Maple Maiden Project 2

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Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby Zaylo » Fri Jan 08, 2010 6:14 pm

MMP2

Zaylo walked forward, to see if it was real. The trees, whose green pure colour had refreshed a wary traveller, had been reduced to white, the grass where tired warriors would relax and tell stories of their fierce battles, had turned to a dull gray.

“How did this happen?” Monty asked looking at the town; he bent down and touched the grass, to see it disappear into nothingness. Pepsi walked into the town looking at all of the colours now gone, as if colour had never existed.

Pepsi frowned as he noticed that things were slowly starting to disappear. “It seems that substance is breaking down… but not to be destroyed.”

Zaylo pulled down his hood to reveal his spiky black hair and coal black eyes. He reached up and tore of his mask as well. They were not used as mere accessories to make him look mysterious, he could care less about how he looked, and their true use was to restrict his very sensitive reactions to types of magic. He had the ability to tell how magic was used and what its purpose was, if the lands of Maple had been cursed by some sort of dark magic, he’d find out.

“Your right Pepsi… not destroyed but…”

Gensokyo; Forest of Magic

“Alice!” A girl in black clothing was knocking or more accurately smashing the door of a house. “Something amazing has happened!” Alice dazedly opened her front door to be greeted with the extremely joyful face of her friend Marisa Kirisame. Alice was wearing her normal dress which was blue and pink in colour. Alice’s face was reasonably attractive and had green eyes that seemed to offset her blonde shoulder length hair. However Marisa looked like a storybook definition of a witch, even having an extremely large and pointy black hat that covered her considerably long blonde hair.

Alice groaned “What is it now Marisa?”

Marisa gave her one of her legendary smirks, and pointed to the sky. Among the clouds was a new sight, what seemed to be an island floated, its shadow covering Alice’s house.
Marisa turned and looked up to the sky as well. “There’s obviously going to be valuable stuff there, so we should get there before any unwanted thieves show up!” Alice sighed, how was what Marisa going to do any different? She thought to herself. Marisa sat on her broom and flew straight up to the island, knowing that Alice would follow.

Gensokyo; Mysterious Floating Island

Marisa jumped off her broom and landed in a sort of large brightly coloured hallway. “Wow this place is beautiful!” Alice was looking around, the architecture was like nothing in Gensokyo. As they walked down the hallway there seemed to be a large pillar just in them middle of the hallway, for seemingly no reason. There were semicircle holes around it, and a small metal device was inside, with a bunch of numbers on little buttons. Small little pieces of paper were inside. Alice took one and read it aloud. “Orbis Station to Victoria Island.”


Maple; Sleepwood Town

“Transported” Zaylo grimly.

As if on cue white tentacles rose from the ground and began to rip things of the buildings, making them turn to white by mere them on touch.

“Seems these things increase the effect of what’s happening.” Monty pulled out a blue and black revolver and began firing at the tentacles; each shot sounded a gunshot louder then anything before, like the roar of thunder. Blue lines flew through the air, as the bullets hit the tentacles; lighting bursts flew from each hit. The tentacle seems to recoil backward but sunk back into the white hole in the ground. Holes opened up everywhere around the 3 warriors and hundreds of tentacles flew up and grabbed their ankles and arms. The last thing Pepsi saw before he blacked out was that his entire arm had turned white.

????; Orbis

Zaylo rose to one knee and looked around. Where was he? He reached one hand to his face, it felt as if he had just smashed into a wall. As his daze began to fade he reconized his surrondings. It’s Orbis station. He got up and walked down a large hallway. Gillian had been right, Orbis had suffered the fate of the discolouration… but the colours were bright, bright then they had even been before, just what was going on…

Gensokyo; Mysterious Floating Island

Marisa quickly ducked behind one of the pillars. She had seen a monster coming up the hallway. “Marisa? What is it?” Alice hadn’t notice the monster coming up the hallway. Marisa pulled Alice behind the pillar and put a finger to her lips singling to be quiet. Whatever this monster was, it was powerful. “Alice there’s something around the corner and it’s evil. I’ll take it out in one blast!” Marisa turned the corner and pointed her hands in front of her charging some type of magic.

“Wait Marisa what if it isn-“

“Master SPARK!”


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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby MsMeowzers » Sat Jan 09, 2010 12:43 am

A Marisa Kirisame and Alice Margatroid appeared!

What will people of the human world do?

Had to do that,anyways,good job.

I would of done Marisa and Patchy though.

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby Zaylo » Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:07 am

MsMeowzers wrote:A Marisa Kirisame and Alice Margatroid appeared!

What will people of the human world do?

Had to do that,anyways,good job.

I would of done Marisa and Patchy though.

Patchy doesnt leave the mansion often however and Alice is Marisa's neighbour.

However Patch will show up later on i assure you.

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby MsMeowzers » Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:09 am

No,Marisa tries to distract Patch while she tries to steal a book,then Patch asks about the island.

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby Zaylo » Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:20 am

Sorry too late now, plus Tsunderes > Bookworms.

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby chobbilight » Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:23 am

its awesome it only missing 1 imprtant thing

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby MsMeowzers » Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:24 am

It better not be you,Chobbi.

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby chobbilight » Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:32 am

MsMeowzers wrote:It better not be you,Chobbi.

why does every1 kill the joke? (F3)
ill see you in court for murder

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby MsMeowzers » Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:42 am

Shiki-sama will be my judge,and she is my boss.
OWNED.She is a Yama (Look it up)

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby Zaylo » Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:55 am

MsMeowzers wrote:Shiki-sama will be my judge,and she is my boss.
OWNED.She is a Yama (Look it up)

Lets keep on topic shall we?

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby Dracoplasm » Sat Jan 09, 2010 2:04 am

Omfg i'm not in it again... XD so Zaylo when am i gonna be in it?

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby chobbilight » Sat Jan 09, 2010 2:07 am

Dracoplasm wrote:Omfg i'm not in it again... XD so Zaylo when am i gonna be in it?

... i aksed first
no i said it first

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby MsMeowzers » Sat Jan 09, 2010 4:35 am

Stop worrying.Most of us are waiting too.

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby Dracoplasm » Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:06 am

lol ok =D\

Waiting... Waiting....

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby pvtsharp » Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:17 am

MsMeowzers wrote:Shiki-sama will be my judge,and she is my boss.
OWNED.She is a Yama (Look it up)


Yama in okami the game is the final boss.
Ruler of darkness "Yama".

*on topic* next chapter pl0x

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby Gatorade » Sat Jan 09, 2010 8:04 pm

that was...awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (skygar9-5)
when is chap 3 coming out
i wanna read chap 3 and be in it (skygar9-3)

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby playa4life01 » Sun Jan 10, 2010 2:50 pm

Zaylo wrote:
MsMeowzers wrote:A Marisa Kirisame and Alice Margatroid appeared!

What will people of the human world do?

Had to do that,anyways,good job.

I would of done Marisa and Patchy though.

Patchy doesnt leave the mansion often however and Alice is Marisa's neighbour.

However Patch will show up later on i assure you.


corkscrew patchy the pirate xP
when are we gonna be in it, all the mods are in it except for us =(

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby MsMeowzers » Sun Jan 10, 2010 2:54 pm

playa4life01 wrote:
Zaylo wrote:
MsMeowzers wrote:A Marisa Kirisame and Alice Margatroid appeared!

What will people of the human world do?

Had to do that,anyways,good job.

I would of done Marisa and Patchy though.

Patchy doesnt leave the mansion often however and Alice is Marisa's neighbour.

However Patch will show up later on i assure you.


corkscrew patchy the pirate xP
when are we gonna be in it, all the mods are in it except for us =(

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby playa4life01 » Sun Jan 10, 2010 2:55 pm

so hes like the friend who knows alot of stuff ??

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Re: Maple Maiden Project 2

Postby MsMeowzers » Sun Jan 10, 2010 2:57 pm

Everyone in Touhou is a girl.
So everyone with strange names are touhou girls.


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