A small story
Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 2:30 am
Here is a really small story I worked on in school.
The Only Nightmare in the World
Night 1
A small light illuminated the small space.It was all red,and gave off a feel
of elegance.
"She isn't here!" said a voice. The voice shot through the darkness.
"Forget it. We'll get her in the day," said another voice. Both were men's voices.
They turned off the small light and lightly stepped downstairs. Suddenly, red and blue
lights started flashing.
"Step out of the house. We know you are in there," boomed a megaphone.
The men darted out of the back door instead of going out the front door. They ran
into the country,then went towards a river.For the rest of the night,they stayed there,
using only survival instincts to make a small lean-to.
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A small girl, about 10, walked around the darkened city with a boy. The
girl had light brown hair and wood-brown eyes.Her black glasses were spiderwebbed
a little. Her night-blue dress fluttered in the wind. The boy had black, short hair and
had glasses too. His green eyes looked like pieces of jade. He was wearing a royal-blue
shirt and dark jeans.
"Scarlett, how did you spiderweb your glasses?" asked the boy.
"Why do you want to know Josiah?" Scarlett asked.
"Just wanted to know.You know we're-" Scarlett suddenly stopped,looking around
slowly. She quickly ran into an alley,pulling and pushing Josiah into a pile of garbage bags.
"Ssshh!" Scarlett hissed,quickly ripping her dress off to reveal a black jumpsuit. She stuffed her torn dress into a garbage bag. Then she pulled up Josiah from the pile of bags and
ran into the darkness of the looming city.
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Night 2
"I found food! We can eat now!" Josiah yelled to Scarlett.
Scarlett ran over to him. "Guess what! I found more kids like us!" she said happily, bouncing around.
"How can we trust them? When you're on the run, you can barely trust anyone," said Josiah. "They could be cannibals for all I know. People who want to kill us for freaky rituals."
"Rosalyn, Chase, come over here!" Scarlett yelled. Two kids ran over to her. They looked like siblings. The boy, who looked about 14, had sea blue eyes, and beige hair. He was wearing a red striped shirt and dark red pants. He wore hand-me-down sandals. The girl, who looked about 12, had dark blue eyes and beige hair too. She had her hair in a ponytail. She carred a large backpack. She wore a dress, which was torn a little bit, and boots.
Please tell me how I did. I am pretty rusty.
The Only Nightmare in the World
Night 1
A small light illuminated the small space.It was all red,and gave off a feel
of elegance.
"She isn't here!" said a voice. The voice shot through the darkness.
"Forget it. We'll get her in the day," said another voice. Both were men's voices.
They turned off the small light and lightly stepped downstairs. Suddenly, red and blue
lights started flashing.
"Step out of the house. We know you are in there," boomed a megaphone.
The men darted out of the back door instead of going out the front door. They ran
into the country,then went towards a river.For the rest of the night,they stayed there,
using only survival instincts to make a small lean-to.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
A small girl, about 10, walked around the darkened city with a boy. The
girl had light brown hair and wood-brown eyes.Her black glasses were spiderwebbed
a little. Her night-blue dress fluttered in the wind. The boy had black, short hair and
had glasses too. His green eyes looked like pieces of jade. He was wearing a royal-blue
shirt and dark jeans.
"Scarlett, how did you spiderweb your glasses?" asked the boy.
"Why do you want to know Josiah?" Scarlett asked.
"Just wanted to know.You know we're-" Scarlett suddenly stopped,looking around
slowly. She quickly ran into an alley,pulling and pushing Josiah into a pile of garbage bags.
"Ssshh!" Scarlett hissed,quickly ripping her dress off to reveal a black jumpsuit. She stuffed her torn dress into a garbage bag. Then she pulled up Josiah from the pile of bags and
ran into the darkness of the looming city.
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Night 2
"I found food! We can eat now!" Josiah yelled to Scarlett.
Scarlett ran over to him. "Guess what! I found more kids like us!" she said happily, bouncing around.
"How can we trust them? When you're on the run, you can barely trust anyone," said Josiah. "They could be cannibals for all I know. People who want to kill us for freaky rituals."
"Rosalyn, Chase, come over here!" Scarlett yelled. Two kids ran over to her. They looked like siblings. The boy, who looked about 14, had sea blue eyes, and beige hair. He was wearing a red striped shirt and dark red pants. He wore hand-me-down sandals. The girl, who looked about 12, had dark blue eyes and beige hair too. She had her hair in a ponytail. She carred a large backpack. She wore a dress, which was torn a little bit, and boots.
Please tell me how I did. I am pretty rusty.