SacredMatrix wrote:One, work on your grammar. 2nd, when the Tsuna says, oops wrong transform, why is the dying will flame in front of the chat bubble?
The fight scene was just unnecessary. Also, when Dfuzz gives bob the weapon thing, how does Bob get a bandana, and Dfuzz loses his headphones?
The panels are too big also. On the 1st four panels, you show way way way way way way way too much land. You should have left it show little land. Align your comics properly, also all the way at the bottom of the comics, it shows just some random stuff on who the people are? What is that? Just say it in the topic, you don't have to say it in the comic.
I give it 3/10.
Off topic: When the Tsuna uses the flames from his hands when fighting Bob and Dfuzz, he uses the dying will flame. The dying will flame is just supposed to be on his head, not anywhere else.
hes a noob hes suspose to have bad grammar.
wtf have you even seen past episode 1 of hitman reborn thats the dyeing will
he dosent use that as much as the hyper dyeing will
and second of all he has to have bad grammar hes a noob
and i switched the headphones with the bandana because i didnt like the the headphones looked on bob
kthnxbai~Kimariu
