Maple Maiden Project Chapter 1

[poke1024]

zaylo zaylo zaylo

i have to say, this wasnt as good as i expected...

IT WAS FREAKIN BETTER THAN I EXPECTED

i can see where you are going with this, and i give it a 8/10

and be sure to read my fan fic please zaylo, u havnt read my newest chapter

[mudgie911]

Ya know that the only reason that i go on this site is because of your fan fics? I love reading your writing style. You've got the perfect balance between description and action. But it looks like your struggling with the hardest part of authorizing , finishing a project. What is this, your fifth "series"? See if you can finish this one.
P.S. I actually really liked 777 (chapter 1 was great)

[MsMeowzers]

Hurry up with chapter 2 already.
Reimu is introduced I guess.

[Zaylo]

Hurry up with chapter 2 already.
Reimu is introduced I guess.

wrong. it'll be up today.

[MsMeowzers]

I know I proof read,but I'm going to predict this-
MARISA AND ALICE HEAD TO THE ISLAND,AND THEY ENTER THE HUMAN WORLD.Then Marisa uses Master Spark and kills everyone.:3