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Maple Maiden Project Chapter 3

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 1:32 pm
by Zaylo
MMP3

Pain shot through Zaylo’s head, he had felt magic being cast, the magic in question was destructive, and it hurt his head even processing the power of the attack. As he clutched his head he looked down the hall to see the source of the attack. He saw a girl with witch clothing holding out her hands in front of her, a dazzling rainbow light was in her hands. Though the light was small in size, the ground and walls around the girl begun to crack, from the sheer power of the attack. The girl shouted something, and the rainbow light glowed white and a large laser like attack flew down the hallway, the size of it taking up the entire hallway. “The hell?” Zaylo thought to himself. Zaylo looked at the certain doom coming for him and smiled. “Euforia!” The ground around him turned dark red and A blood red hilt came out of the crimson pool. Zaylo reached down and pulled it out of the ground. As the hilt came out of the ground it showed the large silver blade, which was even bigger then Zaylo himself. The red liquid on the floor reached up and slithered around the bezerker broadsword, turning the shining silver into a deep dark scarlet. The laser flew down the hallway coming closer and closer to Zaylo. He picked up the large sword with one hand and ran towards the laser dragging the sword along the ground. As it dragged along blood would have a trail along the ground following just after Zaylo. “Tierravibora!” The blood on the blade and floor shifted to a gold colour, Zaylo slashed upwards with the blade the tip of the blade touching the surge of magical energy, a large red snake like shape flew out of out of the blade and it smashed into the laser. The scarlet snake smashed into the laser and pierced right through the middle causing the laser to split into two, and in the middle the two fighters saw each other clearly.

“Whoa!” Alice and Marisa stared in disbelief; someone had cut through the Master Spark. Only one other had blocked a Master Spark, it was only really possible to dodge it but to face it straight on and overpower it, is quite amazing. “Say it doesn’t look like a monster at all…” Alice looked down the hall as the boy ran up the hallway. “It a man!”

Zaylo quickly closed the distance between him and Marisa and slashed in a large arc down ward. Marisa quickly leaped to the right and turned to face Zaylo. “Pretty good girl.” Zaylo had a large insane smile on his face. “Why don’t you send another one of those lasers my way, it’s been a long time since I’ve fought something of that power.”

Zaylo slashed behind him and a large blade of an axe, smashed to the ground. Zaylo turned laughing. A small doll in a red dress was holding what was left of the axe. It quickly fled and floated beside Alice. “Two enemies? Not really enough to test my skill but I suppose I could play a little.”

Alice smirked to herself, it could speak. “Well how about a thousand and two?” Glowing strings flew out of the sleeves of Alice, and at the end of each were small little dolls. Each of the little dolls wielded various medieval weaponry. Zaylo stabbed his blade and blood erupted from the ground and formed thousands of rapiers floating around Zaylo. “It won’t make a difference.” Zaylo said pulling his hood over his head and reattaching his mask. The dolls all rushed slashing wildly and Zaylo, hoping to hit him. The rapiers all aligned themselves with another of one the dolls. “Sangrenoble” Zaylo whispered under his breath. The rapier all shot out stabbing into all of the dolls. As the dolls fell to the ground, the rapiers dripped with blood. “My dolls aren’t living they don’t have blood!” Alice said aloud. The blood drops on the floor moved along the ground towards Zaylo, where they climbed up his blade, and made it longer and wider. Zaylo picked up the sword and pointed it at Alice. “My attacks drain magical energy, which I can then change into blood or fire. Both of which are under my control.” Blood flew from the tip of the sword in the shape of the rapiers once again. Alice quickly rolled to the side. The rapiers turned in mid-air and flew at her again. Zaylo ran at Marisa who had until now had been charging energy into a small metal device. Zaylo jumped into the air, the sun creating a silhouette over Marisa as he slashed downward. Marisa held up the metal device and the blade and metal device collided and a large screech went through the halls. Marisa smiled triumphantly. The same rainbowish light stared coming out of the metal device.

“Master Spark!” Marisa shouted. The rainbow coloured laser flew through the air, Zaylo caught at the very front of it. Zaylo flew backwards and smashed into one of the pillars, the laser pushing him further and further into the wall. The wall smashed open and Zaylo was shot out of the station and was being pushed to the very edge of floating island. “Euforia!” The sword glowed an even darker red. Zaylo began pushing with the blade using it as a sort of shield against the laser. Zaylo called the blood from his numerous wounds from the attack as they formed another blade. “Blázon!” This blade was much smaller, much like a dagger. He slashed with the dagger, cutting the Master Spark open causing it to fly to the sides. Marisa, who saw the Spark spit into two, ran at Zaylo, small multicoloured balls floating behind her firing colour matching lasers. Zaylo jumped into the air, and slashed the blade down. The ground erupted with fire and a pillar of flame rushed at Marisa. Marisa hoped onto her broom and flew around the pillar and grabbed the same metal device as before.

"Final Spar-"


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Mizuki
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Re: Maple Maiden Project Chapter 2

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 2:23 pm
by MsMeowzers
I see nothing wrong.
Anyways,FFFFIIIIINNNNAAAALLLL SPPPP-
Lazor is gone.

Re: Maple Maiden Project Chapter 2

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 2:32 pm
by playa4life01
Zaylo wrote:MMP3
The girl shouted shoop da whoop and the rainbow light glowed white and a large laser like attack flew down the hallway, the size of it taking up the entire hallway. “


lol,
anyway, i think you used to many lines explaining the look of the sword and stuff (F3)
you shouldve made it simple

Re: Maple Maiden Project Chapter 2

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 2:45 pm
by MsMeowzers
Don't make fun of Marisa,or you WILL die.
I 1cc'd EOSD on Lunatic with MarisaA.

Re: Maple Maiden Project Chapter 2

Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 2:03 am
by Gatorade
Wow nice zaylo but i thought this was chapter 3? (F3)
The title says chap. 2.

Re: Maple Maiden Project Chapter 2

Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 2:08 pm
by playa4life01
Gatorade wrote:Wow nice zaylo but i thought this was chapter 3? (F3)
The title says chap. 2.


MR. T says
READ THE 1ST SENTENCE FOOL!!!

Re: Maple Maiden Project Chapter 2

Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 10:36 pm
by Zaylo
playa4life01 wrote:
Gatorade wrote:Wow nice zaylo but i thought this was chapter 3? (F3)
The title says chap. 2.


MR. T says
READ THE 1ST SENTENCE FOOL!!!

I edited it. So be quiet.

Re: Maple Maiden Project Chapter 2

Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 12:34 pm
by EmberSparks
o.O
Big blob of text.
But it rocks!

Re: Maple Maiden Project Chapter 2

Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 7:25 pm
by playa4life01
Zaylo wrote:
playa4life01 wrote:
Gatorade wrote:Wow nice zaylo but i thought this was chapter 3? (F3)
The title says chap. 2.


MR. T says
READ THE 1ST SENTENCE FOOL!!!

I edited it. So be quiet.


it doesnt say edited by zaylo
so dont you be hating on my blue face playa