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New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:37 am
by jonlin
I am starting a new fanfic and this is a preview.
whether itcontinues or not depends on the reviews.
it will be a short story, not continued forever. at least I think so 0.o
suggestions for title please!


Untitled fanfic Preview

Jonny had just gotten home from school and couldn't wait to try out the new game his friends had told him about. It was called MapleStory and he had decided to become a pirate at first as they were apparently fun. He logged onto his computer, ignored a reminder to renew his virus protection and started up his Internet explorer. Once he had started Internet explorer up he typed in 'Mapleglobal.com' and clicked on create new account. He filled in his info, then clicked on the download button. He started up the download, saw it would take 2 hours and sighed.

"Jonathon! Do your homework!" Jonny's mom called up to jonny in his room.

"I don't have any!" yelled Jonny, annoyed. He then decided to check out a forum for maplestory and learn a little more about it while he waited. After a quick google search he found a website called 'AmpleMaple.com'. He signed up and went on the forums.

TWO HOURS LATER

"Finally, my download is done!" Jonny exclaimed. He opened the installer and quickly installed maplestory. Then he double clicked the new maplestory icon on his desktop to start it up. A window popped up, an auto patcher. Jonny had been told this would happen and had expected it. he clicked on PLAY and waited. Maplestory launched itself and asked him to put in a user and password. He did so and then made up a pin after. Finally he clicked on Bellocanth, his friend's world. He created a new character called T0pPirat3 and customized his hair to brown rebel and his eyes to a leisure look. Then he started with his new character and suddenly his character appeared on a platform next to a cartoon woman. He double clicked on the woman and a window popped up with her picture in the side. Jonny read her info and continued.

Jonny worked his way through the camp to the monsters. He quickly made his character attack and killed the monster. he then continued and finished his quest. finally he made his way out to maple island. He fought his way up to lvl 9 by making his character do quests and kill monsters and then went to the ship in southperry. he got on the ship and admired the open air on the way to victoria island.

Once Jonny got to victoria island he took a quiz to get stuff and then grabbed a taxi to the nautilus. When he got there he met up with Kyrin and became a pirate. He finally equipped his new knucklers and logged off.

Later when he went to sleep he seemed to wake up in a different world, completely fresh. He looked around at himself and with a shock saw he was his new character in - MAPLESTORY!

Sry it's so badly written, I was tired.

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:58 am
by synn90210
its not really that badly written. I personally think a noobs life is better but this is still good

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 6:02 am
by jonlin
no, this is TERRIBLY written man (F3)

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 6:14 am
by synn90210
-sigh- i guess theres no reasoning with you then

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 1:11 am
by jonlin
lol just leave m tomy fantasies if you want. =p

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 7:05 pm
by Zaylo
cool an interesting storyline

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 2:32 am
by jonlin
lol, ty ^^

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 12:46 pm
by chobbilight
you took it from a movie but its still good cuzin the movie the guy was a pokemon and then he made this gang and helped other pokemon (kiss) but keep on i like 2 read it

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 2:28 pm
by Zaylo
0_0 you would know this how?

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:20 pm
by chobbilight
cuz i watch pokemon movies

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 8:19 pm
by jonlin
um sorry I don't watch pokemon movies, I made this up myself. 0.o

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 9:22 pm
by chobbilight
ow but i didn't sat you watch pokeon movies i said this looks like that pokemon movie

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 3:54 am
by jonlin
ok then........ anyways, any real comments?

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 4:03 am
by wazgtg
if u think this is badly written..... idk what to say

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 2:34 pm
by AutoAsh123
This is a good preview one of the best i saw. So who cares its good/bad writing at least u WROTE it and people enjoy it.

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 4:57 pm
by jonlin
well, thanks I guess. I kinda forgot about this @_@ I wonder If I should continue it?

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 7:53 pm
by jonameepsman546
yes continue it's cul!!!

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Tue May 26, 2009 10:50 pm
by poke1024
you should continue with a nobbs life (F3)

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 2:59 am
by jonlin
lol, but I need an idea/motivation for A Noob's Life. (F4)

also, I'm too lazy to write the first chapter of this.

Re: New Fanfic Preview

Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 4:35 am
by poke1024
you kind of follow my moto

i put it as my siggy, so look at it (F5)