♦based on a true story♣(4)
- playa4life01
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1st of all to small,
2nd. use paint to cut that white part out ?
2nd. use paint to cut that white part out ?
- playa4life01
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Re: ♦based on a true story♣(4)
ok, edit this post.
don't make a new topic
don't make a new topic
- playa4life01
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Re: ♦based on a true story♣(4)
good job, but it would be better iff you edited the 1st post.
delete the old one, so ppl dont see you made a mistake
delete the old one, so ppl dont see you made a mistake
- markng1019
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Re: ♦based on a true story♣(4)
lol,yea he`s right,u could have just edited the original post,like i did...
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Re: ♦based on a true story♣(4)
next time dont write 1 2 3 with paint :p
everybody knows you have to read from left to right :)
everybody knows you have to read from left to right :)
- SacredMatrix
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Re: ♦based on a true story♣(4)
You number the 1st 4 panels, but not the rest? The #'s look ugly and it shouldn't be there. People can understand how to read the comic. The quality is bleh, and the panels are small, it should be the regular size. You shouldn't have made the panels so big. You should have put the 2 character closer to the girl. The white box you put for Dray and the other guy is just bleh. It irks me a lot. And the borders.... It's just... irks me... A LOT.
Next time, just make the bg white, it looks nicer than putting blue lines. What's with the random white line in the middle also?
Align your panels correctly next time. How you put the guy in the sauna robe with the cuteness expression when he gets the metro hair irks me a lot. Don't just put the pose, just make the panel, and make the other say like, "Lucky...." or something.
Well, that's pretty much all, I give the comic 3/10.
Sorry if I sounded mean or anything but you need to know how to make your comic better.
Next time, just make the bg white, it looks nicer than putting blue lines. What's with the random white line in the middle also?
Align your panels correctly next time. How you put the guy in the sauna robe with the cuteness expression when he gets the metro hair irks me a lot. Don't just put the pose, just make the panel, and make the other say like, "Lucky...." or something.
Well, that's pretty much all, I give the comic 3/10.
Sorry if I sounded mean or anything but you need to know how to make your comic better.
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Re: ♦based on a true story♣(4)
i hate that freaking qeust
i just bought nx an had the hair i have in my avy. i didn't what that qeust gives so i did it and now my character has some rihanna haircut
i just bought nx an had the hair i have in my avy. i didn't what that qeust gives so i did it and now my character has some rihanna haircut
Re: ♦based on a true story♣(4)
Nice job that was funny!!!!
8/10 bro
8/10 bro
Re: ♦based on a true story♣(4)
alessmax43 wrote:Y THANK U
HATERS STAY OUT!
no prob just saying what i think of it for a begginer
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Re: Wanting to see if he could fool the farmer again
goodugg09 wrote:Wanting to see if he could fool the farmer again, the ventriloquist asked if he could speak with the farmer's horse. "Well, you know, horses don't talk." Again the ventriloquist said, "You'd be surprised what a horse might tell you."
So the farmer brought out his horse. "Say, Mr. Horse, how does the farmer treat you?" asked the ventriloquist. The horse then replied, "Oh, I think he's great. He feeds me oats, he puts a blanket over me at night, and I just love him!" Again the farmer was amazed.
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Wanting to try his luck a third time, the ventriloquist said, "Mr. Farmer, would you like to hear what the sheep has to say about you?"
"Well," declared the farmer, "Sheep lie, ya' know."
i bet this had a 1st part,and that this is the second, but i still get the joke