Sucked in! Chapter One

[jonlin]

Sucked in! is my new fanfic and thanks to poke for title.
btw sry if this is more of an intro if anything, and if it's short, and I was kinda trying a new type of writing... so just sry if it sux.

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"Woah!" was the first thing to come into my head. Then I realized that there was a mushroom behind me and I instantly jammed my right hand - complete with glowing knuckles - into the mushroom's gut. My fist went right through the mushroom and I realized that I had been surrounded when I was being amazed at what had just happened. I quickly brought my knuckles in front of my face, ready to fight. I charged one side of the monster ring and did a backflip while kicking them. some dissolved again and I dashed through the opening. I ran as fast as I could, no even faster and then they stopped chasing me.

I looked around to find myself in an area with many other characters running around or just talking, and a bunch of mushroom shaped buildings. I must be in henesys! then I set off to the other side of town where I heard there was a good place to train.

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Drake was amazed as he looked around at the figures and buildings around him. One minute ago he had been hefting his pillow at home, and now he was holding this wooden stick that was curved like a sword in his hands in what looked like the new game he had started to play today. He decided to go train again and get stronger, just to pass the time. He went over to just outside of town where there were a bunch of moving stumps and freaky pigs and started swinging his glowing stick. The monsters simply dissolved after he hit them, and he got into the hang of it. After a little while, a sword appeared where one of the dissolved stumps was and Drake picked it up. He already felt more powerful and discarded his old stick for this new weapon.

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Canvas slowly stood up from in front of the slowly dissolving form that could have once been either a giant blue wyvern or some giant dragon like creature. There was an evil red glint in his eyes as his shortish hair blew in the wind.

[LeoWu]

... uhh
its ok. :)
i like noobs life better.
Way better.

[jonlin]

sry I wrote it at like 1 in the morning TT.TT so, sry if it sux

[chobbilight]

noobs life is better

[jonlin]

yes, stop comparing it to a Noob's life >.<
I somehow always get motivation for this story at like 1 am ok?