Maplestory

Hey guys

im just wondering if you guys like what ive been doing with knights of cydonia and was wondering if you guys want me to continue??????
please rate my fan fiction out of 10 right now.
if you want to gimme tips for what i should do next than sure feel free to post
k bye

To give an honest Rating I would say`3/10.
I wouldnt ask you to give up.
but i wouldnt ask you to keep going.

How do you think i can improve...in your eyes, to your standards?

nublet wrote:How do you think i can improve...in your eyes, to your standards?

READ MY GUIDE. Btw 2/10

:,( i thought i was doing pretty good....and btw i read ur guide didnt really help no offence

It didnt work for you
cause You suck.

to improve in my eyes...
Haha.
That's completely different.
Me and Jonlin,Zaylo,
Our rating i believe are
Completely Differant in
everyway possible.
Mostly style.
I would never try to get an
10/10 in someone else's
chart. I would always wanna
get an 10/10 in My chart.


Your story Has
An good flow
and because of that
Amateurs like you,
Would believe
its "Good"
or "Great"
In my chart.
Flow of
words matters the least.
first because its easy
to do,
Second everyone can do it
and third,there is no third :3
But If you were to write an
good FF Flow would be needed,
Your story needs an
Page flipper style.
Meaning you need to
make the Reader want to keep
reading.
Your story's Background.
Its very bad.
And because your story
are so short, Its even More terrible.
The description is no where near Average
but Your grammer is Ok.
You style needs to be unique
Something that only you can write normally
and no one else.
Create your own.

In my chart I have many expectations.
So it is always hard to get an high score.

Oh P.S
"Wait nvm Your flow of words isnt "Good"
Its just ok"
:3

Your poem didn't even rhyme. I haven't read any of your FF, but from those ratings, I don't think I should.

ok uhm leo i know you hate me but can you please help me in how to improve my writing?
i mean you said it was short right? how long do you think it shud be?
becuz my average length is 500-700 words.....how long shud i make it?

nublet wrote:ok uhm leo i know you hate me but can you please help me in how to improve my writing?
i mean you said it was short right? how long do you think it shud be?
becuz my average length is 500-700 words.....how long shud i make it?

2k+

5k+ if you get better

-sigh- what is this twice now? you really havent learned anything from last time have you? 1/10

I'm bad at giving ratings so I won't.

but, there are three major things you can do to make a Fanfic GOOD:

1) Create suspense to keep the reader on the edge of their seat and keep them reading
2) Create a story they enjoy reading so that they want to keep reading to enjoy themself
3) have excellent Flow of words and spelling and grammar

(#3 should ALWAYS be there or people will have a hard time reading your story and won't want to read it again)


now you should start out with an idea you think you can develop a good storyline around. next, Just try writing what the story should be approximately without adding Detail. Finally, divide it into sections and write them out as chapters, with detail this time. this is if you LIKE planning.