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Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by poke1024 » Tue Dec 01, 2009 4:30 am

Alright Guys, the Chapter you have all been waiting for, the first fight chapter! (cool)
Here are previous chapters:

Chapter 5

Chapter 4

Chapter 3

Chapter 2

Chapter 1

I am going to put this in a different style for battles to get the POV (Point of View) of all the chracters fighting.
The sections not marked with Point of Views are general point of views, which will usually be at the beginning and when the fight is about to be over.




The sun shone bright as Poe and Brandon faced each other. Both stood very still, each waiting for the other to make a move. Sweat slid down both their faces as they stood there in the burning sun.

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Poe's Point of View:


“Come on Poe, attack me,” taunted Brandon.

“You’re the one standing there,” I shot back.

Brandon then cast haste and Flash jumped toward me. I barely managed to get my sword up in time to block his dagger. Our blades clashed and we pushed at each other trying to gain leverage. Brandon then disappeared. I looked around, but I didn’t see him.

“Dam it, where the heck is he,” I thought.

He suddenly appeared behind me, but somehow, I sensed it and back-flipped over him.

“This must be one of my Dreamer powers,” I thought.

Brandon looked surprised that he didn’t get me. He jumped back, and used Boomerang Step, followed by a Ninja Storm, creating a cloud, blinding me with attacks. I blocked attack after attack. It didn’t seem to end.

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Brandon's Point of View:

I hid in a tree behind Poe after I used my Boomerang Step and Ninja Storm Combo. I planned to sneak up behind Poe as he was showered with all those attacks. Still, I was surprised it didn’t end when I snuck up behind him in the first place.

“Poe’s gotten better,” I thought, “too bad it’s going to end right here.”

I crouched and leaped off the tree. I was going to finish him off with my best move, Assassinate. My Blood Dagger gleamed as I came up behind Poe and launch my attack.
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As Brandon launched his final attack at Poe’s back, he didn’t notice that Poe was only fighting with one hand against his Ninja Storm. Brandon was about to drive his dagger into Poe’s back, but then Poe spun around, and delivered a devastating uppercut.
Brandon coughed blood as he flew into the air and land hard on his back.

“Sh*t, I can’t move,” thought Brandon.

The Ninja Storm ended, and Poe walked over to Brandon with his sword pointed at his chin.

“Give up?” asked Poe.

“Ugh, how did you know I was behind you?” asked Brandon.

“It is my ability Brandon,” answered Poe, “I am a Dreamer, I told you that before.”
Brandon recovered from the attack and stood up.
He held out his hand and said, “Good fight Poe, I should have never underestimated you.”

Poe took the hand and they shook hands. Miki ran to Poe wrapping her arms around him and said, “That was amazing Poe! I was so worried.”
Jona put on a f3 face and turned around.

“It’s time to go guys, its getting late,” he said.

Poe, Brandon, and Miki followed Jona as they continued down the road, all four Questers Side By Side.
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Meanwhile...


In a Castle in Masteria, located in the Crismon Woods.
A dark figure kneeled in front of a man sitting on the throne.
The dark figure said, “My liege, the four Questers have already met, do you think it was a good idea to let them meet before we destroy them?”

“Chobbi, you question my decision?” answered the man on the throne.

“No, I don’t ever question your authority my liege,” stammered Chobbi.

“Then listen to me, go with 3 of your best men, and confront them before they reach Ellinia, and try to bring them back alive.”

“Yes, my liege,” said Chobbi as he left the throne room.

The man on the throne sat there for a while pondering.

“You have grown Poe,” he thought.

Suddenly, the door opened and a figure stepped in.

“Master Zaylo?” the figure asked.

“What do you want Jonlin,” answered Zaylo.

“I was going to ask if I can go along with Chobbi and meet these Questers,” said Jonlin.

“No, let Chobbi do this himself.”

“Yes Master.”


To be continued...


So Chobbi, Zaylo, and Jonlin now make their appearance.
What will happen next???

Sorry if this is short, but hey, its a fight, what do you expect.

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by pvtsharp » Tue Dec 01, 2009 1:39 pm

Wow, 1 thing to say, wow.

Good fight scenes! (skygar9-1)
I cant do that type of pro scenes even if i had half of Zaylo's mind.

And , wow, all the top posters in FF are.... bad guys? (MS1)

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by poke1024 » Tue Dec 01, 2009 11:59 pm

yup, all of them are bad guys (F3)

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by jonlin » Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:46 am

oooo have me betray and overthrow zaylo and form a new organization in the end :D BTW good story

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Post by poke1024 » Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:53 am

thanks jonlin, im working on the plot as i go along, so i might listen to ur idea

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Post by chobbilight » Wed Dec 02, 2009 9:04 pm

jonlin wrote:oooo have me betray and overthrow zaylo and form a new organization in the end :D BTW good story

no i'm a assasin and i will fight zaylo and i will lose and then i join the qeusters 2 help them overpower zaylo

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by stng75 » Wed Dec 02, 2009 11:36 pm

Dam chobbster how do you know this?

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by poke1024 » Wed Dec 02, 2009 11:36 pm

then u die to protect the questers (F3)
if i decide to do what u sugested chobbi

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by stng75 » Wed Dec 02, 2009 11:40 pm

=0 dam poke thas messed up

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by poke1024 » Wed Dec 02, 2009 11:47 pm

nah, i might do it i might not, jus have to wait to see (F3)

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by stng75 » Wed Dec 02, 2009 11:49 pm

Lolzerz

And sorry for this but LOOK AT MINE poke
Plzzz

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by poke1024 » Wed Dec 02, 2009 11:53 pm

i did look at yours stng

its off to a great start, but make it longer (F2)

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by stng75 » Wed Dec 02, 2009 11:57 pm

Ya but I was in a rush
I use my iPod on here and my battery was running low

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by poke1024 » Thu Dec 03, 2009 12:02 am

oh alright (skygar9-3)

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by stng75 » Thu Dec 03, 2009 12:05 am

I think you don't bellieve me

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by poke1024 » Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:05 am

ya, i beleive you (F3)

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by EmberSparks » Fri Dec 04, 2009 10:54 am

nice....
and the p.o.v thingy works rather well, hmmm.....
btw i use my psp on here

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by synn90210 » Sat Dec 05, 2009 6:27 am

since when was i a theif O.o oh well it dont matter. amazng job poke.

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by poke1024 » Sat Dec 05, 2009 4:19 pm

thanks brandon

and u are more than jus a thief...

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Re: Questers Sanct of Light Ch6

Post by synn90210 » Sun Dec 06, 2009 3:13 am

ooooh mysterious (skygar9-5) i can only wonder.....

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