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[jonlin]

I am starting a new fanfic and this is a preview.
whether itcontinues or not depends on the reviews.
it will be a short story, not continued forever. at least I think so 0.o
suggestions for title please!


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Jonny had just gotten home from school and couldn't wait to try out the new game his friends had told him about. It was called MapleStory and he had decided to become a pirate at first as they were apparently fun. He logged onto his computer, ignored a reminder to renew his virus protection and started up his Internet explorer. Once he had started Internet explorer up he typed in 'Mapleglobal.com' and clicked on create new account. He filled in his info, then clicked on the download button. He started up the download, saw it would take 2 hours and sighed.

"Jonathon! Do your homework!" Jonny's mom called up to jonny in his room.

"I don't have any!" yelled Jonny, annoyed. He then decided to check out a forum for maplestory and learn a little more about it while he waited. After a quick google search he found a website called 'AmpleMaple.com'. He signed up and went on the forums.

TWO HOURS LATER

"Finally, my download is done!" Jonny exclaimed. He opened the installer and quickly installed maplestory. Then he double clicked the new maplestory icon on his desktop to start it up. A window popped up, an auto patcher. Jonny had been told this would happen and had expected it. he clicked on PLAY and waited. Maplestory launched itself and asked him to put in a user and password. He did so and then made up a pin after. Finally he clicked on Bellocanth, his friend's world. He created a new character called T0pPirat3 and customized his hair to brown rebel and his eyes to a leisure look. Then he started with his new character and suddenly his character appeared on a platform next to a cartoon woman. He double clicked on the woman and a window popped up with her picture in the side. Jonny read her info and continued.

Jonny worked his way through the camp to the monsters. He quickly made his character attack and killed the monster. he then continued and finished his quest. finally he made his way out to maple island. He fought his way up to lvl 9 by making his character do quests and kill monsters and then went to the ship in southperry. he got on the ship and admired the open air on the way to victoria island.

Once Jonny got to victoria island he took a quiz to get stuff and then grabbed a taxi to the nautilus. When he got there he met up with Kyrin and became a pirate. He finally equipped his new knucklers and logged off.

Later when he went to sleep he seemed to wake up in a different world, completely fresh. He looked around at himself and with a shock saw he was his new character in - MAPLESTORY!

Sry it's so badly written, I was tired.

[synn90210]

its not really that badly written. I personally think a noobs life is better but this is still good

[jonlin]

no, this is TERRIBLY written man

[synn90210]

-sigh- i guess theres no reasoning with you then

[jonlin]

lol just leave m tomy fantasies if you want. =p

[Zaylo]

cool an interesting storyline

[jonlin]

lol, ty ^^

[chobbilight]

you took it from a movie but its still good cuzin the movie the guy was a pokemon and then he made this gang and helped other pokemon but keep on i like 2 read it

[Zaylo]

0_0 you would know this how?

[chobbilight]

cuz i watch pokemon movies

[jonlin]

um sorry I don't watch pokemon movies, I made this up myself. 0.o

[chobbilight]

ow but i didn't sat you watch pokeon movies i said this looks like that pokemon movie

[jonlin]

ok then........ anyways, any real comments?

[wazgtg]

if u think this is badly written..... idk what to say

[AutoAsh123]

This is a good preview one of the best i saw. So who cares its good/bad writing at least u WROTE it and people enjoy it.

[jonlin]

well, thanks I guess. I kinda forgot about this @_@ I wonder If I should continue it?

[jonameepsman546]

yes continue it's cul!!!

[poke1024]

you should continue with a nobbs life

[jonlin]

lol, but I need an idea/motivation for A Noob's Life.

also, I'm too lazy to write the first chapter of this.

[poke1024]

you kind of follow my moto

i put it as my siggy, so look at it