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The Tree of Life Chapter 2

Post by Wizit6134 » Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:09 am

-Ok so i improved my writing from my last chaper. Anyway so there may be a difference. Anyway(again) so (again to) here it is chapter 2 after the wait tat no one waited for lol. (gatorade-2) :


The flames of the emerald green tree grew as people threw water at it.

"We need more water!" shouted a mage, "the tree is going to die!"

...
There stood a gourgeous lady with purple locks of hair and a dress which looked like the color of her hair but bright enough to make it look like the sun is glowing inside her dress. She raised her head enough for people to see her sapphire eyes. She stood up and walked up the the opening in the tree. She looked down passed the flames under her to the young man standing with no fear in his eyes.

"Hey!" she called out, " I'm still stuck in here!"

The man looked up.

"Sorry me lord." said the young man in a ruff tune.

The young man ran up the stairs like a ninja until he landed in the window. He grabbed the women and jumped down.

"How did you know i wasn't one of the members of the Chaos Knights?" asked the man once they got down.

"Because," answered the lady, "your the Grand Trickster."

The man nodded his head to hide the surprise inside him for that the lady knew who he was.

"IT'S THEM!!" shouted a man to the top of his lungs.

A group of rouges and bandits approached the young man and the lady. The young man let go of the lady while taking his cutlass out.

"Whoever they are, we arn't as dumb as the last group that attacked you," said one of the men as he looked as the bodies of the hermits, "we know who you are. With your silver suit and golden hat. You the Grand Trickster, Wizit."



-Yes and i know that the title is stupid and it will attract no one. But its the best title i could think of. *SPOILER* There is really a Tree of Life. Its not a stupid name, but the Tree of Life is really about life.
And yes i am the great GRANDE TRICKSTER(i like to say "grande") (skygar9-5)

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 2

Post by Zaylo » Mon Nov 22, 2010 4:01 pm

Chaos knights?
Grand Trickster?
Tree Of Life?

While we at it make "The Rebellion" or "The Chosen One"
Make sure you burn the main character's village as well.

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 2

Post by pvtsharp » Tue Nov 23, 2010 1:00 am

Zaylo wrote:Chaos knights?
Grand Trickster?
Tree Of Life?

While we at it make "The Rebellion" or "The Chosen One"
Make sure you burn the main character's village as well.


Lol, Zaylo-sama's right.
Predictable shounen hero-type plot.

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 2

Post by Wizit6134 » Tue Nov 23, 2010 1:02 am

thx for the ideas but since those topics r usually used i will take those ideas and try to put my ideas in it. Cuz then i wont b creative if i take people ideas but since u recommended those to me than i could put my ideas in it (gatorade-2)

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 2

Post by chobbilight » Tue Nov 23, 2010 3:57 am

and when the big fight starts (hero vs bad guy) let the bad guy say. Bitch, i'm your father

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 2

Post by pvtsharp » Tue Nov 23, 2010 4:04 am

chobbilight wrote:and when the big fight starts (hero vs bad guy) let the bad guy say. Bitch, i'm your father


That is 100% unoriginal.

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 2

Post by chobbilight » Tue Nov 23, 2010 12:47 pm

pvtsharp wrote:
chobbilight wrote:and when the big fight starts (hero vs bad guy) let the bad guy say. Bitch, i'm your father


That is 100% unoriginal.

he can be creative with it (skygar9-1)

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 2

Post by Wizit6134 » Wed Nov 24, 2010 2:36 am

yah but it would b hard cuz well a lot of people changed it already like the i am your mother of grandfather (gatorade-2) but did anyone read ch.1 first (F6)

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Post by chobbilight » Wed Nov 24, 2010 2:45 am

Wizit6134 wrote:yah but it would b hard cuz well a lot of people changed it already like the i am your mother of grandfather (gatorade-2) but did anyone read ch.1 first (F6)

no, we always start at the second chapter

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 2

Post by Wizit6134 » Wed Nov 24, 2010 2:51 am

BUT U MISSED THE FIGHT OF THE CENTURY THEN (F4)

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 2

Post by Berkster » Wed Nov 24, 2010 4:05 am

So. I man ran up the stairs like a ninja, took a lady, ran into bandits and rogues who were smarter than the last group, and man basically drops the lady on the floor, and draws his cutless....

I like it! (heart)

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 2

Post by Wizit6134 » Wed Nov 24, 2010 2:57 pm

why would he drop someone tat important (eek) well i would so yah i did (gatorade-2)

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