Finally Knights of Cydonia Chapter 4!!!!!
Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 3:48 am
Knights of Cydonia Chapter 4
Ok first day of school this shouldn’t be such a problem.
“Ok son your first day of school, how do you feel?” my father said hesitantly as if he’s worried about my first day in this... beautiful building.
I didn’t respond because I was mesmerized by tall building named “Cydonia pawns” apparently this is my new school, I have no idea why I have to do this, I mean I can wield a sword and can swing it around and hit the enemy.....what else would I have to learn?
“Y’know son this was my old school” my father said to me patting my back as him and I were walking down through the pathway of the school.
As my father and I enter the school grounds he begins to babble on about his old days as a pawn like he always does.
As soon as I entered the building a man in a black ceremonial robe came out from behind a desk in the right corner of the secretary office.
“Ah you must be Celion, right?” the man said as he stood tall in a way of elegance and power
“Yes he’s come here to train to be a knight of Cydonia.” My father said interrupting me before I got to speak.
“Ok maybe... ahhhh he can come back tomorrow for a tour around the school and a few tests of strength, will, and skill.”
To be continued....
Note: Hey guys the reason this chapter is much shorter than my previous chapters is I kind of have a writers clog in my mind do to the fact that I recently broke up with my girlfriend and my sister moved back in and then she’s moving out in 5 days, and my brother is in Toronto for the time being. And that’s also the reason why it’s been so long since I’ve written a chapter.
So I’m going to take a rest and tomorrow morning ill work on chapter 5.
p.s. try to comment and rate as much as possible cuz’ like if no one likes Knights of Cydonia than ill just quit. So try to tell me as much as you can if it sucks or if I need some improvement in areas of my fan fic.
Oh and also I know my fan fic has slowly decreasing in facts about maple story but you will see an improvement as I go further in. I am also kind of mind blocked with ideas so please suggest ideas for future chapters k thanks bye
Ok first day of school this shouldn’t be such a problem.
“Ok son your first day of school, how do you feel?” my father said hesitantly as if he’s worried about my first day in this... beautiful building.
I didn’t respond because I was mesmerized by tall building named “Cydonia pawns” apparently this is my new school, I have no idea why I have to do this, I mean I can wield a sword and can swing it around and hit the enemy.....what else would I have to learn?
“Y’know son this was my old school” my father said to me patting my back as him and I were walking down through the pathway of the school.
As my father and I enter the school grounds he begins to babble on about his old days as a pawn like he always does.
As soon as I entered the building a man in a black ceremonial robe came out from behind a desk in the right corner of the secretary office.
“Ah you must be Celion, right?” the man said as he stood tall in a way of elegance and power
“Yes he’s come here to train to be a knight of Cydonia.” My father said interrupting me before I got to speak.
“Ok maybe... ahhhh he can come back tomorrow for a tour around the school and a few tests of strength, will, and skill.”
To be continued....
Note: Hey guys the reason this chapter is much shorter than my previous chapters is I kind of have a writers clog in my mind do to the fact that I recently broke up with my girlfriend and my sister moved back in and then she’s moving out in 5 days, and my brother is in Toronto for the time being. And that’s also the reason why it’s been so long since I’ve written a chapter.
So I’m going to take a rest and tomorrow morning ill work on chapter 5.
p.s. try to comment and rate as much as possible cuz’ like if no one likes Knights of Cydonia than ill just quit. So try to tell me as much as you can if it sucks or if I need some improvement in areas of my fan fic.
Oh and also I know my fan fic has slowly decreasing in facts about maple story but you will see an improvement as I go further in. I am also kind of mind blocked with ideas so please suggest ideas for future chapters k thanks bye
