Lucario Story-a story about a person-Chapter1

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Lucario Story-a story about a person-Chapter1

Post by Lucario7777777 » Tue Jul 14, 2009 7:22 pm

Once upon a time there was a person. He was called Lucario. One morning he woke up. He was five years old. His mom came in yelling," Son, I have wonderful news!" "What is it, mom," Lucario asked. "You have been chosen," his mom replied. "Chosen for what?" Lucario asked. "For the four warriors," his mom answered. "What four warriors?" Lucario asked. "The four warriors are the four people chosen to go out and save the world of monsters and help people who need help," his mom replied. "You will likely never see me again."

TO BE CONTINUED...

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Re: Lucario Story-a story about a person-Chapter1

Post by chobbilight » Tue Jul 14, 2009 9:02 pm

2 short, make it longer or it will be closed

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Re: Lucario Story-a story about a person-Chapter1

Post by Lucario7777777 » Tue Jul 14, 2009 10:40 pm

To me that doesn't make sense, but I have more to chapter 1:
The first part is about Logan. Well, it was supposed to.
Yoshi
Once upon a time there was a person. He was called Yoshi. One morning he woke up, knowing that he would be one of the four warriors in a few days. The next day he packed. He arrived at the place they meet two hours early because he was rich and used a limo.
Louie
Once upon a time there was a person. His name was Louie. One morning he woke up, knowing he would be one of the four warriors. He arrived at the place to meet at one minute before it started.
Tails
Once upon a time there was a person. His name was Tails. One morning he woke up, knowing he would be one of the four warriors. He was very poor, so he woke up right next to the place to meet right when it started.

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Re: Lucario Story-a story about a person-Chapter1

Post by poke1024 » Thu Jul 16, 2009 3:19 am

wow, no offence, its short, and dumb, if you read mine, its totally awsome (F3)

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Re: Lucario Story-a story about a person-Chapter1

Post by Lucario7777777 » Thu Jul 16, 2009 12:13 pm

It gets more exciting in the other Chapters.

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