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The day that change his life (Sammy)

Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 12:25 am
by iSerenity3
One Day Sammy set out into the new world
He had his new bag and new clothes that his mother had bought him the other day
He was so happy
today was the day that his class was going on a field trip to Amherst
One his way Sammy met Jackie, and they started to walk together.
They saw many strong warriors defeating snails and shrooms.
Sammy wanted to be just like one of them.
When they got to school every1 was so excited! (cool)
They took the bus and got to Amherst
Theyre tour guide Lucas was so kind
And Jackie told Sammy that he looked like her uncle Stan in Henesys
Crush Crack EeeeK!
Noises were coming from the Dangerous Forest
Suddenly orange mushrooms charged at the class of students
Everyone in Amherst died
except Jackie and Sammy
Sammy was all fine and found Jackie on the floor with only 5 hp left
He took her to the nearest potion shop where she could be healed
Sammy thought in his head that he had to get revenge!
He just had to
seeing Jackie broke his heart
he ran to pio and asked for the relaxer
then he ran to the weapon shop and bought a razor ( this outa teach em a leason he thought)
But first he had to train
and he trained harder than he had trained in his life!
And out of the corner of his eye.
He saw an orange mushroom
and it was angry

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Re: The noob who called someone else a noob

Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 1:57 am
by LeoWu
Omg..
Is this a Fan ficiton?
You call this a FAN FICTION??
ARE YOU JOKING?
OMG
Its too short.
It will get locked.
I dont get it
Why bother posting
These.
My god.

Re: The day that change his life

Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 2:46 am
by iSerenity3
sorry leuweu
i guess i was stupid

i edited it again
can u read and see if u like it

Re: The day that change his life (Sammy)

Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:06 am
by LeoWu
Ugh still not good.
Dont post till you can Write
good fan fictions.
Practice and Read during the summer.

Thanks.
I'm trying to be positive
cause chobbi is complaining about
how i am always negative :P

Re: The day that change his life (Sammy)

Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 8:38 pm
by bboyz4
u r always negative >.>

Re: The day that change his life (Sammy)

Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 10:31 pm
by LeoWu
awww i hate you too :) (F2)