First fan fic! Safe

[poke1024]

oh yea, i forgot......

i made my own fan fic check it out

it is about my animation that i abandoned

[synn90210]

omg i cant remember what that line is from! thats gonna bug me all day .

anyway.....amazing dude....just plain amazing. I dont have words to describe the epic

[stng75]

Thx synn
And the line is from a realistic pokémon battle I saw on YouTube

[poke1024]

lol, plz look at my fan fic

why are people ignoring me?

[stng75]

I was the first poster to ur fan fic

[chobbilight]

HOLY HAX?!??!?!
A good fanfic, my eyes must decieve me!0-0

Orginal Storyline: 8
Cliffhanger:7
Grammar/Spelling : 6 ( remember new paragraph after someone talks 2 spaces.)

Overall :7.5

Pretty Pro my friend

3th time being positive.....why dont you be positive 2 me

[stng75]

Me?
O.0
Well I didn't finish all of yours yet

[LeoWu]

Guys Its a prologe, Like wtf.
Anyone can make a prologe a good starter and hook.
Its pretty easy in fact. To be honest,
I wasnt impressed. make a whole chapter
thats this good i will be.
Good luck.

6/10

[stng75]

*gasp*
your the first person that didn't like it
W/e it's the first one I made EVER so dun be gey

[stng75]

I didn't copy pokémon 0.0

[LeoWu]

Thx synn
And the line is from a realistic pokémon battle I saw on YouTube

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Pardon me?

[stng75]

Just drop it seriously

[futurestart]

Just drop it seriously

lol this is a nice dissing competition XD
hilarious.

[stng75]

do you mind ge'ez -.-

[stng75]

Are you saying that he has more posts than me becuase he has been here longer?

[Zaylo]

Are you saying that he has more posts than me becuase he has been here longer?

that sentence made no sense at all...

A. You have more posts the Leo
B. You completly missed what future was saying.
C. You contradicted yourself back there

What future was saying in his mashed up English was,
Dont argue with him, he's written way more fanfics then you and is more experienced.

Now stop arguing and stay ontopic or this will get locked up.

[stng75]

oh I get it know ty zaylo

[LeoWu]

POKEMON OHHH YOUR MY BEST FRIEND IN A WORLD WE MUST DEFEND!!! OHH POKEMON OHHH THE WORDS ARE SOO TRUEE MY LIFE IS YOUR TO TRUE YOU TEACH ME AND I TEACH YOU POOOOKEEE MOOOONNN!!!
BATTLE YEA POKEMON!
i think thats the lyrics 0.0

This is not random its part of the "Realistic Pokemon battle!"

[chobbilight]

.......ok stop......some ppl are fan of pokemon and if that person feels like writing a story about pokemon is maple version then he will do it

i dont know what i said

[jonlin]

wait, what do you mean chobbi?