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Soveliss and Jin rushed in through the darkened colossal doors as they swung shut, "ahahaha, you've made it just in time my old friends!" laughed Brayan as his guards surrounded Soveliss and his Apprentice. Jin smirked as he replied "well, I did make a promise you know, and i don't break promises" Soveliss was about to join in on the conversation, but he was cut short after a large hammer came thrusting downwards above him and was smashed into the ground just after Soveliss leaped backwards out of harms way. "Guards, they just don't know how to die do they? give them a quick lesson on it and don't make a mess" said Brayan while he turned his back to walk out the door. Jin estimated around fourteen guards, and told himself they where all going to be lieing dead on the floor in less then five seconds. He shared this thought with Soveliss, he just smiled and replied "I bet i can kill more." Jin laughed and said back to him, "You're on."
