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Help with fan fic
Posted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 3:56 am
by nublet
hey guys uhmm..
i need help for topic n sh*t for my fan fic you guys can pick..and if i think its ok ill add to it take from edit n stuff until its good...k so you guys tell me what you would like....
Re: Help with fan fic
Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:26 pm
by turanza
hur hur hur jee idk... put me in?
mehh. cant blame me for asking
Re: Help with fan fic
Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 8:40 pm
by bboyz4
I like your fan fictions!Just put quotation marks.
Re: Help with fan fic
Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 5:42 am
by jonlin
sorry about this but I have a few suggestions.
A) if you read my posts on your ch3 then you will see what I said about character's personality.
B) sorry about the not noticing that it was the noble talking, but you need to clarify a few things with speech, like who is talking, and when they are talking. (quotation marks) ("yeah these")
C) a bit of spelling and grammar correction.
once you fix up these three things it should be pretty good, also I would recommend you ask zaylo to delete your first few stories, and then re-Write them starting at chapter 1. sorry about the lack of input till now
