Sucked In! Chapter THREE! (yes 3)
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Yes this is chapter three... as I said, I shall revive this lost fanfiction.
Caelin Sighed.
He looked around the busy BIO-FLUX lab in extreme discomfort. His boss had just told him he had one more chance to make his experiment work or his funding would be cut into one quarter it's previous amount. As he pondered what to do, he watched his friend, Justin, test his Energy Fluxuation Endurance Enhancer on himself. He decided to think back through the history of E-FLUX for a clue as to what to do.
It was the year 1996 when a scientist considered mad by the general science community brought out ideas of something called E-Flux. He basically said it was a power that the human race had sealed off once they did not need it anymore, with the invention of many tools to aid their defence and the continuation of their race. He claimed that the human race as a whole sensed that the end of such a safe world was going to come to an end in 16 years and began creating humans with the ability to use their E-Flux so that they could survive in this new world. He was widely disbelieved and ignored as he disappeared August 15th, 1996. Supposedly on of his experiments had sent him to another world.
It was then that Caelin decided. He would test his experiment on himself and if it worked, it worked, and if it didn't, well, maybe it was for the better that the lab cut his funds. He instantly got to work like a man possessed, firing up all the machines for his experiment at top speed, with the Energy Fluxuation he unconsciously triggered allowing him to practically fly around the lab. He scribbled a quick note, focused the machine's target vortex on himself instead of randomly over the world, and then hit the final key to start the procedure.
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Justin was ecstatic about the success of his latest experiment and looked around the room to find Caelin and tell him the good news, when he saw Caelin flying around his experimental containment center so fast that all he could see was a blur. He saw him briefly stop to scribble a note about something, his hand a blur, then he was suddenly standing in the middle of the room as if in anticipation for something. Justin was shocked for a second, but then started running at top speed towards Caelins ECC with a sense of dread. As he was 10 feet away from the door, there was a giant flash and a BANG from the ECC, and everything around it was blown back what must have been at least 20 feet. Justin saw a cloud of smoke spill out of the ECC just before he fainted.
Well, that's it for this chapter sorry it was short, this was just to jump the lot back into action. each chapter has a link to the last one now.
EDIT: oh yeah and R&R (rate and review)
viewtopic.php?f=14&t=1844&start=0
Yes this is chapter three... as I said, I shall revive this lost fanfiction.
Caelin Sighed.
He looked around the busy BIO-FLUX lab in extreme discomfort. His boss had just told him he had one more chance to make his experiment work or his funding would be cut into one quarter it's previous amount. As he pondered what to do, he watched his friend, Justin, test his Energy Fluxuation Endurance Enhancer on himself. He decided to think back through the history of E-FLUX for a clue as to what to do.
It was the year 1996 when a scientist considered mad by the general science community brought out ideas of something called E-Flux. He basically said it was a power that the human race had sealed off once they did not need it anymore, with the invention of many tools to aid their defence and the continuation of their race. He claimed that the human race as a whole sensed that the end of such a safe world was going to come to an end in 16 years and began creating humans with the ability to use their E-Flux so that they could survive in this new world. He was widely disbelieved and ignored as he disappeared August 15th, 1996. Supposedly on of his experiments had sent him to another world.
It was then that Caelin decided. He would test his experiment on himself and if it worked, it worked, and if it didn't, well, maybe it was for the better that the lab cut his funds. He instantly got to work like a man possessed, firing up all the machines for his experiment at top speed, with the Energy Fluxuation he unconsciously triggered allowing him to practically fly around the lab. He scribbled a quick note, focused the machine's target vortex on himself instead of randomly over the world, and then hit the final key to start the procedure.
***********************************************************
Justin was ecstatic about the success of his latest experiment and looked around the room to find Caelin and tell him the good news, when he saw Caelin flying around his experimental containment center so fast that all he could see was a blur. He saw him briefly stop to scribble a note about something, his hand a blur, then he was suddenly standing in the middle of the room as if in anticipation for something. Justin was shocked for a second, but then started running at top speed towards Caelins ECC with a sense of dread. As he was 10 feet away from the door, there was a giant flash and a BANG from the ECC, and everything around it was blown back what must have been at least 20 feet. Justin saw a cloud of smoke spill out of the ECC just before he fainted.
Well, that's it for this chapter sorry it was short, this was just to jump the lot back into action. each chapter has a link to the last one now.
EDIT: oh yeah and R&R (rate and review)
Re: Sucked In! Chapter THREE! (yes 3)
cool
short but nice 9/10
short but nice 9/10
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Re: Sucked In! Chapter THREE! (yes 3)
OMG the last chapter of Sucked In was like almost 1 year ago -.-
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teehee
that's what I meant by
'I shall revive this lost fanfiction'
that's what I meant by
'I shall revive this lost fanfiction'
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i shall only read it on 1 condition,
am i going to be in it ??
am i going to be in it ??
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playa4life01 wrote:i shall only read it on 1 condition,
am i going to be in it ??
noooooooo, your not
Re: Sucked In! Chapter THREE! (yes 3)
put in a form and maybe.
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jonlin wrote:put in a form and maybe.
when i asked you said no
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dont complain you can too just ask in the thread FOR the story
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-le sigh- i havent been in it since like...chapter one D:
Re: Sucked In! Chapter THREE! (yes 3)
Don't worry, you're in chapter 4. I think. You're canvas, right?
Oh yeah, I'm writing Chapter 4 now.
Oh yeah, I'm writing Chapter 4 now.
Re: Sucked In! Chapter THREE! (yes 3)
no....zaylo was canvas. i was drake
Re: Sucked In! Chapter THREE! (yes 3)
psh you're still in it. and it's up now.
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GASP! im go read it. btw have you read my latest chapter?
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I might have, what's it called again? I think I have, I'm just not sure.
Re: Sucked In! Chapter THREE! (yes 3)
GASP. how could you forget about me? its the ranger of chaos-harbinger of doom part2 ch 6 a.k.a the one with the really long title :p other than that this one was really good too.