another Deafening laugh " Don't forget I'm from the Unknown Clan, he took a step back then he charged at the sniper with the dagger in his left hand he used both hands and brought the dagger from his left side. The Sniper was Already In his defending position ready for the attack. As the Bandit's Dagger was about to make Contact with the snipers Cross bow A Symbol Appeared on The Bandits Hands it was A maple leaf and the symbol started to glow a bright yellow then the attack happened in a flash. Although Leo Couldn't see the attack cause it was so fast Leo Still Heard the Loud Contact of the dagger and the cross bow. The Bandit quickly took Several Jumps Back and dropped too his knees as he used one hand to support him from dropped completely down to the ground. Leo Heard A Crack he looked at the sniper his bow had broken in to 2 parts! the sniper said " .... the Clan of Unknown Has Really gotten scary...." The Bandit laughed and said " I Told you Don't underestimate me." the Sniper Replied and said " But after using your maple sign your weak so your in bad condition" the Sniper took out a long dagger and dashed at the Bandit the Bandit watched with horror in his eyes then he quickly stood up and ran to Leo he Picked him up and brought his dagger upon his neck the Sniper stopped instantly. "I Know you have Come for the Child like I have." Leo Looked Confused. The Sniper Took a Step towards the Chief Bandit as the bandit said " if you move i will kill him." then the Sniper didn't budge. As Leo Was Left There silent. All Of a Sudden Everything turned Black. Leo Was Alone Somewhere, Then it Happened. (In Leos Point Of View) The Blood That Flows Threw My Vains were Mine the Pale White Skin on my Hand Was My, But.... The Hand That was Upon my Eyes


Were Not mine.....


To Be Continued...............




Bye the Way EVERYONE!!! If i get 5 people to say "LeoWu Rocks!" then i will make part 3 :D or just 10 people telling me i should make part 3
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Re: The Clan of The Surternity And the Clan of the Unknown part2

Post by LeoWu » Sun Jan 25, 2009 2:11 am

Reading my post Whiteshadowd? well i posted casue u told me to :D just leave a reply and more people taht tells me i should make part 3 the faster i will make it :D

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Post by whiteshadowd » Sun Jan 25, 2009 2:19 am

awesome story, very interesting you make me wonna read more, can't wait until part 3

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Post by LeoWu » Sun Jan 25, 2009 2:20 am

So I should make part 3 or no?

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Post by whiteshadowd » Sun Jan 25, 2009 2:22 am

LeoWu wrote:So I should make part 3 or no?


yes can you make part 3 that would be awesome

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Post by tom221 » Sun Jan 25, 2009 2:53 am

wah a nice and cool story i cant wat until the next part!!! (cool) (cool) hahaha
pls make it fast i wan to read it !!!! (redface)

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Post by LeoWu » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:24 am

xD read the last part?

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Post by LeoWu » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:24 am

whiteshadowd wrote:how long does it tack you to make a part

Idk

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Post by whiteshadowd » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:29 am

r u making part three now

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Post by LeoWu » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:30 am

whiteshadowd wrote:r u making part three now

umm read the last part of my post...
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Post by LeoWu » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:31 am

tom221 wrote:wah a nice and cool story i cant wat until the next part!!! (cool) (cool) hahaha
pls make it fast i wan to read it !!!! (redface)

Read the last part do wut it says and i might make it :D

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Post by LeoWu » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:33 am

Ok so far 2 out of 10 people said i should make it and 0 out of 5 people says i shoudl make it too

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Post by whiteshadowd » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:35 am

cool

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Post by LeoWu » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:36 am

Whiteshadowd do u like the series?

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Post by whiteshadowd » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:39 am

yeah y

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Post by LeoWu » Sun Jan 25, 2009 6:15 am

Give Me a honest answer, witch lvl is it in



Great

good

ok..

Bad

terrible

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Post by whiteshadowd » Sun Jan 25, 2009 6:18 am

LeoWu wrote:Give Me a honest answer, witch lvl is it in



Great

good

ok..

Bad

terrible





Great ,lick i sed befer why

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Post by LeoWu » Sun Jan 25, 2009 8:47 pm

LeoWu wrote:
whiteshadowd wrote:
LeoWu wrote:Give Me a honest answer, witch lvl is it in



Great

good

ok..

Bad

terrible



Great ,lick i sed befer why

Beacuse I think its Terrible Becuase This story is probally the worst story ive ever written..

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Post by whiteshadowd » Sun Jan 25, 2009 9:34 pm

Great ,lick i sed befer why[/quote][/quote]
Beacuse I think its Terrible Becuase This story is probally the worst story ive ever written..[/quote]
what do you write other story's for.

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Re: The Clan of The Surternity And the Clan of the Unknown part2

Post by whiteshadowd » Sun Jan 25, 2009 10:52 pm

LeoWu wrote:School Projects.. All My stories had made my teachers say i was a really strong writer and i loved maplestory so i decieded i should make a maplestory story.... (F6) I could show u some of my school projects.... (F6) (F2) (cool) (eek)


idk, can you harry up and make part three

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