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A Noob's life Ch 10

Post by jonlin » Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:03 am

A noob's life 10

lol i decided to make this cuz i was bored, sry it's kinda short.
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We were walking back to our tent and talking when Austin suddenly pulled out his bow, turned around at lightning speed and fired an arrow so fast I could barely see him do it. I saw the arrow knock six throwing stars away, then saw Ray jump forward and clash daggers with an unknown man wearing black. Connor and I were just suprised, but Austin just fired 3 more arrows at the mysterious man.

Ray exchanged a few blows with him and then jumped slightly back, saying “Time to test some new skills.” All of a sudden he dissepeared and I heard a clash of metal. Ray reappeared facing the other way, and I saw the unknown assailant fall to his knees. Not one to miss a chance, I rushed forward and knocked him unconscious with my hammer. He fell forward and I caught him.

“What the hell?” said Austin.

“Let's bring him back to our tent for now, just in case.” Connor said. We all agreed and Connor and I picked him up and carried him to our tent. Once we got to our tent, we put him on the floor and chained him to the tent posts. Once he was chained down, Ray poured water on him and woke him up.

“Why did you attack us?” Demanded Connor.

“I can't tell you that-” he started to reply, then stopped and seemed to think about it a little bit.

“What is it?” I asked in a considerably calmer voice than Connor.

“Well, I was going to say I couldn't tell you that but now I realize that I can no longer be punished for disobeying my masters orders if he isn't here, can I?” The man in black continued.

“Obviously, you can't.” Connor said impatiently.

“Where is the one who defeated me?” The man asked.

“Outside, why?” I inquired curiously.

“If possible I would like that man to be my master.” was his reply, in completely serious tones. At this I was suprised and called Ray over. I told him of the man's request and he decided to ask the man a few questions himself.

“Why do you want me to be your master?” was his first question.

“Well, my old master was very mean, and I can no longer go back as I have failed in my task to kill you.” now that reply really suprised me. “Therefore, I need a new master, and you have beaten me with the blade. This proves you are strong enough to be my master.”

“Two more question's” Ray said hesitantly, “Who was your previous master? And What is you're name?”

“I might as well tell you.” the man said, sighing “My name is Leo, and my previous master's name was-” All of a sudden he stopped talking and slumped mysteriously as if he'd been struck unconscious.

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Re: A Noob's life Ch 10

Post by SDValentine » Sat Feb 21, 2009 6:11 am

What inspired you to make a story about a n00b?

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Re: A Noob's life Ch 10

Post by jonlin » Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:06 am

well that is just the title =p
look back on ch P-1 It was my first fanfic so I did something random

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Re: A Noob's life Ch 10

Post by wazgtg » Sun Mar 08, 2009 4:14 am

Nice story, it's really good

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Re: A Noob's life Ch 10

Post by 16061996 » Sun Mar 08, 2009 5:08 am

NIce I like that a noob gets a story *CLAPS* (cool)

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Re: A Noob's life Ch 10

Post by LeoWu » Sun Mar 08, 2009 11:25 pm

Good.

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Re: A Noob's life Ch 10

Post by 16061996 » Mon Mar 09, 2009 2:23 pm

leo how u move yr avater?


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Re: A Noob's life Ch 10

Post by jonlin » Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:11 pm

thanks ~~~
now if only girls were interested in this kinda thing (F3)

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