Mapel Days chapter 2
With a loud thud a large cloud of dust swarms over the town of Perion, when it settles a door appears and with a scary creek the door opens and Jona and Poe fall out of it.
"ow i think i got a concussion or something " said Poe as he rubbed his head but, as he does he feels something under him push him off and he falls over on a rock.
"ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh" said Poe as he shrieked in pain. " quit your complaining" said a nearby voice, Poe looked at him with tear in his eye from the pain of the rock in his back and slowly the vision of Jona appeared. he had a different appearance to him now he had white t-shirt and shorts that went to his knee. As Poe looked he noticed he was wearing the same thing.
"WTH my clothes there gone" Poe started searching the ground for it but with no luck, and started to weep for his new weapon he had gotten and his cool clothes. He heard Jona stand and say.
"What should we do first? " said Jona while looking around at the city of Perion, it made him think of a Amish town but instead of wooden houses it was all rocks. As Poe looked with him he noticed some one with a large feather hat and weapons coming near them, with a jump Poe stood and looked ready to fight, but with a the man coming closer he saw a smile on and the look of peace wisdom on his face.
"Don't worry I'm not going to attack you i just need to talk to you" said the stranger. Jona looked at the approaching warrior with curiosity on his face. As he came within range the two warriors could see he had a letter in his hands that had a seal that only [GM]Gilly puts on his letters, it made Jona flash back to when he first started going to the school and Gilly had given him his first task of giving a letter to Head GM Monty, Jona asked Gilly why he liked the symbol of a [Gw] he told him that it was code , the G was for Gilly and the W for wizet. Though it made Jona think of godly warrior with that he decided on being a warrior.as Jona was fantasizing he started hearing a faint voice of Poe.
" Jona ?? JONA WAKE UP!" said Poe then , Poe stomped on his foot. with a start Jona yelled.
"ahh crap, what was that for you jer.." he looked at the man standing before him and with a soft voice he started.
" Hello i am Dances with Balrog, I'm the warrior instructor i will help you get started on being the best warrior you can be, i have a letter for you both its from Gilly." Poe grabbed it and opened fast to see what they had gotten from there past teacher. As he opened the letter inside he noticed it was blank except for a small black box in the middle, they both looked at each other with confusion, they though he said it was something he forgot to give them though it had no writing on it just a black box. But as soon as they closed it a picture shown inside the box, it was Gilly.
"Hello you two, glad my friend has found you before you left" said Gilly with a smile.
"this is a recorded message i forgot to give you a starter weapon, so here it comes." as Gilly said a few words two swords had poofed in front of them, they looked better then any they had seen, with its brown handle and black hilt, as they stared at it the sun glinted on it making it look even more cool.
"So there you guys go your new weapons hope you enjoy them " with a bloop sound the screen had turn black, looked at the paper for a few more seconds then dropped it on the ground where it was taken by the wind.Then they turned to Dances with Balrog to ask him how they should start there journey.
"Ok we got our stuff how can we begin, i want to start getting better" said Jona with a large smile.
"Me two i wanna get stronger, how do we start?" asked poe who was looking very excited.
"If you want to start i have a task for you both," They looked happy, the two finally could start.
"you must kill 10 stumps, if you need potions theres a store right over there" he pointed to the left and they saw a small store made of rock, "You can tell its a potion store by that symbol in the front it looks like a full bottle". the to looked and saw he was right.
"lets go get potions we might need help" as he was starting to run he felt in his pocket and found no mesos.
"my mesos! did i drop them? no no no AHH where the h**l are they i had them before i left. said Poe
" you must earn the money first, so go kill the stumps you can get the potions after". said dances with balrog . The two looked at him in shock. and wondered if they could be able to fight without dieing, soon Balrog started talking again.
"Don't worry about death a true warrior never fears because he can take anything thrown at him" as he said that he smiled that made the two feel like they could take on anything.
"alright lets do this'" said Poe with excitement,"
"but, where are the stumps, are they in the town, how do we leave the town" said Jona, Poe looked around and thought the same thing. There was no road just stopped at a point.
" You two do know this is a mountain right?" as he said that the two looked with shock at him, they didnt want to climb all the way down, it might take forever.
"Don't worry we use portals here you see that flashing blue spot over there" they looked and saw it with wonderment, this must be a really advanced town if they use portals to get to parts.
"so if you want to fight stumps just go through that portal and you can begin". Before he finished Jona and Poe were half way to the portal. they stopped inches away and stared at it, the blue shining light put them into a trance and for a second could see the future of them both begin, soon they looked at each other with determination and took and step into the blue light and vanished within seconds.
To be continued....
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"ow i think i got a concussion or something " said Poe as he rubbed his head but, as he does he feels something under him push him off and he falls over on a rock.
"ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh" said Poe as he shrieked in pain. " quit your complaining" said a nearby voice, Poe looked at him with tear in his eye from the pain of the rock in his back and slowly the vision of Jona appeared. he had a different appearance to him now he had white t-shirt and shorts that went to his knee. As Poe looked he noticed he was wearing the same thing.
"WTH my clothes there gone" Poe started searching the ground for it but with no luck, and started to weep for his new weapon he had gotten and his cool clothes. He heard Jona stand and say.
"What should we do first? " said Jona while looking around at the city of Perion, it made him think of a Amish town but instead of wooden houses it was all rocks. As Poe looked with him he noticed some one with a large feather hat and weapons coming near them, with a jump Poe stood and looked ready to fight, but with a the man coming closer he saw a smile on and the look of peace wisdom on his face.
"Don't worry I'm not going to attack you i just need to talk to you" said the stranger. Jona looked at the approaching warrior with curiosity on his face. As he came within range the two warriors could see he had a letter in his hands that had a seal that only [GM]Gilly puts on his letters, it made Jona flash back to when he first started going to the school and Gilly had given him his first task of giving a letter to Head GM Monty, Jona asked Gilly why he liked the symbol of a [Gw] he told him that it was code , the G was for Gilly and the W for wizet. Though it made Jona think of godly warrior with that he decided on being a warrior.as Jona was fantasizing he started hearing a faint voice of Poe.
" Jona ?? JONA WAKE UP!" said Poe then , Poe stomped on his foot. with a start Jona yelled.
"ahh crap, what was that for you jer.." he looked at the man standing before him and with a soft voice he started.
" Hello i am Dances with Balrog, I'm the warrior instructor i will help you get started on being the best warrior you can be, i have a letter for you both its from Gilly." Poe grabbed it and opened fast to see what they had gotten from there past teacher. As he opened the letter inside he noticed it was blank except for a small black box in the middle, they both looked at each other with confusion, they though he said it was something he forgot to give them though it had no writing on it just a black box. But as soon as they closed it a picture shown inside the box, it was Gilly.
"Hello you two, glad my friend has found you before you left" said Gilly with a smile.
"this is a recorded message i forgot to give you a starter weapon, so here it comes." as Gilly said a few words two swords had poofed in front of them, they looked better then any they had seen, with its brown handle and black hilt, as they stared at it the sun glinted on it making it look even more cool.
"So there you guys go your new weapons hope you enjoy them " with a bloop sound the screen had turn black, looked at the paper for a few more seconds then dropped it on the ground where it was taken by the wind.Then they turned to Dances with Balrog to ask him how they should start there journey.
"Ok we got our stuff how can we begin, i want to start getting better" said Jona with a large smile.
"Me two i wanna get stronger, how do we start?" asked poe who was looking very excited.
"If you want to start i have a task for you both," They looked happy, the two finally could start.
"you must kill 10 stumps, if you need potions theres a store right over there" he pointed to the left and they saw a small store made of rock, "You can tell its a potion store by that symbol in the front it looks like a full bottle". the to looked and saw he was right.
"lets go get potions we might need help" as he was starting to run he felt in his pocket and found no mesos.
"my mesos! did i drop them? no no no AHH where the h**l are they i had them before i left. said Poe
" you must earn the money first, so go kill the stumps you can get the potions after". said dances with balrog . The two looked at him in shock. and wondered if they could be able to fight without dieing, soon Balrog started talking again.
"Don't worry about death a true warrior never fears because he can take anything thrown at him" as he said that he smiled that made the two feel like they could take on anything.
"alright lets do this'" said Poe with excitement,"
"but, where are the stumps, are they in the town, how do we leave the town" said Jona, Poe looked around and thought the same thing. There was no road just stopped at a point.
" You two do know this is a mountain right?" as he said that the two looked with shock at him, they didnt want to climb all the way down, it might take forever.
"Don't worry we use portals here you see that flashing blue spot over there" they looked and saw it with wonderment, this must be a really advanced town if they use portals to get to parts.
"so if you want to fight stumps just go through that portal and you can begin". Before he finished Jona and Poe were half way to the portal. they stopped inches away and stared at it, the blue shining light put them into a trance and for a second could see the future of them both begin, soon they looked at each other with determination and took and step into the blue light and vanished within seconds.
To be continued....
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Re: Mapel Days chapter 2
if he had a concussion he wouldn't be able to move....
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lol, everyone loses their weps from maple island and have no mesos
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Pretty good, a few mistakes but otherwise fine.
and to zaylo, that's not true.
and to zaylo, that's not true.
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jonlin wrote:Pretty good, a few mistakes but otherwise fine.
and to zaylo, that's not true.
i mean as soon as you get it
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when do i get to be a thief
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omg i cant wait to see myself as uber evil guy 

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soon you guys will appear
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lolz yay and zaylo, not neccesarily.
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jonlin wrote:lolz yay and zaylo, not neccesarily.
... ok if you fell smashed your head, would you be able to sit up and say that i might have gotten a concussion?
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yeah usually if you get a concussion you're unconcious anyway O.o
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My sister got a concussion and was still awake. It is unrealistic that he said that he might have a concussion though.
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yeah i didnt say you get knocked unconcious all the time if u have a concussion i just said most of the time
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nice story heh . xDD 

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you can if you had a helmetZaylo wrote:jonlin wrote:lolz yay and zaylo, not neccesarily.
... ok if you fell smashed your head, would you be able to sit up and say that i might have gotten a concussion?
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thats cheating at life....god will punish you for that
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but ur godly talk to him no one wonts to die 

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no i will punish you 2
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grr zeno...u and ur life hackingness
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