Finally Knights of Cydonia Chapter 4!!!!!

[nublet]

Knights of Cydonia Chapter 4

Ok first day of school this shouldn’t be such a problem.
“Ok son your first day of school, how do you feel?” my father said hesitantly as if he’s worried about my first day in this... beautiful building.

I didn’t respond because I was mesmerized by tall building named “Cydonia pawns” apparently this is my new school, I have no idea why I have to do this, I mean I can wield a sword and can swing it around and hit the enemy.....what else would I have to learn?

“Y’know son this was my old school” my father said to me patting my back as him and I were walking down through the pathway of the school.

As my father and I enter the school grounds he begins to babble on about his old days as a pawn like he always does.
As soon as I entered the building a man in a black ceremonial robe came out from behind a desk in the right corner of the secretary office.

“Ah you must be Celion, right?” the man said as he stood tall in a way of elegance and power

“Yes he’s come here to train to be a knight of Cydonia.” My father said interrupting me before I got to speak.

“Ok maybe... ahhhh he can come back tomorrow for a tour around the school and a few tests of strength, will, and skill.”

To be continued....

Note: Hey guys the reason this chapter is much shorter than my previous chapters is I kind of have a writers clog in my mind do to the fact that I recently broke up with my girlfriend and my sister moved back in and then she’s moving out in 5 days, and my brother is in Toronto for the time being. And that’s also the reason why it’s been so long since I’ve written a chapter.
So I’m going to take a rest and tomorrow morning ill work on chapter 5.

p.s. try to comment and rate as much as possible cuz’ like if no one likes Knights of Cydonia than ill just quit. So try to tell me as much as you can if it sucks or if I need some improvement in areas of my fan fic.

Oh and also I know my fan fic has slowly decreasing in facts about maple story but you will see an improvement as I go further in. I am also kind of mind blocked with ideas so please suggest ideas for future chapters k thanks bye

[synn90210]

hmmm.....its funny. i liked this much more when this was a song by muse

[nublet]

Song????????? what song?

[synn90210]

look up the song knights of cydonia by the band muse if you have any taste in music (or played guitar hero 3) then you should know it

[chobbilight]

if this 1 gonna get close i suggest yuo stop writing cause the other 3 parts were closet
hehe
kinda funny you got back and 3 ff's been closet already

[nublet]

he closed cuz i didnt use quotation marks but this time i did...

[LeoWu]

its still nothing to be proud of.
2/10

[nublet]

yknow leo you seriously know how to piss a guy off.... the reason its short is cuz i dun have micro word i use my parents pc and since its theres i get like maybe 1 .5 hours on it so i dont have much time to concentrate ok....and if u dont like it just stop reading it...seriously...... gawd no offence or anything but please try to be not such a rude prick...no offence...

[jonlin]

what browser do you use? I'm not sure about other browsers but my browser has a spellchecker built in 0.o

[LeoWu]

yknow leo you seriously know how to piss a guy off.... the reason its short is cuz i dun have micro word i use my parents pc and since its theres i get like maybe 1 .5 hours on it so i dont have much time to concentrate ok....and if u dont like it just stop reading it...seriously...... gawd no offence or anything but please try to be not such a rude prick...no offence...

XD it takes you 1.5 hours to write that Piece of Crap?
Hahaha
Hilarious.
Dude You don't need Microsoft word.
I don't even use it dude.
I use my eyes to edit it.
O_O
And Pfft.
Calling me and Prick?
Are you serious?
Dude Look,
Im sorry you Suck so bad
Im sorry that you get so
sad cause you suck
But Im sorry that I dont like
Bad FF.
IF your the one telling us to
Rate It, Then expect something.
Dont act like an idoit and
Hope all your ratings will be
"Great".
I gave my honest answer,
And your being rude back,
So Your the Prick my friend.
Your the dum one.
and you suck.
Just admit it.

(and i hope you stop)

[Zaylo]

yknow leo you seriously know how to piss a guy off.... the reason its short is cuz i dun have micro word i use my parents pc and since its theres i get like maybe 1 .5 hours on it so i dont have much time to concentrate ok....and if u dont like it just stop reading it...seriously...... gawd no offence or anything but please try to be not such a rude prick...no offence...

dont write if you dont have time

[poke1024]

lol, there goes zaylo again

[EmberSparks]

eh this one wasnt clozed dwn....