G.R.A.V.E. Prologue

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G.R.A.V.E. Prologue

Post by EmberSparks » Sun Dec 27, 2009 9:58 am

For those who don't know what I'm talking about or those who wanna join, here's the link:
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It was a cloudy day. Two rough-looking men cornered a white-haired man in an alley. The white-haired man, who was wearing a tuxedo, searched desperately for a way to escape.

"Heheh.... you rich people don't give a **** about us street urchins," said the fat man, holding a large knife in front of the white-haired man.

"P....Please......" panted the white-haired man. "I can give you all the money you want...... just leave..... me alone....." he pleaded, looking around for a weapon.

"We don't want your money, idiot," said a tall street urchin. "We want your life!"

The tall one charged towards the white-haired man, holding a huge Coconut Knife. "Double Stab!" he cried, as the dagger pierced through his body. The white-haired man let out a cry of pain as he fell to the ground where he lay motionless.

"He's dead," said the fat street urchin.

"That's weird. Why isn't there any blood coming out from his wound?" said the tall street urchin.

"Do you know why?"

The street urchins gasped as the white-haired man rose to his feet. There was no sign of blood anywhere on his body.

"How.... how did he......" stammered the fat street urchin.

"Time for me to return the favor........" muttered the white-haired man, as he lunged towards the street urchins, the dagger still stuck in his chest.......

To Be Continued

Please comment. I know it's short, but hey, this is just the prologue......

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Re: G.R.A.V.E. Prologue

Post by Gatorade » Sun Dec 27, 2009 10:01 am

Nice!!!
Anyway am i gonna be in it? (redface)

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Post by EmberSparks » Sun Dec 27, 2009 10:05 am

Soon, my friend.....
Soon.....

This FF chronicles the history of G.R.A.V.E and its legendary hero, Kibagami Hikaru.

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Post by LeoWu » Sun Dec 27, 2009 9:33 pm

Ummm
Ok.
Could be more smooth.
Alot more
O_O

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Post by Zaylo » Sun Dec 27, 2009 9:57 pm

EmberSparks wrote:For those who don't know what I'm talking about or those who wanna join, here's the link:
viewtopic.php?f=18&t=4773




It was a cloudy day. Two rough-looking men cornered a white-haired man in an alley. The white-haired man, who was wearing a tuxedo, searched desperately for a way to escape.

"Heheh.... you rich people don't give a **** about us street urchins," said the fat man, holding a large knife in front of the white-haired man.

"P....Please......" panted the white-haired man. "I can give you all the money you want...... just leave..... me alone....." he pleaded, looking around for a weapon.

"We don't want your money, idiot," said a tall street urchin. "We want your life!"

The tall one charged towards the white-haired man, holding a huge Coconut Knife. "Double Stab!" he cried, as the dagger pierced through his body. The white-haired man let out a cry of pain as he fell to the ground where he lay motionless.

"He's dead," said the fat street urchin.

"That's weird. Why isn't there any blood coming out from his wound?" said the tall street urchin.

"Do you know why?"

The street urchins gasped as the white-haired man rose to his feet. There was no sign of blood anywhere on his body.

"How.... how did he......" stammered the fat street urchin.

"Time for me to return the favor........" muttered the white-haired man, as he lunged towards the street urchins, the dagger still stuck in his chest.......

To Be Continued

Please comment. I know it's short, but hey, this is just the prologue......


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Post by playa4life01 » Mon Dec 28, 2009 6:32 pm

now som1 should make a comic out of these (heart) (heart)

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Post by pvtsharp » Wed Dec 30, 2009 2:28 am

Wow can i join????

If can tell me and i pm you with cha details~

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Post by EmberSparks » Wed Dec 30, 2009 10:00 am

pvtsharp wrote:Wow can i join????

If can tell me and i pm you with cha details~

Hmmmm........ I'll have to squeeze you into the plot because I've figured it out already......

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Post by Dracoplasm » Thu Dec 31, 2009 5:56 am

add meh in add meh in XD

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Post by EmberSparks » Thu Dec 31, 2009 9:54 am

Dracoplasm wrote:add meh in add meh in XD

You'll be the evil spammer (F3)

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Post by playa4life01 » Thu Dec 31, 2009 6:43 pm

can i be the bad guy ?? i mean the bad guy bad guy
my secret wpn is the evil spammer (F6)

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Post by MsMeowzers » Thu Dec 31, 2009 7:20 pm

I dont see how I'd fit in...
Well,if a coder/computer nerd was needed,Id be perfect.

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Post by playa4life01 » Thu Dec 31, 2009 7:26 pm

MsMeowzers wrote:I dont see how I'd fit in...
Well,if a coder/computer nerd was needed,Id be perfect.


maybe iff they made a part where the guys needed to find a vampire
so they ask the help of a coder/ computer nerd to locate him ?? (F6)

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Post by Mechy » Fri Jan 01, 2010 1:23 am

can i be the technician in the G.R.A.V.E hq cause im good with computers (heart) (heart) can i please

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Post by MsMeowzers » Fri Jan 01, 2010 1:27 am

I already asked.
Besides,do you know what coding is used for Chatbots?
I do.:3
Tell me and I'll back off.
No google.

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Post by Dracoplasm » Fri Jan 01, 2010 1:40 am

Pro Peoples Wish i was j00 guys lol

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Post by playa4life01 » Fri Jan 01, 2010 3:36 am

watching these guys make me realise that sometimes i did good things in my life
but when i watch the other kids like i can do this, i can make comix this that , i realise i suck at my life =D
cuz iunno i just sux ?? (exellent)

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Post by EmberSparks » Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:18 am

Don't squabble over who's gonna be in it.

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Post by Dracoplasm » Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:00 am

lol ok and yay im in G.R.A.V.E Ch 2 XD

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Post by playa4life01 » Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:36 am

i still think that that is mapledraco (F6)

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