Maplestory

Hello everyone. I am starting out my new comic series : Angelic Tears. It is about two worlds have suddenly collided as one, causing many mysterious portals to appear. The two worlds are Earth and the World of Maple. Angelique Von Rubstin, the Goddess of Time (or known as Queen of Time) and her husband, Nineheart Von Rubstin, King of Time and in charge of giving assignments to the Knight of Time (something like Knight of Cygnus, but far more powerful than you think) was keeping a close eye on the situation. A few people from Earth had entered the world in curiosity and their lives are soon been changed when the mysterious portals suddenly closed. Angelique knew this is a new era for the newcomers from Earth as Knight of Time rescued them.
Edit: I forget to add....I don't own the programmes I used and some photos I get from the Internet as a background.

Episode one: New Mission part 1


Episode two: New mission part 2, A mysterious girl from Earth appear!

--Moderator edit--
Please provide more information in your reply, eg. thoughs and such.
And please, refreain from quoting the whole main post -.-
/Froshin

ok.......?

good attempt, still needs improvement

i cant explain whats wrong with it, but you are using less frames,
and the ones that you use are to big, if you try cutting of the top, could give you more space to do some stuff, and it wouldnt be like big frame small frame. GIGANTOR FRAMEZ

its kinda good i would keep reading this comic keep it up