Maplestory

P.S. im making up my own attacks
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I looked at the sword, imagining the cruel things done to my friends. "NO!" I screamed trying to fight the image out of my
head.

CHHKKKK

i turned around and gazed.

CHHKKKK

I hopefully stood up and slammed my arm against the wall of the building.

CHHK- " what was that silo? "

i was stunned. i turned to a window on the building wall and, trembling, walked towards it.
" EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!!!! " silo broke down the wall with a friend. " why, we have a guest here today
jake. " I looked pleadingly towards the person next to him hoping HE would get what was going on.
i looked back at silo. " How?.....WHEN DID YOU-- " i was cut off because just then... THE SWORD!
i reached for the sword, and knew something was happening. i stood up and shouted

" LIGHTNING CHAIN!!!!! "

sparks of lighting flew down on them. Silo grabbed a sword sitting in the corner. " how'd i miss that!? "
He thrashed my shirt and left not even a scratch on my bare skin.
we took the fight outside and i unleashed my dark side, Beryl.

" HEART OF SHADOWS!!! "

apparantaly silo and jake had been torn up
and were bleeding.

Errr......
It........ er.......
sucks......

oh yeah lets see you try one before commenting ON MINE THAT IT SUCKS
go ahead tuff guy

CoolKid wrote:oh yeah lets see you try one before commenting ON MINE THAT IT SUCKS
go ahead tuff guy

I have a fan fiction, go ahead and read it... sigh

screw that one
make one with fighting ALL THE TIME
*shake *
huh what did i just say?

No seriously
It sucks.
Your just 9 remember? -.-

Sorry if I was too harsh...
Dammit I'm getting soft...

its okay.

EternalSorrow wrote:Sorry if I was too harsh...
Dammit I'm getting soft...

i just dont take critisism very well..

CoolKid wrote:its okay.

EternalSorrow wrote:Sorry if I was too harsh...
Dammit I'm getting soft...

i just dont take critisism very well..

Well, if you don't understand it, try just accepting it. Once you do, you can continue down your own path.
Wait - I'm certain Jecht said something like that in Dissidia Final Fantasy....

EternalSorrow wrote:

CoolKid wrote:its okay.

EternalSorrow wrote:Sorry if I was too harsh...
Dammit I'm getting soft...

i just dont take critisism very well..

Well, if you don't understand it, try just accepting it. Once you do, you can continue down your own path.
Wait - I'm certain Jecht said something like that in Dissidia Final Fantasy....

FF Reference Ftw.
+1
Get this straight in your mind plox,
YOUR 9

I have a dream that one day people will not be judged by the number of their age, but by the content of their character.

EternalSorrow wrote:Errr......
It........ er.......
sucks......

Dude who do you think you are? You just go to someones fan fiction and tell them they are bad at writing. Sure she has some grammar errors but i believe her story line is better than you in so many ways. You think your better than everyone else you think your superior and your good at writing. I almost laugh when i see your attitude. If your FF was actually good the real writers would say something about it. Oh yea and get some more experience here, Neither Zaylo, nor Jonlin has posted on your FF. Or not that i have known of.

DID YOU JUST CALL ME A HE!!!!
Omfg I am a girl!!!! And wow leowu I thought u were a flamer().()

CoolKid wrote:DID YOU JUST CALL ME A HE!!!!
Omfg I am a girl!!!! And wow leowu I thought u were a flamer().()

Leowu is indeed a flamer. He's flaming eternalsorrow. he also flamed my fanfics, but I made him angry and made more fanfics, so much he couldn't have time to flame 'em all and quit mapleanime.

LOLL IM GONNA DO THAT NOW!

He He nothing like good Little Females trying so hard to get me mad.
I'll be ready

lol Leo, at first all my mind saw in that sentence was:

'Girls trying to get hard' magically arrangin themselves sooooo ignore that :)

ANYWAYS

This fanfic...
STORY IS GOOD
GRAMMAR NEEDS WORK
PERIOD

WTF IS THIS SHIET???