A Noob's Life 13

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A Noob's Life 13

Post by jonlin » Mon Oct 26, 2009 5:34 pm

Here is Chapter 13, Don't Eat me :O

We all got ready to fight the mysterious mage as he walked towards us laughing.

"Well I guess I will have to show you how to use that power, you can't beat Chase at that level." he said with a smirk. "Oh yes, I am Kvothe." He kept his creepy smile on and suddenly began to glow red, with yellow eyes. As he slowly rose to the air, he started making strange symbols. All of a sudden four figures appeared in front of each of us, glowing yellow and seeming to bubble with energy. They all looked exactly like us except completely yellow. As we were all surprised, the figures attacked. I barely knocked his hammer out of the way, and concentrated completely on him. I shifted in my stance and began to attack.

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Billy stared in amazement. These four people had just saved him and were beginning to fight the mage. he couldn't tell who they were for the glow around them, but he was thankful. He decided to attack while the mage was distracted, and got up. he jumped forward with all his leg strength and drew his claw back to throw- and got shocked in midair. His muscles spasmed and he fell face first on the dirt. He looked around as he got up and saw faint outlines of a cage around himself. He sighed and sat down to think of a plan.

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Caelin dropped all his plate armour off to conserve energy. He then readjusted himself so that one hand was about 3 inches from the hammer head and the other hand was about 3 inches from the bottom. As he gathered all of his energy and waited, he saw the 'copy', as he called it, move closer. He gathered all his energy and struck, imagining crushing his opponent like a bug. Just before his hammer hit, Caelin closed his eyes and hoped it hit. instead of the *thunk* of metal on... well sort of flesh he had expected, there was a giant crash like a wave breaking upon a pier. He hesitantly opened his eyes and saw, to his amazement, A crater where the clone had been. His mouth dropped and he lost control of the power he had been using until now, completely surprised. He nearly collapsed again once the power was gone, and he looked over at his friends. Connor with his dim glowing green eyes and dim red glow, Austin with a dim red glow everywhere including his eyes, and Ray with... clear eyes? and faint red glow.

"Good Job," Kvothe said, clapping "I didn't think you would end up using it." As he said this he floated a little closer to the ground "Your friends should use it soon too."

"Use what?!" Caelin demanded, extremely fatigued.

"You will see..." as Kvothe said this, Caelin drifted off into unconsciousness.


Dun dun dun duhhhnn this is the end of chapter 13 folks sorry it sucked :P

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Re: A Noob's Life 13

Post by chobbilight » Mon Oct 26, 2009 7:12 pm

hey where am i?
you promised me i would be in chapter 13

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Re: A Noob's Life 13

Post by jonlin » Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:11 am

did I..? link to promise please

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Re: A Noob's Life 13

Post by chobbilight » Tue Oct 27, 2009 3:54 pm

jonlin wrote:did I..? link to promise please

ok you got me (F3)

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Re: A Noob's Life 13

Post by jonlin » Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:36 pm

Oh yeah forgot to mention, Comment and rate please

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Re: A Noob's Life 13

Post by EmberSparks » Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:17 am

5/10
Too short..... (post too short)

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Re: A Noob's Life 13

Post by Zaylo » Sat Nov 21, 2009 5:50 pm

EmberSparks wrote:5/10
Too short..... (post too short)

LOL Thats pretty funny dude.

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Re: A Noob's Life 13

Post by jonlin » Tue Nov 24, 2009 1:14 am

LOL THE IRONY
oh.....
lol.

BTW how was the story itself? :/ I know it was short I didn't have much time, I just hadn't released in so long you guys deserved SOMEthing

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Re: A Noob's Life 13

Post by EmberSparks » Fri Dec 25, 2009 4:04 pm

the story is nice.......
(and that wasn't supposed to be funny)

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Re: A Noob's Life 13

Post by Duality » Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:29 pm

Hm i guess i have to read the old ones, i forgot the whole storyline

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Re: A Noob's Life 13

Post by jonlin » Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:43 pm

xD it's the same thing for me every time I write a new chapter lol

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Re: A Noob's Life 13

Post by Dracoplasm » Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:46 am

Is the all chapters Still there cuz Well i wanna read them Again XD
anyways 7/10
Too Short

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Re: A Noob's Life 13

Post by playa4life01 » Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:35 am

wow jonlin are you still writing those ?? (F6)

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Re: A Noob's Life 13

Post by jonlin » Sat Jan 02, 2010 3:17 am

lol yes I am
everyone says the chapters are too short.....
so instead of writing a chapter and putting i up today, I wil be doing a much longer one which will be up sometime later.

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