School writing project...

[synn90210]

lol i know im terrible at horror writing xD

[LeoWu]

My project is due 2 weeks from today.
Lets do an what ever genre
JUST MAKE YOUR BEST HOOK EVER
NO MATTER WHAT GENRE IT IS PLEASE!!1

[jonlin]

He ran. And he ran. And he RAN. that was about all he knew how to do anymore. He could sprint, jog and walk. That was the current extent of his knowledge, other than how to catch a rabbit with his bare hands. He wondered at how good raw rabbit tasted. He had no name. He has no name. One can guess he will probably not have a name, ever. He had no need for one and has never met anyone else that he remembers. Thus, he is himself and every day he runs, hunts and eats. Although no one will likely ever find out, he can run 100 metres in 2 and a half seconds. That is until one day when he meets someone.

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Jemethyle had been so bored with life in the castle that she had run off into the woods. Over time she got extremely lost and when she climbed a tree, she could not see the edge of the forest. As she was lost, she started to lose hope and as such, started yelling. She yelled loud and hard, soft and quiet, Loud and soft and hard and quiet. If Jemethyle was good at one thing, it was yelling. As she was in the middle of yelling, "HELP! I'M LOST IN THIS FOREST", All of a sudden she saw a blur rush past. The blur scared her. It was alive. It was fun. It was everything she was raised to hate. And if she had seen correctly, it was a boy.



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My general plan for this story goes as follows:
Jemethyle and 'he' meet.
Jemethyle scared at first but calms down
Get along
'He' gets named ethelyn
Ethelyn follows 'Jemmy' and learns a lot
Turns out they live in Skaduth, a world where 95% of population is female, and they are in an equivalent to our medieval age.

Will finish making up plot tommorow, sorry I am really tired.

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Read and rate my hook

[nublet]

"AHHHH!!!!!"
I wake up to the screams of men and women behind solid concrete walls with dried blood splattered and smudged across.
I try to get up from the flat, stiff matress laying on the floor of this creepy room but I am held back by black leather attatched to the black banners of the bed.
I try to focus as much as i can on my thoughts and nothing else until i hear the turning of a knob to a door followed by an out of place click.
*step...step...step*
I hear a silhouette of a man come out of the door directly infront of me saying:
"time for lunch"
"who are you" I replied in a shaky voice as if I've forgotten how to speak

"your worst nightmare!"

k that was a shitty try but whatever

[LeoWu]

Jolin did you copy parts of that from books and animes
i know you did.

[jonlin]

He ran. And he ran. And he RAN. that was about all he knew how to do anymore. He could sprint, jog and walk. That was the current extent of his knowledge, other than how to catch a rabbit with his bare hands. He wondered at how good raw rabbit tasted. He had no name. He has no name. One can guess he will probably not have a name, ever. He had no need for one and has never met anyone else that he remembers. Thus, he is himself and every day he runs, hunts and eats. Although no one will likely ever find out, he can run 100 metres in 2 and a half seconds. That is until one day when he meets someone.

**********

Jemethyle had been so bored with life in the castle that she had run off into the woods. Over time she got extremely lost and when she climbed a tree, she could not see the edge of the forest. As she was lost, she started to lose hope and as such, started yelling. She yelled loud and hard, soft and quiet, Loud and soft and hard and quiet. If Jemethyle was good at one thing, it was yelling. As she was in the middle of yelling, "HELP! I'M LOST IN THIS FOREST", All of a sudden she saw a blur rush past. The blur scared her. It was alive. It was fun. It was everything she was raised to hate. And if she had seen correctly, it was a boy.



****************************** SPOILER!***SPOILER!***SPOILER!*************************************

My general plan for this story goes as follows:
Jemethyle and 'he' meet.
Jemethyle scared at first but calms down
Get along
'He' gets named ethelyn
Ethelyn follows 'Jemmy' and learns a lot
Turns out they live in Skaduth, a world where 95% of population is female, and they are in an equivalent to our medieval age.

Will finish making up plot tommorow, sorry I am really tired.

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Read and rate my hook

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After this he is Met with surprise in a city
Turns out he is only 100th guy there
He gets swarmed
seperated from 'Jemmy'
Ends up pretending to be girl and sneaking around city
Ethelyn Discovers cruelty towards girls, unlike how he was treated upon arrival
uncovers himself as boy
Is made part of elite Male group which is composed of all the guys
Is made part of the even more elite Defendants, has 10 guys (including him) and 100 girls
Defends Male group against the Raiding from other cities
is made leader
Leads Males to escape.
Form own city
Males flock to join them
city population is kept at approximately 50% girls 50% guys
World Gender Inbalance balances

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well that is my story. oh and I did NOT take it from somewhere Leo

[LeoWu]

Girl bravo.
Its the same story line as yours

[jonlin]

0.o ummm may i ask.... what is girl bravo?

[stng75]

ooooo i got one~~!!!

i went home one day and all my cookies were gooooooooone!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
EEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKK

its very terrifying =(

[chobbilight]

ooooo i got one~~!!!

i went home one day and all my cookies were gooooooooone!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
EEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKK

its very terrifying =(

@stng: srry i was hungry

@leowu: your already done right?