Vampire's Life,Ch 1

[MsMeowzers]

Critic.
If you choose to do something and people want you to stop,I dont care as long as Im not physically hurting them.

[LeoWu]

Critic.
If you choose to do something and people want you to stop,I dont care as long as Im not physically hurting them.

This is exactly what i mean.
At the Begging it was Your choice to start writing an FF.
We give our Opinion.

People like you who come here and say that.
I believe you should never Post again.
Your an Disgrace to Human existence it self.
You dont have to stop.
Sure. Keep writing.
I Don't Really care.
By posting bad FF
And when people say your bad
And you just keep posting?
Like wtf Is wrong with you?
Are you like mentally Disabled? shows that Your Act is just being
and Sore loser.
Yes I will admit I do Give Criticism so they can build up their
Writing skills.
But what your doing right now is Just Write Lame FF.
Vampires?
In an MS FF website?
Are you Stupid?
Go post it somewhere else.
And i Personally ask you, Zaylo.
To lock her FF up.
Her FF aren't Worth our Reading time.

[MsMeowzers]

Why tyvm.
VAMPIRES IN MAPLE WERE MY IDEA.
Why cant I just keep on writing?
I WILL LEAVE THIS SITE IF ANY MORE CRITISIM COMES TOWARDS ME IN MY FANFICS.

[LeoWu]

Why tyvm.
VAMPIRES IN MAPLE WERE MY IDEA.
Why cant I just keep on writing?
I WILL LEAVE THIS SITE IF ANY MORE CRITISIM COMES TOWARDS ME IN MY FANFICS.

First.
"VAMPIRES IN MAPLE WERE MY IDEA"
Its suppose to be Vampires in Maple Was My idea Or Is my idea.
use proper grammer.
and Im glad you will be leaving this site soon enough.

[jonlin]

I personally Do not mind your fan fictions, but I am a fan of something called constructive criticism, basically you tell people what is wrong with what they are doing and they try to fix it next time.I try not to insult you, just tell you what is wrong and how to fix it... you should not leave, but try doing what I suggested. also, LeoWu, if you do not like her fan fictions then simply do not read them. there is no one forcing you to sit down and read them.

[chobbilight]

Why tyvm.
VAMPIRES IN MAPLE WERE MY IDEA.
Why cant I just keep on writing?
I WILL LEAVE THIS SITE IF ANY MORE CRITISIM COMES TOWARDS ME IN MY FANFICS.

dont leave this site
leave the fanfic section

[synn90210]

Critic.
If you choose to do something and people want you to stop,I dont care as long as Im not physically hurting them.

This is exactly what i mean.
At the Begging it was Your choice to start writing an FF.
We give our Opinion.

People like you who come here and say that.
I believe you should never Post again.
Your an Disgrace to Human existence it self.
You dont have to stop.
Sure. Keep writing.
I Don't Really care.
By posting bad FF
And when people say your bad
And you just keep posting?
Like wtf Is wrong with you?
Are you like mentally Disabled? shows that Your Act is just being
and Sore loser.
Yes I will admit I do Give Criticism so they can build up their
Writing skills.
But what your doing right now is Just Write Lame FF.
Vampires?
In an MS FF website?
Are you Stupid?
Go post it somewhere else.
And i Personally ask you, Zaylo.
To lock her FF up.
Her FF aren't Worth our Reading time.

cool story bro