1 Falling Star
Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 6:21 pm
1 Falling Star
By. Me!
1-6-10
Once a long time ago, before the earth was born, a tiny little planet. It was about the size of the Earth’s core today. This planet was called Vrion. It was a very beautiful planet. On this planet everyone had a very special power (some much more interesting then others) but not everyone had there own individual power, they shared it with one other person on the planet. It was called there other half as most put it.
Mostly it was very easy to find your other half except for...two girls named Comet and Lace. They where the only two that where 15 and could not find there other half.
Comet is a very mysterious girl with skin so pale its almost white. Her eyes had very little color in them a light blue was barely seeable. Her long flowing hair it looks like it was a million stars threaded together. Her dress was like waves crashing against a cliff. Lace was much brighter look. Her eyes where a deep pink color almost red in fact. Her hair was brown in a long ponytail with any kind of lace or ribbon in it. If it wasn’t for her dress you would think she was a ballerina. Speaking of..her dress was short in the front and long in the back pink was the main color of hers.
Anyways lets begin...shall we? “Oh hey lace!” said happily Comet. “Oh uh hi there Comet.” Lace replied. “What’s wrong?” “Um, well, you see I found...,” “found what”Lace hesitated before she answered “I found my other half” “Oh! Well...that’s good!” Comet said trying to sound happy for her friend. “Hehe Yeah,” “What’s there name?” “Ribbon!” “Oh...well I gotta go now” “Oh ok see you around then?” “Yeah...” Comet ran off with tears in her eyes.
She knew she was now the only 15 year old girl to not find her other half. As Comet ran home she thought to herself ,“does my other half even exist? Is he or she even alive?” As she entered her house more tears fell from her soft light skin.
After a long time of crying she noticed something that she hadn’t before, a little tiny trapdoor on the floor. It blended in so well that it looked as though it was never even there. She crawled over to it and with a timid hands she slowly raised the door. A giant burst of air came out as though something had just a woke and had taken a giant breath of air.
As she looked inside there was many things in boxes and crates or something’s covered in sheets. As Comet waked slowly though she noticed a little old box in the middle of the floor. As she walked over to it she gazed at it in amazement. She sat on the floor in front of it and slowly opened it.
Inside the box was a bunch of pictures of her when she was born and of her parents. You see Comet’s parents had died two days after Comet had been born. No one knows what had happened or even if her parents where killed, they just seemed to have walked off the face of the planet. Comet was raised by Lace’s parents that’s why Comet and Lace are or where good friends.
Anyways Comet had gone wide eyed with tears falling non stop. She had looked at every picture over and over again memorizing every little thing in each picture. After she had gone though all the pictures there was a old paper folded up in the corner. Comet took it unfolded it as carefully as possible...What it was, was a letter written by her parents about almost everything. Here’s what it had said.
To our dearest Comet,
When you get a chance to read this it might have been years since we have left you. You see there’s this guy completed coved in black with silver chains. He is to powerful for us to hold back much longer. We are going to make a deal with him and that is to leave you alone and take us instead. Please understand we did it to protect you. We love you with all our hearts. Also your other half might still be out there. Don’t lose hope. Find him or her we want you to not feel lonely.
Love,
Ray and Shine a.k.a Mom and Dad
P.S. This might come in handy it’s a spell combur
As Comet sat in total silence tears flowing more and more and eyes wider and wider as she read the letter. Finally after she knew the letter by heart she folded it back up and held it against her heart. Her eyes and teeth tightened as she had so many thoughts run through her head. “Who toke them? Why would they do that? Are my parents still alive? Who’s my other half?”
Long after, Comet got herself together and decided that she was going to find her other half along with her parents. “It won’t be to hard. This world isn’t that big” she thought to herself and she is right.
Vrion isn’t very big at all it only has ether 3 or 4 city’s: the first one is the biggest called Last Hope, Next is much smaller city called Little Light, The next one is even smaller yet almost completely deserted to it’s called Alone, Now the this final city might not even exist but some say it’s name is Dying Breath.
It was said that it was an extraordinary place once but no one knows what had happened to it. Now as Comet was well aware that her other half was not at all where she lived which was Last Hope. “Well this shouldn’t be to hard” she thought “there’s only two other city’s they might be in” as she went off looking for her other half and her parents she had no idea what evil force might lie ahead.
After a while later she was in Little Light it had looked like it was once a nice quite place to live before but now it looked of old broken and torn down buildings with no color or...any light within miles...very few people lived here. The city’s nickname was reject cause anyone who wasn’t welcomed in Last Hope would end up here.
It was night time and it was getting cold outside yet Comet refused to stop. She looked in every nook and cranny of that city. “This is impossible, there’s no way no how my other half is here” She said quietly to herself.
After many long hours went by with endless searching, Comet finally was at the end of the city with one single building, but, there was something much different about this last one then the others. It was lit up and laughter but not the good kind.
As Comet slowly entered the place she saw what looked like one of the worst places to be. It had many people that where drunk and wrestling each other as though every no good person was there in front of her. She was so different from them all. She was smaller, much paler, dressed in white not black or bloody red, and she didn’t have bottle in her hand or had scranch’s of any kind.
Once she had entered not a single hair outside, the whole place went dead silent. Eyes all staring at her. Then with complete surprise every person crowded her and asked her all kinds of question’s “What’s your name?” “Where are you from?” “What power do you posses?” The only thing Comet could do was just look all around not knowing anything to say or do. “What have I gotten myself into!” Comet thought terrified.
“Hang on for a second!” someone yelled. A very tall rather plump mad came in. He was wearing any kind of number, 1-12 actually, and what looked like arrows point any which way. Black and white where the colors in this ridiculous outfit. “What in the world is going on?” he said. Everyone backed away from Comet and pointed directly at her. Looking terrified she just stood there like a statue ,only shaking much more.
“Oh! Why hello there young lady, what bring you here?” he said kindly “Um, I uh, I came looking for someone.” Comet replied still terrified “No need to be afraid where all good folk here!” “Then how did you get here” Comet thought to herself “Anyways who are you looking for maybe I can help!” The man said. “Um I actually don’t know who.” The man looked puzzled “Then how can you expect to find them?” “Um, well, you see, I’m looking for my uh, other half” “OOOH!! That explains it! But I must ask, your so grown up, why have you not found them yet?” “Well I uh...” “Oh how rude of me im Tock by the way!” Tock interrupted. “Oh I’m Comet”
Then the smile on Tock’s face vanished in an instant and became a terrified angry look. “Comet you said? Well I can assure you your other half is not here! Not now not ever! I prefer you leave Ms. Comet!....Before you get hurt” Absolutely looking shocked and frightened Comet ran right out the door and did not stop till the place was no longer in sight.
“All of you I want no word of this to Note!” Tock said allowed to everyone in the strange place. After Tock had left it seemed as though all of there eyes went silver. “As you wish” They all said in a cold harsh voice.
“Ok, this is the last place they could be they’ve got to be here!” Comet thought to herself. By this time the moon was out in the middle of the sky. Shining it’s very brightest. Comet had searched every place there, but no luck.
Alone was a very narrow yet long city nothing much ether just like a road that never ends. “Come on, Come on Come on! There here somewhere...they have to be” Comet thought to herself. She was beginning to lose hope. Then...just as the beach was approaching a huge factory came into view.
“That must be it!” Eager and full of hope again Comet ran into the factory. She looked around. She didn’t expect anything what she had found. As her eyes adjusted to the dark place it became clear murders had been committed there. Shook all over her face as she saw all the blood splattered all over the place.
She continued to walk in. “H-hello? Is an-anyone here?” Comet said. No answer had come. “A-anyone?”Still no answer came. Comet was terrified at this point. She noticed then a piece of paper taped to a pole. May letters had faded from it so it was hard to read.
Wa ed
Al e or D d do n’t m ter w ch
me: No h Star or N. .
Fi im r se!
“What in the world is this” Comet thought. She looked at it over and over again but could only see the word “Star”then a huge bang and Comet became terrified again and ran for the door. She ran and ran not stopping for anything. Finally, she had tripped over a small rock and had fallen into sand. She got up and started to cry and yell. “No! No no no no no!! This can’t be the end! There has to be more!” She screamed. “After all that searching...” She just cried more.
After endless hours of crying she didn’t know what to do so she rearranged the stars. Once she stopped she noticed that the stars where still arranging themself. Into words to be exact. “What in the...” Comet said looking confused. After the stars had stop this is what they said.
Hello? Who is messing with the stars?
Are you my other half!
Eyes wide Comet quickly rearranged the stars and replied.
Hi! I’m messing with the stars! Im comet!
I think I am your other half! Please tell me
who are you! Where are you! How can I get to you!
Again the stars rearranged themselfs.
Im North Star! N.S. for short!
Im on Dying Breath! You can get here with my help.
Just wait!
So Comet waited and saw a little boat came into view. Comet got up and ran for it. It stopped in front of her. She then looked up.”Get in.” is what the sky read so she did and soon enough the boat was moving. After a while she saw a very small strip of land come into view. She was so excited she almost couldn’t contain herself.
As the boat landed she jumped out and saw a boy. About her age looking right back at her. His eyes where like her’s almost completely white but with just enough blue to see. His skin also so pale is was almost white. His hair was a mess yet it shined like any star. His cloths where very plain and simple. Two shirts one white the one on top extremely dark blue with a white jacket on top, the pants where also plain white as snow.
Yet to Comet he was the most amazing sight to ever be seen. He thought the same about her. They stared at each other for a long time then finally ran into each other and hugged. Both of them crying not believing they had finally found each other...now all that remains is where Comet’s parents where and what was Tock talking about not to say anything to Note? Find out in 2 Falling Stars!!!!
By. Me!
1-6-10
Once a long time ago, before the earth was born, a tiny little planet. It was about the size of the Earth’s core today. This planet was called Vrion. It was a very beautiful planet. On this planet everyone had a very special power (some much more interesting then others) but not everyone had there own individual power, they shared it with one other person on the planet. It was called there other half as most put it.
Mostly it was very easy to find your other half except for...two girls named Comet and Lace. They where the only two that where 15 and could not find there other half.
Comet is a very mysterious girl with skin so pale its almost white. Her eyes had very little color in them a light blue was barely seeable. Her long flowing hair it looks like it was a million stars threaded together. Her dress was like waves crashing against a cliff. Lace was much brighter look. Her eyes where a deep pink color almost red in fact. Her hair was brown in a long ponytail with any kind of lace or ribbon in it. If it wasn’t for her dress you would think she was a ballerina. Speaking of..her dress was short in the front and long in the back pink was the main color of hers.
Anyways lets begin...shall we? “Oh hey lace!” said happily Comet. “Oh uh hi there Comet.” Lace replied. “What’s wrong?” “Um, well, you see I found...,” “found what”Lace hesitated before she answered “I found my other half” “Oh! Well...that’s good!” Comet said trying to sound happy for her friend. “Hehe Yeah,” “What’s there name?” “Ribbon!” “Oh...well I gotta go now” “Oh ok see you around then?” “Yeah...” Comet ran off with tears in her eyes.
She knew she was now the only 15 year old girl to not find her other half. As Comet ran home she thought to herself ,“does my other half even exist? Is he or she even alive?” As she entered her house more tears fell from her soft light skin.
After a long time of crying she noticed something that she hadn’t before, a little tiny trapdoor on the floor. It blended in so well that it looked as though it was never even there. She crawled over to it and with a timid hands she slowly raised the door. A giant burst of air came out as though something had just a woke and had taken a giant breath of air.
As she looked inside there was many things in boxes and crates or something’s covered in sheets. As Comet waked slowly though she noticed a little old box in the middle of the floor. As she walked over to it she gazed at it in amazement. She sat on the floor in front of it and slowly opened it.
Inside the box was a bunch of pictures of her when she was born and of her parents. You see Comet’s parents had died two days after Comet had been born. No one knows what had happened or even if her parents where killed, they just seemed to have walked off the face of the planet. Comet was raised by Lace’s parents that’s why Comet and Lace are or where good friends.
Anyways Comet had gone wide eyed with tears falling non stop. She had looked at every picture over and over again memorizing every little thing in each picture. After she had gone though all the pictures there was a old paper folded up in the corner. Comet took it unfolded it as carefully as possible...What it was, was a letter written by her parents about almost everything. Here’s what it had said.
To our dearest Comet,
When you get a chance to read this it might have been years since we have left you. You see there’s this guy completed coved in black with silver chains. He is to powerful for us to hold back much longer. We are going to make a deal with him and that is to leave you alone and take us instead. Please understand we did it to protect you. We love you with all our hearts. Also your other half might still be out there. Don’t lose hope. Find him or her we want you to not feel lonely.
Love,
Ray and Shine a.k.a Mom and Dad
P.S. This might come in handy it’s a spell combur
As Comet sat in total silence tears flowing more and more and eyes wider and wider as she read the letter. Finally after she knew the letter by heart she folded it back up and held it against her heart. Her eyes and teeth tightened as she had so many thoughts run through her head. “Who toke them? Why would they do that? Are my parents still alive? Who’s my other half?”
Long after, Comet got herself together and decided that she was going to find her other half along with her parents. “It won’t be to hard. This world isn’t that big” she thought to herself and she is right.
Vrion isn’t very big at all it only has ether 3 or 4 city’s: the first one is the biggest called Last Hope, Next is much smaller city called Little Light, The next one is even smaller yet almost completely deserted to it’s called Alone, Now the this final city might not even exist but some say it’s name is Dying Breath.
It was said that it was an extraordinary place once but no one knows what had happened to it. Now as Comet was well aware that her other half was not at all where she lived which was Last Hope. “Well this shouldn’t be to hard” she thought “there’s only two other city’s they might be in” as she went off looking for her other half and her parents she had no idea what evil force might lie ahead.
After a while later she was in Little Light it had looked like it was once a nice quite place to live before but now it looked of old broken and torn down buildings with no color or...any light within miles...very few people lived here. The city’s nickname was reject cause anyone who wasn’t welcomed in Last Hope would end up here.
It was night time and it was getting cold outside yet Comet refused to stop. She looked in every nook and cranny of that city. “This is impossible, there’s no way no how my other half is here” She said quietly to herself.
After many long hours went by with endless searching, Comet finally was at the end of the city with one single building, but, there was something much different about this last one then the others. It was lit up and laughter but not the good kind.
As Comet slowly entered the place she saw what looked like one of the worst places to be. It had many people that where drunk and wrestling each other as though every no good person was there in front of her. She was so different from them all. She was smaller, much paler, dressed in white not black or bloody red, and she didn’t have bottle in her hand or had scranch’s of any kind.
Once she had entered not a single hair outside, the whole place went dead silent. Eyes all staring at her. Then with complete surprise every person crowded her and asked her all kinds of question’s “What’s your name?” “Where are you from?” “What power do you posses?” The only thing Comet could do was just look all around not knowing anything to say or do. “What have I gotten myself into!” Comet thought terrified.
“Hang on for a second!” someone yelled. A very tall rather plump mad came in. He was wearing any kind of number, 1-12 actually, and what looked like arrows point any which way. Black and white where the colors in this ridiculous outfit. “What in the world is going on?” he said. Everyone backed away from Comet and pointed directly at her. Looking terrified she just stood there like a statue ,only shaking much more.
“Oh! Why hello there young lady, what bring you here?” he said kindly “Um, I uh, I came looking for someone.” Comet replied still terrified “No need to be afraid where all good folk here!” “Then how did you get here” Comet thought to herself “Anyways who are you looking for maybe I can help!” The man said. “Um I actually don’t know who.” The man looked puzzled “Then how can you expect to find them?” “Um, well, you see, I’m looking for my uh, other half” “OOOH!! That explains it! But I must ask, your so grown up, why have you not found them yet?” “Well I uh...” “Oh how rude of me im Tock by the way!” Tock interrupted. “Oh I’m Comet”
Then the smile on Tock’s face vanished in an instant and became a terrified angry look. “Comet you said? Well I can assure you your other half is not here! Not now not ever! I prefer you leave Ms. Comet!....Before you get hurt” Absolutely looking shocked and frightened Comet ran right out the door and did not stop till the place was no longer in sight.
“All of you I want no word of this to Note!” Tock said allowed to everyone in the strange place. After Tock had left it seemed as though all of there eyes went silver. “As you wish” They all said in a cold harsh voice.
“Ok, this is the last place they could be they’ve got to be here!” Comet thought to herself. By this time the moon was out in the middle of the sky. Shining it’s very brightest. Comet had searched every place there, but no luck.
Alone was a very narrow yet long city nothing much ether just like a road that never ends. “Come on, Come on Come on! There here somewhere...they have to be” Comet thought to herself. She was beginning to lose hope. Then...just as the beach was approaching a huge factory came into view.
“That must be it!” Eager and full of hope again Comet ran into the factory. She looked around. She didn’t expect anything what she had found. As her eyes adjusted to the dark place it became clear murders had been committed there. Shook all over her face as she saw all the blood splattered all over the place.
She continued to walk in. “H-hello? Is an-anyone here?” Comet said. No answer had come. “A-anyone?”Still no answer came. Comet was terrified at this point. She noticed then a piece of paper taped to a pole. May letters had faded from it so it was hard to read.
Wa ed
Al e or D d do n’t m ter w ch
me: No h Star or N. .
Fi im r se!
“What in the world is this” Comet thought. She looked at it over and over again but could only see the word “Star”then a huge bang and Comet became terrified again and ran for the door. She ran and ran not stopping for anything. Finally, she had tripped over a small rock and had fallen into sand. She got up and started to cry and yell. “No! No no no no no!! This can’t be the end! There has to be more!” She screamed. “After all that searching...” She just cried more.
After endless hours of crying she didn’t know what to do so she rearranged the stars. Once she stopped she noticed that the stars where still arranging themself. Into words to be exact. “What in the...” Comet said looking confused. After the stars had stop this is what they said.
Hello? Who is messing with the stars?
Are you my other half!
Eyes wide Comet quickly rearranged the stars and replied.
Hi! I’m messing with the stars! Im comet!
I think I am your other half! Please tell me
who are you! Where are you! How can I get to you!
Again the stars rearranged themselfs.
Im North Star! N.S. for short!
Im on Dying Breath! You can get here with my help.
Just wait!
So Comet waited and saw a little boat came into view. Comet got up and ran for it. It stopped in front of her. She then looked up.”Get in.” is what the sky read so she did and soon enough the boat was moving. After a while she saw a very small strip of land come into view. She was so excited she almost couldn’t contain herself.
As the boat landed she jumped out and saw a boy. About her age looking right back at her. His eyes where like her’s almost completely white but with just enough blue to see. His skin also so pale is was almost white. His hair was a mess yet it shined like any star. His cloths where very plain and simple. Two shirts one white the one on top extremely dark blue with a white jacket on top, the pants where also plain white as snow.
Yet to Comet he was the most amazing sight to ever be seen. He thought the same about her. They stared at each other for a long time then finally ran into each other and hugged. Both of them crying not believing they had finally found each other...now all that remains is where Comet’s parents where and what was Tock talking about not to say anything to Note? Find out in 2 Falling Stars!!!!
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