NoobStory (Pt.4) Last

[skygar9]

the last part of NoobStory.

"First I got killed by a thing on a boat, now I get defamed, and now I don't know where to go!"

The stood up, thinking what to do.

The noob had an idea.

"I will go kill that monster again!!"

The noob went to the ship, and bought a ticket with his last mesos.

The crowed of people waited hours for the boat, but it finnaly came.

Everyone boarded the boat, and it took off.

"What are you doing here?" a high level Crusader asked.

"I want to slay the monster that killed me!" Said the noob.

"... Hahahaha!!!!!!" Laughed the Crusader.

"I can kill it! You just wait and see!!" said the noob.

"Good luck with that," said the Crusader as he walked to the other side of the ship.

"Why does everyone think I am weak!?!?" shouted the noob.

"You ARE weak!" the Crusader shouted back.

The noob sighed as he watched the boat go along through the clouds.

"BALROG UP AHEAD!! FLEE!!" People shouted.

Everyone flew into the cellar of the ship, and the noob sat up.

"Now's my chance... I can get revenge...!" Thought the noob.

Everyone charged up will skills and all ready for the big attack.

The boat came closer and closer.

"Dude, get in the cellar!" The Crusader told the noob.

"Yeah, hurry!" Shouted another high level.

"No way, I'm not going to give up without a fight!" Said the noob.

Distant roars were heard.

High roars were heard.

Loud roars were heard.

Ear-ringing roars were heard.

Deafaning roars were heard.

Before anyone could speak, large Balrog's invaded the ship!

"HERE'S MY CHAAAAAANCE!!!" shouted the noob.

The noob flew to the air, and went Face-To-Face with the Balrog!

<BLAM!>

Everything blacked out.

"Wake up, Nimrod." Somone said.

"Huh? What? When? What? Is the Balrog here!!?!?" Said the noob.

"No... The Orbis Ride is over..." The same voice said.

"Oh, so we're at Orbis now..." Said the noob.

"Well duh, let's go to El Nath now!" Said the voice.

The noob rubbed his eyes and woke up.

The noob was a level 120 Hero.

"Wow, it was just a dream..." The 'noob' said.

He wasn't a noob after all. It was a dream.

The End. . .



LOL. the ending of noobstory was corny in my opinion, since I do fail at fan fic making ): but do tell your comments xD

[jonlin]

lol ummmm soooooo the hero was in orbis wen he could be in leafre?

[Zaylo]

Paragraphs please? Seriously wth?

[skygar9]

lol ummmm soooooo the hero was in orbis wen he could be in leafre?

Im guessing he was gonna go Zrun to El Nath? o_o

Paragraphs please? Seriously wth?

I'm too dumb to make paragraphs.

[LeoWu]

I think the story sucked.
Period.

[skygar9]

Thats what you think. Your an epic fail
Exclamation mark.

LMAO, you only post in Fan Fics. o_____o

[poke1024]

lol interesting ending

[chobbilight]

Thats what you think. Your an epic fail
Exclamation mark.

LMAO, you only post in Fan Fics. o_____o

yeah i noticed it 2

[playa4life01]

i liked it
it was better then some of the other guys that do dem

[skygar9]

I sorta bumped this topic.

Wth does bumping a topic do?

[playa4life01]

bumping a topic is like moving it on top or sumthing like htat??

[jonlin]

bumping a topic = posting on it so that it is at the top of the page of newly posted in topics. therefore making more people see it.




oh yeah and about the ending = it's a cliche topic that in grade 4 my teacher told everyone to NEVER use it to end a story.


*uses it to end sucked in*
lol jk

[poke1024]

wow, i half expected it to be good

[Zaylo]

bumping a topic = posting on it so that it is at the top of the page of newly posted in topics. therefore making more people see it.




oh yeah and about the ending = it's a cliche topic that in grade 4 my teacher told everyone to NEVER use it to end a story.


*uses it to end sucked in*
lol jk

haha i remember that XD

[jonlin]

see? It's true. our teacher in grade 4 actually told us to not use it in a story D:<! no offense, but yeah.

[playa4life01]

JONLIN UR ALIVEE!!!!!!!

[jonlin]

0.o wth do you mean?

[chobbilight]

that you dont post often

[playa4life01]

ye we missed you and you only post at fan fictions ??

you should come to the draco section and the chat section were starting a war join my team plox

[chobbilight]

i dont miss you, but you cant go in playas team he gotz aids