The Tree of Life Chapter 4

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The Tree of Life Chapter 4

Postby Wizit6134 » Fri Nov 26, 2010 2:59 am

-Happy Thanksgiving everyone! Anyway this is the last ert of the intro and in the next chapter the main chars will start coming in. So here it is chapter 4


"I found them!" shouted Lust.

"I'll get them." said Blood chasing after the remaining bandits.

"Ok there's six left." informed Wizit.

"Four now." updated Yonny dropping two bandits to the ground.

"Ok i got those three." said Fuzzi chasing three bandits.

Once Fuzzi caught up with them she cast cold beam to stop their tracks. The bandit's legs got stuck to the emerald colored grass. Then Fuzzi used thunder bolt to knock them out.

"One more," said Fuzzi, "so who is it?"

"Not an ordinary bandit," Wizit mentioned, "it's Berk."

"WAT!" Fuzzi was astonished. "You mean Berk is here?"

"I'll get him!" rushed Lust.

Lust got on his board and skated to Berk. Once he got there he flipped 360 degrees in the air up to down rapidly making a shape of a wheel. He than rolled over Berk leaving him on the ground.

"Ugh. I will get you guys one day." struggled Berk as he went unconcious.

"Well all the bandits are defeated and by the looks of it the fire is gone." said Wizit as he looked around.

So the fire wore off and all the bandits are caught. The only problem now is to find out who did it...



-So tats the opening. Im not going to post for a while cuz i want to put more intensity into it. Anyway later (gatorade-2)

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 4

Postby chobbilight » Fri Nov 26, 2010 1:30 pm

one word for you: laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 4

Postby Wizit6134 » Fri Nov 26, 2010 9:03 pm

r u just angry cuz ur not shown yet (gatorade-2)

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 4

Postby chobbilight » Fri Nov 26, 2010 11:46 pm

Wizit6134 wrote:r u just angry cuz ur not shown yet (gatorade-2)

yep

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 4

Postby Wizit6134 » Sat Nov 27, 2010 12:18 am

WAIT SO THE WHOLE TIME IT WAS CUZ UR NOT IN IT YET (hothead)
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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 4

Postby chobbilight » Sat Nov 27, 2010 1:21 am

Wizit6134 wrote:WAIT SO THE WHOLE TIME IT WAS CUZ UR NOT IN IT YET(hothead)

yep

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 4

Postby Wizit6134 » Thu Dec 02, 2010 3:52 am

no one has posted in the whole fan fic sec since u posted lol (gatorade-2)

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 4

Postby Zaylo » Thu Dec 02, 2010 8:03 pm

Your Joking. Blood?
Thats the most generic name I've ever heard.

Oh oh let me try

Blade
Shield
Cannon
Lance
Paper
Tree
Rock
Elevator
Fire
Wind
Bell
Tick
Ninja

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 4

Postby chobbilight » Fri Dec 03, 2010 12:23 am

Zaylo wrote:Your Joking. Blood?
Thats the most generic name I've ever heard.

Oh oh let me try

Blade
Shield
Cannon
Lance
Paper
Tree
Rock
Elevator
Fire
Wind
Bell
Tick
Ninja

wow you awesomw

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 4

Postby Wizit6134 » Fri Dec 03, 2010 12:38 am

oh i really know someone named Blood. I wanted to put him in the story. All the other tricksters are reall people with their real name. Well some r their nickname

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Re: The Tree of Life Chapter 4

Postby jonlin » Fri Feb 18, 2011 5:30 am

you know I must say that I enjoy the name rock.


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