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Triple Seven Chapter 4

Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 4:12 pm
by Zaylo
Triple Seven Chapter 4

They walked through the forest. The light from the sun far above being stopped by the green alcove of nature from above. “So who’s this informant?” Alice asked as they raced through the maze of wild-life. “He’s my brother” Cavas said.

“What’s he like?”

“He lives by gambling with money”

“How old is he?”

“Same as me”

“Think he’ll give us the info?”

“Not for free, no.”

The City of Kerning. Some beggars and black market salesmen lined the street. Ripped off wanted posters hung on some of the walls of building as well as newly posted ones. Some men walked into a local bar, others went into the barber’s shop and others walked in and out with the city’s crowd. Music could be heard from a local club. Alice hadn’t been to Kerning City many times before. Cavas however had been here more than he had ever been at Perion. He entered the local weapon shop. A group of low levelled rogues were making a purchase by the counter. Cavas approached the counter, smiling. The cashier got up and stepped around the counter.

“Cavas! Good to see you again!” The cashier said laughing.

“You too Manny” said Cavas.

Manny was a middle aged man, with blond hair hidden behind a large white bandana. He wore a large black eye patch that covered his right eye. He looked like a rough character but his smile showed he cared.

“So,” Manny started “Here to pick up your gun?”

“Well its not what I came here for but sure.”

Manny turned around and open a clear glass case with a black pistol in it. “So what did you come here for?”

“I’m looking for my brother, he probably moved his base somewhere”

The black pistol flew through the air, Cavas caught it and fired in one smooth motion. The bullet flew straight ahead and smashed into the dartboard, behind Manny’s desk.

“Nice shot” Manny said looking at the billboard, a sizzling hole in the dead center. “I’ll tell you but it’ll cost you” he continued

“How much?”

“The price for that limited edition mint condition Dartboard!”

Henesys: The rage of battle was in the air. Athena fired 4 arrows, each glowing a bright yellow. The man disappeared, dodging the arrows. “You’re too slow” a cold voice said, inches from Athena’s face, a sharp kick smashed into Athena’s stomach, sending her flying backward. She recovered in mid air and fired another set of yellow arrows. The man ran straight at the arrows. At the last second he ran straight threw the arrows. Suddenly the man vanished, just before impact. Athena blinked, “Were did he go?” A sharp jolt of pain went through her body; her head rang like a bell. She began to fall downwards, plummeting through the air. She was drifting into sub-conscious when the man appeared once more , punching her in the stomach. She smashed into the ground, her bow bounced a couple of meters away from her, to far to reach. The man grabbed her by the neck, his grip as powerful as a Balrog. One sharp punch hit her in the stomach, causing blood to fly from her mouth. The man threw Athena behind him and drew his two pistols again. “I’ll ask you again, were is the Nitro katana?” The man said, twirling the two pistols.


Cavas and Alice walked toward a bar on the edge of town. A large man stood on guard. Loud music sounded from the inside. Cavas walked towards the door, ignoring the large man. The man stepped in the way, trying to intimidate Cavas. “Name?” The guard said looking at a clipboard. Cavas looked at the board for a second.

“Oh yeah here’s my name.” Cavas pointed at Jim Fisher on the clipboard. The guard frowned.

“Jim came in 20 minutes ago he’s 34 years old. You better tell me why you want in little boy.”

Suddenly a voice sounded in the air. “Oh sorry my actual name is BOOMHEADSHOT!” Navaja drew it’s self from the sheath and smashed its blunt edge over the guards skull. The guard fell to the ground, unconscious, others in line didn’t react, here things like that were to be expected.

Cavas and Alice and the building, inside there was a large risen square. Like a wrestling ring except without the ropes. Two men fought in the middle, a crowd cheered at each blow. On a balcony two twin girls sat on each side of a man with wild black hair in a black coat and white pants. The man was smiling. “And there’s a knock out for Kerpail making that 30 wins in a row! For those of you who bet on him collect your earnings at the betting table!”

“Wow these guys look really strong!” Alice laughed

“Your honestly the first girl I’ve seen who actually enjoys free for all fighting like this.”

“Hey brother!” A man in a black coat walked over to him, with his two “secretaries” behind him.

“31 Wins for Kerpail!” the voice sounded over the cheering.

“So how can I help you brother, I’m sure you didn’t come to just say hello” the man said.

“Falkor I need info” Cavas said waving a bag of mesos. Falkor grabbed the bag and looked inside.

“How about a bet brother?” Falkor grinned mischievously

“Terms?”

“2 fights you and your little friend there fight my two greatest warriors and if you win both then il give you the info at a discount. But if you lose you pay me 500% interest.”

“How much money would it cost us normally?” Alice asked.

‘”A little over 100 billion mesos.”

“That’s 500 billion if we lose!”

“I’m guessing you have enough so if you cant pay it off the girl stays here and works for me until it’s payed off.”

“Isn’t that slavery?”

“Not my problem if you cant pay it off!”

“Fine deal”


“Now a new never before seen challenger, please welcome Alice!” Alice walked onto the square smiling, of course no one clapped, they expected her to be killed!

“ Now meet the master himself with 40 straight wins, Kerpail!”

A boy with spiky brown hair and red clothing stepped onto the square. He had a red coat on with a white
t-shirt underneath. He had red track pants on and they were complimented with his dark red boxing gloves.
“A girl? I’m fighting a girl?!?” Kerpail was stuck between disbelieve and hysterics.

Alice was used to this behaviour, spending two years in a nearly all boy’s nitro school will teach you something.

The announcer said something and Alice didn’t care she focused solely on her opponent. Her eyes changed from her sincere light blue to a fierce dark red. Suddenly Kerpail moved in, like a blur. His hand shot up, focusing for a single punch knock out. Alice swung her hand to the side, knocking Kerpail’s hand to the side. Her knee shot up, hitting him in the chin. He stumbled backward, clutching his face. He smirked and stood straight up. He spat some blood onto the floor and readied his hands in front of him. His eyes changed from a dark black to a fierce red. Alice put her hands in front of her, wrists limp. Kerpail jumped forward with a quick punch, Alice spun to the right and at extreme speed, did a right straight. Kerpail caught the first and turned around. He put her arm over his shoulder and flipped her. Alice flew through the air and hit the ground.

“Judo and boxing?” Alice said slowly getting up from the ground. Kerpail smirked and put his hands palm down in front of him. The crowd was silent; tension had that affect on others. Alice ran at Kerpail, she placed her hand on the ground and spun her legs in a sweep kick, targeting the back of Kerpail’s legs. Kerpail jumped backwards, and put his right leg high in the air. The leg flew downwards at lightning speeds. Alice put her legs into the air and pushed with her hands and back flipped out of the way. Kerpail’s foot hit the ground, the power created a huge crater in the ground. Alice ran forward and jumped into the air, executing a flying kick. Kerpail caught the kick and began spinning her around by the leg. Alice’s second leg kicked out and hit Kerpail in the face. Kerpail stumbled backward and dropped Alice. They both got up and readied them selves. The crowd shouted. This was going to be one heck of a fight.

Re: Triple Seven Chapter 4

Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 8:41 pm
by jonlin
very good, but did you have to leave it off there? it was just getting interesting.

Also, is it just me or is you writing a little bit worse right now?

Re: Triple Seven Chapter 4

Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:09 pm
by LeoWu
No offense Zaylo but i kinda agree with Jonlin 0.0 Yes Jonlin i think his writing is getting worse but not that much hes still very good

Re: Triple Seven Chapter 4

Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 11:13 pm
by synn90210
well crap i guess now its my turn to get a chapter out :p.

awesome as usual zaylo

Re: Triple Seven Chapter 4

Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2009 5:08 am
by Zaylo
Well I was trying a different style out, il move back to my old one.

Re: Triple Seven Chapter 4

Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 2:17 am
by jonlin
it's kinda funny how me and leo noticed it was different and commented right away.

btw navaja knocking out the guard was kinda weird

Re: Triple Seven Chapter 4

Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2009 5:14 am
by Zaylo
Navaja is to be thought as a person

Re: Triple Seven Chapter 4

Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 1:06 am
by jonlin
really? ok then, but what happened to navaja being the nitro katana >.< I am confused.

Re: Triple Seven Chapter 4

Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 11:08 am
by Zaylo
sigh you will find out some other chapter what I mean

Re: Triple Seven Chapter 4

Posted: Tue May 19, 2009 8:01 pm
by mudgie911
Which will be when???