Maplestory

Leo was a kid at the age of 13 he trained hard and was determined to be one of the best Archers ever.... AHHHH! Leo woke up to a terrible bloody scream, "Huh?" Leo got dressed and ran down stairs, as soon as he was down stairs he thought he had heard that bloody scream again. Leo knew what was coming... The Clan of Unknown... His Mother came up beside him tapping him several time on the shoulder saying "Quick, get dressed we better get out of here before we get ourselves killed." Just after she said that 2 level 50 Bandits and a level 70 Chief Bandit raided the house. The next second his mother’s life flashed before his eyes. One of the Bandits had Killed her. Leo was paralyzed he couldn't move as he saw pools of blood beside him and his mom. The chief bandit shouted “Take the child and go, he looks strong enough to join the clan!” The Bandits Dragged him to a tall Cliff. Leo was still paralyzed but he knew he had to get back to normal. He had only a little bit of control in him self. Leo took out a knife and stabbed him self on the shoulder. Leo's senses returned as the Bandits kept dragging him Leo took out another pocket knife as he was about to stab them both the chief bandit saw what Leo was about to do so he shouted "WATCH OUT! Behind you!" but the bandits were too late unsuspected they both were stabbed by Leo in their vital organs. They dropped and died instantly. The chief Bandit made a face "So you wanna play huh?" then... "DIE!" as the Chief bandit came charging at Leo with a dagger. Leo Stared with horror on his face, he tried to crawl away but the Chief Bandit was too fast as he was About to cut Leo's Head in Half, As the dagger was 1 inch away from his head, a Arrow came grazing above Leo's Head and hit the Chief Bandit's dagger. The Chief Bandit Looked at where the arrow had came from. the Chief Bandit stood up as his smile became wider " he he he" the Chief Bandit roared. Leo looked too... To be continued ....


Thanks Hello. Its Leo Wu here Hope u like the series! And please leave a comment or reply ~ Leo :D

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LEAVE A REPLY I BEG YOU!!! Thanks and enjoy the series
Wow thanks GUYS this post is number 1 on this fan fic forums thanks ALOT!

*OH NOES! MY VITAL ORGANS*

I WILL NEVER REPLY!

wait how does that work? oh well....

jonlin wrote:*OH NOES! MY VITAL ORGANS*

I WILL NEVER REPLY!

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give a more nice reply it makes me suffer D: jk thanks for the "reply" :D

awesome story, can't wait to read the next one

whiteshadowd wrote:awesome story, can't wait to read the next on

FINILLY A GOOD Comment :DDDD well i'll make part 2 tommorow then :D thanks for the reply and the comment :D

you dont need smileys every 5 words you know.
anyways
its overall a good story but remember to make prargraphs not blocks of text

Zaylo wrote:you dont need smileys every 5 words you know.
anyways
its overall a good story but remember to make paragraphs not blocks of text

Thanks For the Advice I'll remember that when i make part 2 today

have you made the second one yet?

When he has finished Part 2, he will most likely post it here. he has said he would, so I see no reason to ask when it is obvous that if it has not been posted yet, he is either not done or not going to release it for a while. or he has taken a break from MA, but I doubt that he wouldtake a break after just coming here.

whiteshadowd wrote:have you made the second one yet?

Sorry I'm Going To Make It But I'm Quiet Busy Today I promise I'll Make it In the Next 3 Days :D And If You Wanna be in the story I could Make You Any Job And Any Level gotta be under 150 cause u gotta Train To level up. Next part is Going To Be better than this :D Thanks and Bye

jonlin wrote:When he has finished Part 2, he will most likely post it here. he has said he would, so I see no reason to ask when it is obvous that if it has not been posted yet, he is either not done or not going to release it for a while. or he has taken a break from MA, but I doubt that he wouldtake a break after just coming here.

Its Comeing out Real Soon so Please Leave More Messages Telling me I should Make Part 2 It would Help me the more posts the More Faster I Make It :D

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wow nice story i cant wait to read the next one!!!!

tom221 wrote:wow nice story i cant wait to read the next one!!!!

Thanks :D i will Make it Tomorrow :D And yes The Next One is Going to be AWESOME. If You Wanna be In the Story Just Tell Me. Also tell Me what Job you want, what level you wanna be (gotta be under level 150) and Yea :D Thanks for the Reply

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Wow Thank You Guys I'm 2nd on the fan fiction place with 87 views and 16 posts! thanks ALOT

hey LeoWu can i be in the story

SHURE! tell Me Job, Level , and Name :D

Name- Blal
Job- dark Knight
Level- 130