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A Failure of a Thief Prt 1

Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 11:38 am
by Riyuji
Okay this was a fail but w/e lol

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Re: A Failure of a Thief Prt 1

Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 12:44 am
by playa4life01
it kinda sux,
there is no plot line.
no explaining who the characters are, where is your pilot or cover or intro thingies!! (F6)