The Tree of Life Chapter 2
Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:09 am
-Ok so i improved my writing from my last chaper. Anyway so there may be a difference. Anyway(again) so (again to) here it is chapter 2 after the wait tat no one waited for lol. 
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The flames of the emerald green tree grew as people threw water at it.
"We need more water!" shouted a mage, "the tree is going to die!"
...
There stood a gourgeous lady with purple locks of hair and a dress which looked like the color of her hair but bright enough to make it look like the sun is glowing inside her dress. She raised her head enough for people to see her sapphire eyes. She stood up and walked up the the opening in the tree. She looked down passed the flames under her to the young man standing with no fear in his eyes.
"Hey!" she called out, " I'm still stuck in here!"
The man looked up.
"Sorry me lord." said the young man in a ruff tune.
The young man ran up the stairs like a ninja until he landed in the window. He grabbed the women and jumped down.
"How did you know i wasn't one of the members of the Chaos Knights?" asked the man once they got down.
"Because," answered the lady, "your the Grand Trickster."
The man nodded his head to hide the surprise inside him for that the lady knew who he was.
"IT'S THEM!!" shouted a man to the top of his lungs.
A group of rouges and bandits approached the young man and the lady. The young man let go of the lady while taking his cutlass out.
"Whoever they are, we arn't as dumb as the last group that attacked you," said one of the men as he looked as the bodies of the hermits, "we know who you are. With your silver suit and golden hat. You the Grand Trickster, Wizit."
-Yes and i know that the title is stupid and it will attract no one. But its the best title i could think of. *SPOILER* There is really a Tree of Life. Its not a stupid name, but the Tree of Life is really about life.
And yes i am the great GRANDE TRICKSTER(i like to say "grande")
:The flames of the emerald green tree grew as people threw water at it.
"We need more water!" shouted a mage, "the tree is going to die!"
...
There stood a gourgeous lady with purple locks of hair and a dress which looked like the color of her hair but bright enough to make it look like the sun is glowing inside her dress. She raised her head enough for people to see her sapphire eyes. She stood up and walked up the the opening in the tree. She looked down passed the flames under her to the young man standing with no fear in his eyes.
"Hey!" she called out, " I'm still stuck in here!"
The man looked up.
"Sorry me lord." said the young man in a ruff tune.
The young man ran up the stairs like a ninja until he landed in the window. He grabbed the women and jumped down.
"How did you know i wasn't one of the members of the Chaos Knights?" asked the man once they got down.
"Because," answered the lady, "your the Grand Trickster."
The man nodded his head to hide the surprise inside him for that the lady knew who he was.
"IT'S THEM!!" shouted a man to the top of his lungs.
A group of rouges and bandits approached the young man and the lady. The young man let go of the lady while taking his cutlass out.
"Whoever they are, we arn't as dumb as the last group that attacked you," said one of the men as he looked as the bodies of the hermits, "we know who you are. With your silver suit and golden hat. You the Grand Trickster, Wizit."
-Yes and i know that the title is stupid and it will attract no one. But its the best title i could think of. *SPOILER* There is really a Tree of Life. Its not a stupid name, but the Tree of Life is really about life.
And yes i am the great GRANDE TRICKSTER(i like to say "grande")
well i would so yah i did