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~War is amazing~

Post by bboyz4 » Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:09 am

Its more like a Journal x.x,so Leo and you other people,shad ur mouth up and dont flame at my E-M-A-G-I-N-A-T-I-O-N,that means you leo and zaylo D:<

-----I've been deployed into battle against the Snakes.I've been thinking negitive the whole time I was there.I thought I would have gotten killed the day when we are fighting each other.But,lucky,I wasn't dead yet because they didn't appear.Until,we heard them outside our campsite.We got ready to fight them while they were charging at us.Then,when we had the chance,we started to shoot them.
-----There wasn't many of us and we were outnumbered.While we were fighting,the rest of the Hope army are trying to reach our campsite to help us in the war.They knew it was us in the campsite because we had the symbol for our army on our green tents.Even though it helped the rest of the Hope army to find us,its makes the enemy's mission to find us a whole lot easier.So, they took caution to capturing our site.
-----There was so much sounds of guns firing and bullets flying through the air,my ears started to hurt.And right before me,I saw my best friend lying right there on the ground,moaning with pain.I called the air force for an e-vac.And right after I was done talking,I went up to start shooting at them again and I got shot in my chest.The pain made me feel like I'm going to die right here on this very spot.
-----I started to lose my consciousness.Then,it was all black.I heard bullets flying through the air,people moaning with pain,guns shooting.After a while,I heard a faint voice,I was trying to figure out who's voice is that.Then,it hits me,it was my commander,John K. Shaun.I was trying to figure out what he was saying to me.I finally know now,he said our campsite is about to be captured.Then,he continued to fight.
-----After a while,I finally gained my consciousness back.As I stood up,I saw the commander,John,my best friend Kevin S. Lee,and another comrade named David H. Howard.I saw many people dead on our camp,20 troops deployed,16 dead,2 injured,me and Kevin,4 of us left alive.So I tried to look at how many more enemies were left and how many died.I guess about 150 troops sent,36 died,7 injured,107 troops left.4 against 107,the chance for us to win is about 27%.Not much.Then,behind them,i saw the rest of the Hope army!268 of them came behind them.
-----Then,the Snakes surrendered.We,the Hope army was proud because we won and I was glad that they came.And glad,that me,my best friend,my commander,and my other comrade lived.We all saw the Helicopter come down into our site.The crew picked up the dead and wounded into the Hospital.I'm glad to be healed at last but that fight,was just the beginning of the war.

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by LeoWu » Wed Jul 22, 2009 7:26 am

Ugh. Not to "Flame"
This "Emagination"
Of your but just seriously.
Stop writing.

but truly i could rate this a 0.2/10
Your last one was 0.1/10
I rate this one higher cause Your
right War is amazing in a way.
But yet terrible.
If you were in the WW2 for the
red army you would regret everything
you said.

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by Zaylo » Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:30 pm

bboyz4 wrote: I was glad that they came.

Uhhhh....

Dude just dont think that because we think it sucks because we said so. Seriously, learn to write better, practise or something bro.

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by bboyz4 » Wed Jul 22, 2009 7:14 pm

Sheez i'll stop lulz...i just need teh posts x.x,since no one is on at night...i post crap like this..ain't fun when ur the only one here at night..i'm posting about only 50s a day.before,i posted about 200 posts on a single day,so mostly,thats why i post crap like this

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by chobbilight » Thu Jul 23, 2009 5:21 pm

bboyz4 wrote:Sheez i'll stop lulz...i just need teh posts x.x,since no one is on at night...i post crap like this..ain't fun when ur the only one here at night..i'm posting about only 50s a day.before,i posted about 200 posts on a single day,so mostly,thats why i post crap like this

annoy your friends

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by bboyz4 » Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:59 pm

o.o,lolz?neva D:< (hothead) (hothead)

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by LeoWu » Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:08 am

Please listen to Chobbi.
Thank you.

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by Zaylo » Fri Jul 24, 2009 12:59 pm

LeoWu wrote:Please listen to Chobbi.
Thank you.

Thats the only time I'd agree to that statement.

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by 1LastBreath » Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:26 pm

lol (F2) (F2)

that was funny

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by bboyz4 » Fri Jul 24, 2009 8:37 pm

Lulz..Funny..why annoy them >.<,playa and zaylo are the only friends i have on ma,now playa left,now Zaylo is my only frewnd nao >.> (eek) (eek)

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by LeoWu » Fri Jul 24, 2009 10:33 pm

Lol hard to belive Zaylo has Friends :P
I think you should consider him as more
of a,... of uhh...
Whats the word...
0.0
W/e

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by Zaylo » Sat Jul 25, 2009 1:14 am

LeoWu wrote:Lol hard to belive Zaylo has Friends :P
I think you should consider him as more
of a,... of uhh...
Whats the word...
0.0
W/e

I'll take that as a compliment

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by bboyz4 » Sat Jul 25, 2009 2:51 am

Zaylo wrote:
LeoWu wrote:Lol hard to belive Zaylo has Friends :P
I think you should consider him as more
of a,... of uhh...
Whats the word...
0.0
W/e

I'll take that as a compliment

Lolz...Zaylo has friends irl,its not he is a loner or something

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by chobbilight » Sun Jul 26, 2009 2:58 am

Zaylo wrote:
LeoWu wrote:Please listen to Chobbi.
Thank you.

Thats the only time I'd agree to that statement.

.....and that we hate pirates

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by bboyz4 » Sun Jul 26, 2009 4:43 am

why are u talking about pirates O.O

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by LeoWu » Sun Jul 26, 2009 5:18 am

bboyz reread his post then you will under
stand what hes saying.

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by Zaylo » Thu Jul 30, 2009 7:08 pm

chobbilight wrote:
Zaylo wrote:
LeoWu wrote:Please listen to Chobbi.
Thank you.

Thats the only time I'd agree to that statement.

.....and that we hate pirates

that to (high five)

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by Duality » Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:35 pm

This is a stupid FF (F7) (F7)

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by chobbilight » Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:57 pm

yay i get a high five from zaylo

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Re: ~War is amazing~

Post by bboyz4 » Fri Jul 31, 2009 2:45 am

no reason why i didnt post more FFs .....

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