Dragons of Fate Chapter 2

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Dragons of Fate Chapter 2

Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Jan 30, 2010 12:30 am

"Sakuyaaaaaaa..." said a small girl,about 10.She has short blue hair,dark scarlet eyes,and almost bat-like wings.She was in the middle of a room,with red mist all around her.

"Yes,my lady?" said a woman.She looked about 20,and had a knife in her hand.Her hair was short and silver,with braids in the front,tied with green ribbon.Her blue eyes were like looking into the ocean.Her mistress looked at her.

"I want that magician here.Flandre is getting out of control.I think she needs a fight now," said the girl.She was the scarlet devil,Remilia Scarlet.Her sister,Flandre,was in the basement,screaming.

"I will find her.How fast should I be?" asked the maid,Sakuya Izayoi.She grabbed a strange looking piece of paper.

"I don't care,as long as she's here," said Remilia.She smiled.She's going to freeze time.I know it, thought Remilia.

In the human world,Yuumen was riding on Zema. "Where is Leoric?I've been looking for him for a while," Yuumen said.

"Hey Yuumen!" said a voice behind Yuumen.Leoric came next to Yuumen on his dragon,Katon.He motion for Yuumen and Zema to come down.

"So,where have you been?I've been looking for you," said Yuumen,riding down on Zema.

"What is that?I've haven't seen that before," said Leoric,pointing to a space in the canyon wall.It was purple.

Yuumen hopped off."I don't know.But I know there has to be something on the other side," said Yuumen,flying toward the gap.She left Zema behind.As soon as she entered the gap,she disappeared.

"Yuumen!" shouted Leoric,running toward the gap.He entered it too.When they entered,they saw a shrine,and a girl standing by it.

"Who are you?" asked the girl.Another girl ran up,holding a gourd.She looked drunk,as if she was up all night drinking.

"Reimu,where's the s-Oh!you have a human and youkai here!Hi there!" said the smaller girl,running towards Yuumen and Leoric.

"Komata!" yelled Yuumen.The smaller girl fell down.The other girl rushed over.

"Suika!Are you okay!" asked the girl.Yuumen had a guess of who she was.

"Are you Reimu,the shrine owner here?" asked Yuumen,pointing at her.Leoric went to see what was around the shrine.

"Are you the human who passed borders,the dragon girl,Yuumen?" asked Reimu.

"Passed borders?Dragon girl?Ha,Reimu,you're funny.There is no such thing as a dr-." Suika stopped talking as soon as Yuumen pointed her finger at her.

To be continued.....

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 2

Post by jonlin » Sat Jan 30, 2010 1:05 am

that was fast.... O.O

if it'll speed you up I'll do another chapter of either of my fanfics or a request for a special story (a oneshot) if you write the next one before tuesday :D


EDIT: oh yeah, you get to choose which I do or make the requet

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 2

Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Jan 30, 2010 1:19 am

I don't care,the only FF's I'm looking at are GRAVE,MMP,And Tree of Origin (If it ever comes again).

Plus...
MsMeowzers wrote:"I want that magician here."

Identify who the magician is,you get a cookie.

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 2

Post by Gatorade » Sat Jan 30, 2010 6:00 am

10/10
I wuved it. (skygar9-5)

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 2

Post by Zaylo » Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:31 am

MsMeowzers wrote:I don't care,the only FF's I'm looking at are GRAVE,MMP,And Tree of Origin (If it ever comes again).

Plus...
MsMeowzers wrote:"I want that magician here."

Identify who the magician is,you get a cookie.

Marisa? It was pretty good but it seemed too oriented in introducing the new characters. But it was pretty good, lots of improvement.

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 2

Post by EmberSparks » Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:49 am

Exactly what Zaylo said.....

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 2

Post by MsMeowzers » Sat Jan 30, 2010 1:56 pm

*Tosses a mile wide cookie at Zaylo*

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 2

Post by Zaylo » Sun Jan 31, 2010 2:07 am

MsMeowzers wrote:*Tosses a mile wide cookie at Zaylo*

It was that or Patchy but Remillia is friends with her so by theory she would say her name.

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Re: Dragons of Fate Chapter 2

Post by Dracoplasm » Mon Feb 01, 2010 6:09 am

MsMeowzers wrote:I don't care,the only FF's I'm looking at are GRAVE,MMP,And Tree of Origin (If it ever comes again).

Plus...
MsMeowzers wrote:"I want that magician here."

Identify who the magician is,you get a cookie.

Great so your neva gonna read mine XD

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