G.R.A.V.E Ch 2
Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:58 am
Have I improved? I don't think so X_X
Anyway, here I go........
"Who are you?" asked Hikaru. All he knew was that the vampire in front of him had white hair. That he wore a blood-spattered tuxedo. That he was holding a coconut knife. A blood-stained coconut knife.
That he killed everyone on the train.
The white-haired man chuckled. "Why ask such a question....... when you're about to die?"
Hikaru's grip on his sword tightened. Darn vampire, he thought. Throwing caution to the wind, he charged towards the vampire and swung his blade.
THUNK. The blade had collided with the vampire's knife. The vampire narrowed his eyes. "Touchy, aren't you?" he said, as he kicked Hikaru in the chest. Hikaru found himself thrown to the floor, as helpless as a ragdoll.
The vampire walked towards Hikaru, twirling his dagger as he did so. "Since you're not fighting back, I'll kill you quickly......"
Hikaru looked around for his sword and realised it was on the other side of the train carriage. It was too far away to reach, which meant his death was imminent.
The vampire tossed his sword at Hikaru. Hikaru braced himself. This is it.........
CLANG!!!!!
Hikaru opened his eyes. Someone had protected him with a spear.
The vampire looked shocked. "It- It's you!"
Hikaru stared at the newcomer. He was about 16, with a well-built body. He was wearing a beanie and wielded a Pinaka, a powerful spear.
"What?!"
The vampire recovered quickly from his state of shock. "Ah, it's my baby brother, Draco!" he said, grinning.
"Shut up, brother Shinji. Mom, Dad and our little sister are resting in peace. There's only you left..... don't you wanna join them?" replied the newcomer called Draco, eyes blazing with murderous intent.
The vampire - Shinji - laughed and charged at Draco....
Anyway, here I go........
"Who are you?" asked Hikaru. All he knew was that the vampire in front of him had white hair. That he wore a blood-spattered tuxedo. That he was holding a coconut knife. A blood-stained coconut knife.
That he killed everyone on the train.
The white-haired man chuckled. "Why ask such a question....... when you're about to die?"
Hikaru's grip on his sword tightened. Darn vampire, he thought. Throwing caution to the wind, he charged towards the vampire and swung his blade.
THUNK. The blade had collided with the vampire's knife. The vampire narrowed his eyes. "Touchy, aren't you?" he said, as he kicked Hikaru in the chest. Hikaru found himself thrown to the floor, as helpless as a ragdoll.
The vampire walked towards Hikaru, twirling his dagger as he did so. "Since you're not fighting back, I'll kill you quickly......"
Hikaru looked around for his sword and realised it was on the other side of the train carriage. It was too far away to reach, which meant his death was imminent.
The vampire tossed his sword at Hikaru. Hikaru braced himself. This is it.........
CLANG!!!!!
Hikaru opened his eyes. Someone had protected him with a spear.
The vampire looked shocked. "It- It's you!"
Hikaru stared at the newcomer. He was about 16, with a well-built body. He was wearing a beanie and wielded a Pinaka, a powerful spear.
"What?!"
The vampire recovered quickly from his state of shock. "Ah, it's my baby brother, Draco!" he said, grinning.
"Shut up, brother Shinji. Mom, Dad and our little sister are resting in peace. There's only you left..... don't you wanna join them?" replied the newcomer called Draco, eyes blazing with murderous intent.
The vampire - Shinji - laughed and charged at Draco....
